Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Big Scary Animal
the joker?i laughed so loud it probably woke up the neighbourhood!god,this is great stuff.close enough to the book,and just naughty enough.thank you for writing this.please don't send jasper though.nothing against him,but i seriously love edward.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
Wow that was hot!
A dancing Edward! I could really picture that!
We all know Victoria is going to be trouble!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
can't wait for more
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
Interesting night... and an interesting characterisation of Victoria. That was something that I wasn't expecting!
Um, are the Cullens aware that Bella pretty much knows what they are? And she seemed to know that Victoria was a vampire too, though she obviously didn't get the significance of red eyes.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
Congrats with the baby. Loved the end of this chapter! Dry/wet humping for the win.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
Yea, so nice to see an update! Sounds like they had a great time dancing, lol.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: jacoblover98 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 - First Taste
Aw. That is soo sad!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
After my dead heart tries to leave its bony prison, my cock tries to leave the confines of my pants as well lol
His eyes darken to black coal and I hear a low growl come from his chest. So hot!
"I want you so bad."
This chapter is so hot! worried about Victoria!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jacoblover98 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
YAY! Luv ya lots!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
love it
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
that was great!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
hmmm the thing with victoria was pretty cool...i really hope she means her no harm.....it would be interesting to see her character again in the future! Thank god for small releases!!! LOL!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
This was a great chapter! Excellent job! I loved everything about it. =)
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Heat
Sooo happy for the update! AWE.SOME chapter!!!! Had to read it twice and I'm sure Ill be back again before the weekend's out. And I got a huge kick out of Emmett :-)
Reviewer: summerc79 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
Hope u're not giving up!
Reviewer: nga981 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
please give us a new chapter please lol
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
Excellent first chapter! I loved it. I will read on!
Maria
Reviewer: osunurse74 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
I love your story - please don't quit writing! I'll wait patiently, I promise...
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
Enjoying the story. Keep the chapters coming.
Reviewer: MJSP7 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
OMG!! This is awesome!! Pleease finish...:)
Reviewer: summerc79 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
I really enjoy your story!
I hope you have only put it on hiatus and not given up!
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Leather & Lace
gosh i love love love your story, i'm like a freakin adicct. so tell me how long will it take you to get the next chapter up? god, must sound so rude i just cant contain my curiosity!!! thanks a lot
Reviewer: ASHiE (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
I really like what you';ve done so far!!
Please update soon...pretty please? With Edward-In-Leather-Pants on top?
Reviewer: NaWiSi (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Mannequin
i like this alice. for some reason when edward goes in her room then gets in her bed it f&%$ing comical
Reviewer: kbarranco (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
:) this is amazing good work!
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