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Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I love the light hearted tone of this story. And I'm really enjoying the improvements to Bella's character.
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Hahahaha this was an awesome chapter. I loved how playful they were being. Even when Emoward was worried about it, there was still a sense of joyful understanding under it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
There interaction in school was fantastic. I'd like to read more of that. Great chapter!
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
What a way to go... I like this story
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
hehehe. no good can come of this ;) *thts supposed to be winking* instead of a Southern Comfort Jasper, can i have an Edward? hey, a girl can dream.
~ B
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
yup that Bella of yours is a minx...
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
LOL. Who knew Jasper had that kind of mind. Very nice. Love poor Edward getting all caught up in things. Bella certainly does have her "dark" side and it's definitely coming out around Edward. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Great chapter!
I loved how he showed everyone that she was his. Take that Newton! Hehe
I can't wait to see what will happen next. Please, please update soon?
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Great story can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Just have to love some Jasper!! Keep the updates coming, I really enjoy your story.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Building A Mystery
ROFL "Pixie Whore!!" --you slay me!! Oh & the whole 1st kiss discription -- PRICELESS!!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Self Inflicted
Dang I love me some Alice!!
I want my own Alice to hang out with & buy me stuff!!!
BTW I LOVE love love the way U portray Alice & Edward relationship. Awesome!!!
Reviewer: xie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
more more?! i keep refreshing the page, hoping you've updated more chapters to the story..
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
LOL *giggle* Ed is sucha bagel -- I mean, baby ;-) Go Alice! She my hero
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Adventures in Care-a-lot
Kewl I like the changes!!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
LoL I SO love me some Alice! She would totally rock as a friend!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Welll he survived the meeting of Charlie!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
hahahahahaha at an impervious vampire being scared out of his mind by Charlie. It was an excellent chapter. I love that Edward is realizing just how much Bella cares for him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: angie cullen (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
i loved all of it. i'm so looking forward to your next few chapters.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Free Falling
okay, I was beginning to get bored simply because it was so much like the book, I didn't know if you were doing that on purpose and then adding little sexy times to parts, or what..but this chapter I really liked. Now I think that I LIKE that you are following the book closely just adding what COULD have happened at other times. Great writing and I loved that he asked her to be his girlfriend, so cute.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
oh that is something that Edward is going to have to deal with! He loves Bella and Bella loves him! Charlie's character so far has been refreshing...the fact that he knows something is different is so cool! Edward will have to stick by Bella no matter what his response to Charlie's words are!
At least, I hope that will be the case!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Charlie is quite observant! I think Bella may actually end up being the death of Edward!
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Feeding the Flame
Cute chapter! I really enjoy where you are taking this story. It's a really fresh take on Twilight (which in its self is shocking!). Hope you continue to take this story interesting places and looking forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Perchance To Dream
Really enjoying this! I had to laugh when Emmett realised it was Edward who's ripped off the urinal, lol.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
I like your writing, it just seemed like you wrote what happened in the movie on the screen..no real changes..so I hope the next chapters venture out a bit
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