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Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I like your Edward very much. I'm amazed that he can be so amorous with Bella--not at all like the books.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I cringe and blurt out my reasoning, "Jasper, as you would put it ‘she makes me hornier than a bull in a corral with twenty heifers.'"
LOL!
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
great chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Now it begins!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Oh I love feisty Eddie!!! Thanks so much. Can't wait for more. : )
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
What an absolutely delightful chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
I particularly enjoyed Jasper's observation and how it seems to have widened Edward's perspective. Well done.
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Awesome! I like how they are acting like normal teens and I love the way you write. Please update soon!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
good start!
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Best chapter yet!!!! Love that Edward figures out that Bella likes his jealous/possessive nature because it is a turn on!!!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Oooo!!! I love all the naughtiness. More, please!
Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Love it!!!!! I love the way Edward showed his possessiveness in front of Mike. Great job!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Totally love that HOT kiss against the locker!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
great fun chapter!!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Ooh, yes please. I'll have Jasper!
Nice to see Bella actually addressing Edward's stalker activities. Even if she wasn't creeped out about it in the book, she should have at least mildly rebuked him for it instead of just going "Huh" and moving ahead. And I loved the "Naughty boy" and punishments teasing.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
hahahaha I loved it!!!! Edward and Bella 100 points....world 0!!!!!!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Awesome chapter. I am loving the heat
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Oooo!!! I love all the naughtiness. More, please!
Reviewer: comekittycome (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I love jealous, posessive Edward! So yummy!
Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Well I loved the conversation about how Bella likes the animal in Edward and I have always agreed with that idea. Something about him calls to something in her and I'm absolutely convinced that at least half of it is that he's an 'animal'. A man who looks like that, causes those kinds of reactions just by touching your hand and growls/purrs? Um yeah sign me up.
You can keep the SoCo Jasper - love him but he doesn't do much for me. Now an Edward that growls in my ear then nuzzles my neck and jaw?...yum!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I love and totally understand how Bella loves Edwards animal side - makes me all hot too :) lol
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Yea for more Jasper! I love it when he helps Edward in stories, because Edward usually needs all the help he can get, lol.
Loved the reveal at school, and Bella's reaction to Edward kissing her. Yum!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
I loved Jasper's take on things! This was a really fun chapter...after all, a lot of the fun is finding out what turns your honey on! Love "Caveward"...shame on what you're thinking, Mike! Will Edward's "punishment" be in the next chapter? One can only hope! Oh and feel free to have my Jasper sent overnight delivery...the sooner he gets here the better! ;)
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
Ahh don't make promises you can't keep! ;)
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
cute and awesome as always!! MORE :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
can't wait for more
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