brilliant.. Nothing less..:)

MORE MORE MORE!!!

Good story....

lucky for bella you gave her a good sense of humor, she made emmet shut up...

that was quite funny

can't wait to read more....

hope soon ;)

AWE!!!  That was awesome!  I had to grab my husband and let him read your comment and the reference (which I kindly explained) to which he replied, "Wasn't that one of those weird movies you made me watch when we were dating??"  Ah, love.  LoL.  He had never been introduced to the wonderful world of Monty til he met me.  hehe.

Anywayyyy, I'm sure you want to hear about your story.  It's still great and the kiss was sweet.  (want more... waifer thin...)  I can't wait for him to meet Charlie.  Also, I love that you have infused Bella with the sense of humor she so desperately needed!  So, in short, keep up the great work, get plenty of rest! (and don't feel guilty about it either, as a fellow pregger reigning at five months and counting, you'll need all the sleep you can get before that back pain and insomnia kick in... ah the joys and beauty of pregnancy..)

LOL at Emoward being pervy enough to stare at Bellas ass.  Bravo to her for standing up for what she wants.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

LOL... Alice and Bella are defintely best friends... I'm waiting to see if Charlie has his shotgun within grabbing distance of the inpending dinner meeting.  Knowing he's a cop I wouldn't put it past him to have it nearby. Waiting for more!!

 

 

You really need to keep writing.  I have really enjoyed reading this.  I like how Stephanie writes, dont get me wrong, but this sounds more like how my teenagers talk.  lol.  Look forward to the next chapters.

I love Edward, you write him well very sweet but hot at the same time, SO WRITE MORE!! he he he. Love your story I am waiting for more. Thanks

Oh I just love Alice!

NIce

It's too bad Edward doesn't feel comfortable/strong enough to divulge his whole identity to Bella, although I can certainly understand why.  Not only is he terrified of losing her, but a secret kept for 80 years cannot be something one comes clean with easily, lol.  Although Bella's actions and comments in this latest chapter should tell him that she's in it for the long haul, no matter what - hopefully he'll find the strength to come clean completely soon.

Looking forward to dinner with Charlie - that should definitely be an interesting night!

A wonderful chapter, even though I think Edward may have gotten off lightly, by Bella agreeing to hear only part of the truth, I am still glad that they have started to come to an understanding and are slowly building the trust between the two of them. Holds well for the potential of their relationship. Speaking of which, that was a really hot kiss, very well written.

I also loved "the talk", I just roll on the floor laughing when Carlisle plays dad to his "teenage" sons. I also thought Edwards internal monologe was very entertaining, especially when dealing with his family in general and Carlisle "talk" in particular. As always the family banter was very amusing, as was Bella and Alice insulting each other.

I really liked reading both Edward and Bella's points of virew in this chapter. I shows that while they may not be ready for the whole truth to be out in the open, they are in a healthy place in their relationship, they both care deeply for each other, and want the other one happy and safe. IU can't wait to see what happens when they finally admit that to each other.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, it is always entertaining to read about a father meeting his daughters boyfriend, and while I hope we get both points of view in the next chapter, it would be great if we could get Charlies thoughts on coming events as well.

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

 

Tee hee! With thoughts like Must resist licking the giant wet undead lollipop I can see why Bella thinks it's not safe in her mind!

One thing, it didn't seem like Edward picked up on the "pretend" to eat fish line. Now isn't that a clue that Bella at least thinks he and the rest of the family are vampires?

Author's Response:

He picked up on it. He just chose to ignore it. If he had acknowledged it, he would be forced to admit he was a vampire, correct? The playful exchange that follows proves that Bella doesn't mind what he is and Edward lets himself revel in that fact for just a minute.