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Reviewer: refusegirl (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
If you leave me a review, I'll send Emmett over with a condom.
What, just one! not nearly enough.
I just had to say...Whoa this is going great guns, please write more fast. Your evil to keep us hanging like this.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
I only will accept Jasper or Edward with a condom...sorry...but I will leave you a review.
I am enjoying the story, I just am curious how Bella will take Edward not telling her the truth before.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
to even out my useless breasts. I mean breaths = lol
Emmet is so funny
Great story. I like seeing a Edward that isn't so uptight. As I have told you before, a horny Edward is so funny!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Awww, poor Edward. I'm looking forward to more.
Ok review over... send Emmett over!
Reviewer: lexmac (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
I find myself laughing alot at this story, I love the way it is written and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Reviewer: Mariea (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
im confused, so does she figure out hes a vampire..or dead or somthing? y isnt he freaking out...?.......all so weird..but i love it :) its a good story different from the orignal version
Reviewer: new_fan (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
love your story! can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: PheonixAngel1901 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
omg this is one of the best fan fics ive read i like the ones that are like twilight but bella finds out he is a vamp differently.ur story is awsome plz post again i cant wait!!!....TEEHEE!!!! xxxxxxxxxx=D
Reviewer: rannaoja (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
so very funny!!!! you definately have an immense talent for writing !!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
gotta love the interactions between Emmett and Bella, I just love stories where the two of them act like siblings by antogonizing and teasing each other. I can't wait to read Edwards point of view on this chapter, or see how much longer it takes for Bella to figure things out, I get the feeling that it can't be to far away.
I love how strong and independant Bella is in your stories, please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Poor Edward. Though he can't be too surprised can he? He hasn't exactly been honest with her about what he is. It would be terrifying to tell someone you love something like that, but the position he has put her in would be equally disconcerting. I sense angst coming... hope it goes quickly. Your Bella and Edward are too cute together, and I LOVE the way your Bella puts Emmett in his place. kutgw
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Finally a Bella who reacts like a normal person. Poor Eddie, she will get over it soon enough.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Looking forward to the story!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Great chapter. Loved it!
Reviewer: rannaoja (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 - First Taste
Oh so very good!!!!! I laughed so much! thanks for that!!!!
Reviewer: srpowers (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
The condom scence was HANDS DOWN the funniest thing i have read on this site...I choked on the ice cream i was downing be cause it made me laugh out loud!!!! Please keep more of that coming!!!
Author's Response: The mark of true comedy is when you make someone spit or choke on what's in their mouth! Thanks for letting me know. I love making you guys laugh.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Awwww...poor Edward! He needs to spill the beans already, instead of freaking her out like that. And hopefully she won't take it badly! (crosses fingers)
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
oh hurry up it's a like a drug I need more! And I love the confidence Bella has.
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Oh no not a cliff hanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
ahhhh well that absolutely freaking sucks! I hope all works out well for Edward and Bella! Great sense of humor you gave her! I love it!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
ahhhh well that absolutely freaking sucks! I hope all works out well for Edward and Bella! Great sense of humor you gave her! I love it!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Aw, poor Edward. Looks like he's gonna have to come clean sooner rather than later - although that IS the best course of action, even if he wasn't forced into it by her suspicions. Looking forward to THAT conversation, lol, especially since they've already decided to take the relationship plunge, unlike in the books where Bella found out beforehand. Should be interesting!
Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Just when you said "is he even a man" paramore sang " if your a man at all". Lols freaky iPod coinsidence
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
aww Bella's starting to put things together... hopefully she'll get to the 2+2=5 thing soon enough ;)
Reviewer: Starsandsunsets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Great job! This is my favorite chapter so far. I can't wait for the next one...
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