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Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
More Please!!?
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
SQUEE!!!!! This was really cool to read - it's a neat new point of view and I can't wait to read what comes next!!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
loved it, especially since both points of view are in the same chapter, I find it reveals alot more about the inner workings or the characters, and therefore adds a lot to the story.
As always I just love the inner thoughts and sarcastic comments Bella and Edward make, I find them very entertaining, "Please have pity on the poor defenseless horny vampire" had me rolling on the floor with laughter. I also find the nervous seventeen year old boy coming out in cool and confident 100 year old vampire, it very amusing, especially when meeting Charlie.
I also love how you are slowly building the sexual tension, it's great, and very very hot. I can't wait to see what happens when Edward gets back to Bella's bedroom, I am sure it's gonna be great. So please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update.
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
more! more! more! Great chapter! love this story.
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
this is such a good story! plzzzzzz update asap!!!!
Reviewer: blondie9779 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
so far so good, really enjoying the story!
Reviewer: blondie9779 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
chapter 15 laugh out loud funny !!!
Reviewer: iloveedwardcullen123 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
nice update...update soon
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
great chapter
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Go Charlie! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Building A Mystery
ROTFLMAO! THank you for pursueing the Bella/Alice relationship.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Nice
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
yay that was cool i can't wait for the next chapter BRING IT ON
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
im so loving this story and please update quickly! :)
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
I find it utterly adorable that Edward is nervous around Charlie! It's not like Charlie can really hurt him. *snicker* Well, things seem to be going well with our young lovers. I'm enjoying this story. Keep it up.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
hahah saucy Bella! Edward's not going to stand a chance!
It always bugged me that Charlie didn't have a few suspicions in the book (or maybe he did but we were all reading Bella's story, not his or Edward's)
It was good to see him mentioning that although something was off about the Cullens, Carlisle and the rest of the family were good for the community so he was willing to accept their presence :)
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Great chapter... I loved how Alice was too "tired" to attend. lol. Can't wait to see what happens when he's in her room at night while she's awake!
Reviewer: shinyaudilove (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Building A Mystery
awsome so funny
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
cute!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Mmm, how is Edward going to stand it watching Bella sleep now? I'm sure that her dreams will be graphic and full of what she saw of him that afternoon.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Great chapter! Love the story
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
Abssolutely. I don't mind conflicts and some suffering and growing up. It is just that so many people do and redo New Moon....
Author's Response: After Port Angeles, I'm taking this my own direction. This will definitely NOT be a relpy of NM.
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Edward will always keep her safe.
And you keep me and the other readers
happy, by writing more.
Good story. I look forward to the next
chapter.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Since I reviewed recently I am here just to give you stars. Never figured out how that work, so I always forget.
But, just in case. Are you going to give us New Moonish angst later on? Like I have to leave her for her own good etc. etc. I don't think I can stand it. It was bad enough with S Meyer. And, in any case, your Edward and Bella are so much more into physical and into understanding each other that it should not happen.
Author's Response: Ah, well we need conflict for drama. But I can assure everyone that Edward will NOT leave Bella. But there will be some Broodward and Angstward. If I didn't include some of that, I would have to classify my Edward and Bella as completely OOC and I don't want to do that. Relationships are never easy. Have to go through some pitfalls. Remember they are both more 17 than the original characters so there is some growing up to do for both of them. Hope you stick with me. ^_^
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