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Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Great chapter! Totally loved it!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Sweet! I want to see him dancing too.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Nice. I can see that happening. lol. update soon!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
LMAO! The bouncing was hilarious.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
hehe Edward's going to have his hands full keeping up with Bella... er... yeah... like he'll complain about that? ;)
Can't wait to see what Rose and Alice teach Bella to make him come unhinged :)
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
loved Bellas revenge, almost as much as Edward, very entertaining, almost as much as Edwards reading of the horny teenagers around him. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am sure the dance lessons and club night will be very entertaining. Please don't keep us waiting to long for the next update.
Reviewer: purple_37 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I'm really loving this story. More please!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
AWESOME!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GO EVIL BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Another seriously good chapter.
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
lmao! I loved the lunch scence hilarious!!! :)
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
-giggles and claps my hands- yayyyyyyyy new chapter!!!! oh how i've missed you!!! and what a chapter!! thanks so much
Reviewer: ptoricanjewel (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Great chapter!! I can't wait for the next
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
haha I love it! keep up the awesome work
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
LOL, she is evil, she is! Looking forward to the PJs and sleepover and dancing...and especially the semi-lemon!!!
Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I'm so excited!! Can't wait!
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
God you are hilarious!! I think comparing Emoward to a hissing bagel was possibly the funniest thing, but really, too many to list. So much fun!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I wanna see Bella send Eddie into a lemon fit! AWESOME CHAPTER!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
What a little vixen Bella is becoming, I love it! I'm so glad she's coming out of her shell some to tease Edward. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I"m drooling and picturing Edward in a clubbing outfit!!! *drools uncontrolably* Edward in PJs is even HOT! I suggest if Bella is going to unhinge our favorite Vampire thatAlice put her in a halter to to show her off more. That will definitely drive get him unhinged. *evil grin*
Very cool chapter. Glad to see Bella can be like the other Cullen's and pull a fast one on Edward too. He he he.
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Best part: "Sure. I'd love to see him come unhinged," she replied evilly while fixing her curls.
Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
I don't dance and I don't know what dance moves are currently popular (you might want to check Wikipedia), but here's my idea:
Alice and Rose wouldn't happen to have a copy of "Dirty Dancing," would they? If they can teach Bella to dance like Baby, Edward's gonna have a meltdown of the very best kind. (I can just picture Edward as Johnny, dressed all in black...)
Reviewer: Kolene (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
The power of a female is a beautiful thing isn't it. I like this chapter very funny.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Welcome to the Family
Great chapter!
Bella's revenge was awesome!
I can't wait to see them dance!
Please, please update soon?
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