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Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
very good. aww Emmett; loves bella,,as a little sister.
Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
You just gotta love Alice :)
Her and Jasper, adressing each other with military ranks was funny/sweet.
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
OK, Edward not contacting Bella on his own makes a lot more sense right now, but geesh Emoward is a bit much isn't he? You totally nailed the angsty, moody, overly dramatic teenager perfectly. They can be such a joy to be around. I"m surprised Alice didn't kick his ... Anyway, looking forward to his now coherent thoughts in the next chapter. Will we get to see E/B together? LOVED the bagel line from Jasper (it made me laugh out loud). You can send my bagel right on over... please update soon! kutgw
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
This chapter was hillarious btw.
I totally just pictured a little puppy crawling into bellas bed and being like "no....*HISS* mine!"
And the impression of a Bagel lol
Great chapter!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Love Alice. Yes, I agree GROW SOME BALLS.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
I wish Alice was my sister, she ROCKS!!! I enjoyed hissing comatose Edward, he's kinda cute. Hehe. Oh, and I bet on Edward and Bella! PLEASE take Emmett and Rose down!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Wonderful chapter. Can't wait for an update. Why does Edward have to act emo? Poor Edward, how could he think that someone couldn't love him.
Reviewer: GoldenGirl115 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Simply brilliant in every way!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
loved it want more!!!!
Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Wow, I loved it! Good job with Alice's point of view. Very funny.
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
haha, "Blink, blink blink" haha!! keep it up im really enjoying this story!!!
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Mmmm. Edward bagel. I love this story. I can't wait for the big reconciliation scene. Can he take his shirt off again? Please?
Reviewer: irishwitch (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Great chapter. I can so see Emoward curled up like a pasty bagel. LOL
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
oh BIG SHIT EATING GRIN... happy dance.. uh huh uh huh... LOVE IT
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
i'm so glad that alice was able to talk some sense into him. the bottle cap...so sweet. its nice to see what he was or wasn't doing during that time.
can't wait for more
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Joy! that was some cool behind-the-scenes stuff. Alice is so my favorite!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Thank God!! Someone needed to get him out of his funk...might as well be Alice!! Can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Emoward was definitely around this time. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
great story i love when they call him a dickweed
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
This was an Interesting Point of view. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
YAY! I can't wait for them to make up!
Reviewer: new_fan (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
What a great turn of events. Love the plot! Keep it coming. Cheers :)
Reviewer: Vec (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
I love this story! The new chapters are kind of slow, I look forward to reading them. Hurry up!
Author's Response: I have been turning out chapters pretty fast but it's in the hands of my Twilighted beta to validate.
Reviewer: Vilandra (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Great story. Can I have that Edward bagel now please? :-p
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