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Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
oh, this is good! i cant wait for the next chapters!!!
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
She could not hear his heart beating, or
hear him breathing. She knows what he is.
Just as I know,that this is a good story.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Oh, wow...I've caught up....um, I like and want more. Don't know what else to say at this point, you have some great one liners and there are moments I burts out laughing, making my children wonder what's up with mommy! Not so patiently awaiting the next installment....
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Very interesting to see this from his POV. I'm looking forward to the big reveal, but take your time - like you said, it's gotta be just right, lol. Edward and Jasper interaction should be quite interesting!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
I am leaving a review, but can I trade in Emmett for Edward? pretty please, how about if I beg?
Another wonderfully written and enjoyable chapter. Very revealing to see the Cullens thoughts and feelings, as overheard by Edward, and also what he thinks about his familys reaction to Bella and her not knowing the truth. I am glad that Edward is lusting after bella just as much aa she is for him, takes me back to when I was seventeen, which is something I just love about this story.
A very humerous and entertaining update, as proven by "useless breasts. I mean breaths." had me rolling on the floor with laughter. But I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, has Bella figured it out? and what will Jasper and Edward talk about? please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Oh, THAT Seymour! Sorry, I didn't get the reference, at first. :-D Now, let's see. I am a bit heartbroken for Edward right now. It took him so long to find Bella and now he fears losing her. Perhaps he should have "manned up" and told her what he is before taking her to meet the fam? I understand the hesitation though. He's afraid he'll lose her as soon as she knows, but now he may have lost her anyway. :-( I love Edward/Bella stories and am very much enjoying this one.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
I might hav said this already but Bella is overreactting.... ya she is. I mean sometimes I can't find my pulse... OMG! i'm a vampire! GASP!
~ B
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Looking forward to more! Who doesn't love an out of control Edward?!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
omg im gonna cry please hurry i must know what happens
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
wow. Please keep going. I might not breath until I read more of this. You don't want me to die, do you?
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
yes yes yes!!!!!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Poor Edward....will Bella forgive him for what? Being a vampire? My heart broke when he thought that!
What a great chapter!
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Love it, and I can't wait to find out what happens so please update soon!
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Hot n' Cold
This is very good. Well written thoughtful. Great characterizations. I am just gonna say it: I almost like this better than SM's
Reviewer: 1Fungirl (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
What an intersting way for her to find out about his secret. I love that she notices the lack of his heartbeat. Of course, I'm heartbroken for him, because he is so worried. But, I know it will work out.
Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
i love it i just hope bella wont freak...i know she'll stay but im worried it'll be a while b4 she does. anyway i love it...now gimme emmet!
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Perchance To Dream
Mmmmmm teenagers thinking about sex. Very good stuff.
Reviewer: ptoricanjewel (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
good chapter! I cant wait to see how it works out
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Poor Edward! He needs comforting...
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Thank you for getting this chapter to us so fast! I really liked how vulnerable you made Edward here. Keep up the good work!
Now, where is Emmmett with my condom? ;)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Hmm...you've got me wondering how she's going to find out...will Jacob slip up and tell her at the beach, or will she spend an afternoon Googling? Or something else? Oh, the suspense!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Uh oh! Bella's starting to freak out. I hope she doesn't dump Edward, that would be bad. And I really really hope he doesn't take off, NM-style in your story...my poor heart couldn't take it!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
hehehe...she is so funny isn't she!?
I hope she can see past it! Poor Edward!
Reviewer: twilightchick11 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
Too sweet. Good job! Continue asap! :)
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Perchance To Dream
Hehehehe, you have some great one liners...thank god I have my own bathroom...not much, but in context, priceless! on to the next chapter...
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