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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:12 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Wow,,,Edward really is a hard hearted bastard..of course, the poor guy has had some really terrrible things happen to him...So sad........
Author's Response: His life is tortured...however, Bella should help with things after they meet.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:13 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Hey there! Glad you update! Really good chapter. Dang Edward can be a real dick sometimes. Oh well is still one hot SOB!
Author's Response: I know, right? I'd still take him in a heartbeat!!!
Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:03 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Hope RL gets better soon. Interesting interaction between Alice and Edward could really picture them. Like that Alex brings Edward out of his shell. Funny how you refer to bitchy women. They annoy me too. Also like how you put Rosalie's character, and made her a match for Emmett. Great writing. Have been excited for this update. : )
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. RL has just been crazy and soon school will be starting and of course, my employer decided to add another class that I have NEVER taught to my already busy schedule. I will be using my writing to escape.
I am glad you could visualize the interaction between Edward and Alice. For once, I wanted Edward to get along with Rose instead of the other way around. Alice and Edward will be butting heads, but I think that should make the story more interesting. I have an interesting twist in mind that will shake them up a little. ;)
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:54 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Edward is a cruel bugger in this story. I can't wait til Bella and Edward cross paths again, and perhaps have a conversation. It'll be interesting to read how that goes down. Thanks for updating! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Author's Response: They will cross paths soon. I have been alternating POV's but I realized after writing this chapter that Edward is a day behind Bella. I will have to think about how to remedy that one. He may have to skip some time...I don't know. Anywho, thanks for the review and if the next chapter is Bella, I can guarantee that it will be out sooner than this one. I seem to channel her better. :)
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:45 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Goodness, Bella is going to have her work cut out for her with this one! But I love the tender side of Edward coming through with Alex. Sorry RL is so complicated; thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next chap.
Author's Response: She will definitely have to bring him down a few pegs! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:08 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
wow edward is so mean!!! i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Yes he is!!! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:54 AM · On: A Pain You'll Never Forget
great chapter! i hope bella leaves mike soon!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:34 AM · On: A Slave Am I
aww poor alex!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:12 AM · On: A Cut Above the Rest
poor bella!!! i kinda think mike is cheating on her?
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:22 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Interesting insite into Edward.
Author's Response: I wanted Edward to be different...he will calm down eventually.
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:55 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
wow... What a prick - I mean ok a little part of me says a girl that goes home w/a guy when they don't even know each other's names might deserve to be treated as less than a gem, but dammmn...I hope he comes under Bella's influence soon... something good has to rub off on him.
O wait... with and ending like yours maybe rub off isn't the best way to put that :P
Kinda Hatin' Prickward, but still lovin' the story & your way w/words.
Great job!
Sonia
Author's Response: Ha ha!!! Oh my gosh! You had me rolling with this one! Prickward is a real jerk, but he needs to be so that Bella can swoop down and knock him down a few pegs. He isn't going to know what hit him!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:48 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
It seems like his feelings for Alex are Edward's only redeeming quality. He is a mean ass. I've run out of chapters but I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:57 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
I am totally still here, and I was so happy to see an update, yay!! Great chapter, it's so sweet to see how Edward connects with Alex. So... maybe Rose and Emmett will connect Bella and Edward? And that chick at the end was right, Edward was so cruel to her. I have a feeling Ms. Bella is going to shake up his whole world.
Author's Response: I think you are right! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:36 AM · On: A Pain You'll Never Forget
"Bella...look at me." Rose's tone was serious. "Someday you are going to get sick of his shit...and when you do, I will be here for you. You aren't stuck, sweetheart. There's always a way out." I really like Rose in this story. She's right, there is always a way out and Bella needs to get out.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:12 AM · On: A Slave Am I
Edward has a soft spot for his boss's son. That so sweet. Hopefully, this is not the only thing that redeems him. I't nice to read about Edward not being in control of everything for a change.
Author's Response: His bosses really have him by the balls so to speak. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:42 AM · On: A Cut Above the Rest
Mike didn't come home that night. Well, where was he? What a complete ass. There is more going on here than lack of hair. I'm glad she cut her hair and got some style to it. I like the way you introduced her to both Alice and Rosalie. I hope they all become friends.
Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:59 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Yep, still reading and loving it. Edward is like two different people and I can't wait to figure him out a little more. I hope we get both Bella and Edward next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:58 AM · On: A Night To Forget
"You‘re a dick," she whispered as she stood up and grabbed her coat off the back of the chair. "Mystery blonde" sure is right about that. I don't think I've ever seen Edward portrayed quite like this. I like it (though I'm sure I don't like him).
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:42 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Wow. he is definately screwed up. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:14 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Great chapter! Man, Edward is an ass!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:58 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
glad u made it back, look forward to your next update
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: aidy (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:38 AM · On: A Cut Above the Rest
Mike's an ass, hurry up and dump his sorry self Bella. Isn't is sad I have known guys who fixate over silly things such as long hair and I just want to shake them - how shallow can they be! LOL Bring on Eddie!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:14 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Thrilled to see an update!!
Angry Edward, huh? I hate seeing him so angry. The only time he was truly happy was when he was with Alex. Seems to have alot in his past.
Can't wait to find out more!
Author's Response: Edward has some MAJOR issues, but he will eventually get over them! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tasha083 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:27 AM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
wow when is edward going to meet Bella??? hope its soon i think its going to be funni!! And i so want Bella to bust mike!!! neway liking the story!!!
Author's Response: That will be a good chapter. I haven't decided if I am going to have it from both points of view yet...what do you think?
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:59 PM · On: A Little Bit of Heaven and A Whole Lot of Hell
Just u and ur hand tonight. Still with ya; keep it coming.
Author's Response: Ha ha! Thanks for reviewing and sticking with me!
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