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Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
Ok, so this one review counts as 50! - we NEED wet Edward, more than we need oxygen!
Great chapter, and i am secretly hoping that Bella will at some stage be using that purple corsett set.
Reviewer: Vec (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
I love this story!! You need to post the next chapter asap!
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
Great Chapter. Keep them coming. Looking forward to the first kiss.
Reviewer: frozen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
Aw I liked this chapter, I can't wait to read more :)
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Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
nice chapter. Looking forward to more - especially wet Edward!
Reviewer: lion_and_the_lamb648 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
hello,,
i really enjoying reading your story
hope you update soon,
:)
Reviewer: twilightchick11 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Aw, I'm glad Edward cheered up. Thank god for Alice. I love this chapter. It's so....Edward, lol. Continue asap!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
interesting, verrrryy interesting.
Reviewer: twivampsrule (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
I loved it!!! Can´t wait to read next chapter!!!
Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
how about if i leave a review you will update.....right now. :)
i have enjoyed your story very much so far.
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
I am loving this story. Bring on the next chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
As much as I was looking forward to Edwards point of view, I have to say that I enjoyed Alice just as much. It showed us not only what Edward was going through, but how much his family cares for him, and wants him happy. I just loved the scene where Edward snuck into Bella's room and Hissed at Alice. It's just hit when Bella is reffered to as Edwards mate.
I love the way you write your characters and their interactions with each other. I can't wait to read Edwards point of view. So please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update.
Reviewer: bluedolphinsun (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Hi, I'm new here but I wanted to tell you that I really like your story. Hope that you update soon.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
I'd prefer a Jasper bagel. Edward's a little too moody for me.
I can't wait to read more, this is great!
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
AGGGHHHH... I'm left waiting for the Edward taster to pop!!! I'm going to need the butter. Awesome start who knew Alice would be the saving grace...although she already had her plan and put it into action. Can't wait to see how Edward react upon returning to Forks High. ;-}
Reviewer: vampira666 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
i wonder why he had a bottle lid
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
A bit Occ then normal maybe?
update again soon.
x x Cassie
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
Very nice.. So Alice with the clothing. Who knew Bella held such dirty thoughts! LOL
Reviewer: jazzflame (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Haha! It's nice to finally see Edward not being emo-ward-finally! Great thinking for Alice! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!
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Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Really enjoyed APOV. I liked how the others continued to badger Edward while he was in his comatose stupor. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Hypothetically Yours
I love that you included how she needed to open up to someone about her fears. Angela was the perfect person and it truly goes along with the true sense of a teenager going to their friends for advice. They don't just try to figure it out on their own. Great Job!!!
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
This is sooo funny! Please keep up the good work and update soon!!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
totally worth it! i loved how bella put the group, esp. jessica, in their place, by letting them know about her relationship with edward.
Reviewer: Marn (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Love this story cant wait to see more.
Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
Nice use of saucey bickering and picking. Thouroughly enjoyed it.
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