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Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

ha ha ha take that edward you pussy ass pansy boy!! LOL

Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

amazing (:
i loved it

wonderful job.

cant wait for the sequal

and emmett is a freakin riot. (:

Author's Response:

Isn't he just! That kid does my head in with his antics! LOL!


Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

A strong 1st chapter. I was waiting to read this story until it was completed before I read it. I'm happy it's done. I'm anxious to see why Bella is so different.

Reviewer: NZPixie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Dude, you dont even need me to tell me how awesome this fic is - the other 6,500+ reviews do it for me.

You've done well chaning Bella from a wimp to a kick-ass bitch without making her a slut (like so many others do) and you turned Edward from an uber-pansy into an someone who is actually attractive to those of us who arent hormonal 15-year-olds lol.

Anyways, you rock, there aren't much else for me to say.


Author's Response:

Really whats one more going to do to my ego???? Bahahahaha *explodes*

Urh those characters just turn me off...I think thats why I wrote Izzy. I wanted to have her hard but still have flaws and then it made me realise that Edward didn't match her so I changed him too. It was easier than having him stay canon...and a lot hotter !!!!

Thank heaps!

Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen


Reviewer: hayj (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Oh my gosh this is one of the best stories i have read in AGES!!! i read the first chapter yesterday and was hooked, i had trouble leaving my computer to go to work last night, then came home and may have stayed up half the night. You have made me laugh hysterically and bawl my eyes out and i love it! i'm having trouble thinking of anything to critisise too, there are a few wrong words in the last chap but thats all i can think of it was beautifully written and flowed great!

Congrats on your new baby and all the best. I will be waiting with baited breath until you find the time to work on the sequel!

Author's Response:

LOl...I've been told its a bit addictive. I think I'm responsible for so many women getting up tired and bags under their eyes lol! Wow I'm amazed that I could make you feel all those emotions...really I'm a comedic writer so having people cry over my fic is awesome (that sounds terrible doesn't it, lol)

Thank you so much for your kind words...see ya soon!

Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Great story!  I will favorite you as an author cause I can't remember for the life of me if I have or not...  Thank you for the MANY MANY laughs!

Author's Response:

Thats my make people laugh. I love it!!! Lots more to come hehehe!


Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

this is my favorite chapter so far ....:)

Reviewer: OBs Girl (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

I love this story and you are so funny!  you totally rock!! (I have 3 kids so i know!) how in the world do you have time to write?!!!  I think you sould give lessons on multi tasking!

Reviewer: DisMom (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

This story started so great, but it was evident when you wanted to end it...started to get really rushed and fizzle.  This last chapter was a sad way to end what was a great story.  I hope once you have more time, you will give this story a proper ending.

Author's Response:

This was how it was always going to end. I'm sorry if that sounds terrible to you but this was it. I will be doing a sequel so it's not really the end but I understand if you feel that it was rushed or it fizzled. You are entitled to your opinion and I value your honesty...thank you!

As for a previous review...yeah multi tasking is hard! Lol...but writing is like my baby to and if I neglect it for too long it starts to wail at me lol!


Thank you again!


Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I really like your story.  I will definitely be looking for your next installment of Izzy.

Author's Response:

Aw thank you. Hopefully it won't take me too long to have up and running!


Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever

how are they gonna fix this??

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

OMG!!!......that was THE funniest thing I have read in ages.......I couldn't stop laughing =]

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

I love, I love it.........awesome!!!!!

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

awwww...........bout time =]

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

woah.......go Bella!!!!

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

that was so funny......LMFAO

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

WHAT???..........hahaha poor Edward........I can't wait to see how this plays out

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

woah baby!!!!

Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

This was a great story! I love how you portray a grown up Bella (Izzy) and Emmett's character. I can not wait for more works from you. I will definitely favorite you. Good Luck with the coming birth!

Author's Response:

Gah! I have to say I love your pen name...Pebbles! I don't know why but I love that word! I'm weird I know lol!

Thank you for all your good wishes and I'll have plenty more fics coming out soon!


Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I really really enjoyed this story!  I hope to see more of your work in the future!   I loved badass Izzie, and I loved how she and Edward talked about what would have happened if he came back, and were right on with the books.  Very cool touch. 

Author's Response:

Really?!? LOL! Well thank you...I love that I could make people enjoy the books without enjoying the books...did that make any sense at alll!!???

Anyway heaps more fics are in the pipeline so hopefully you won't have to wait that long!


Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Great job! 

Author's Response:

Why thank you!


Reviewer: ylimee (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

ha ha winner!

good luck with the summer baby, any luck and this summer wont be as mental as the last one.

one aussie to another this story was awesome.

Author's Response:

YEW!!! Aussies kick ass!!!!! Or should I say Aussie's kick arse...I've been writing in the american format for too long. I'm even starting to say panties instead of knickers!!!! LOL!!!


Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight


I loved this. You of course, knew that I would. By the way, I am so incredibly touched that this chapter is for me :) And this review would have been written way sooner, but real life happened for a little bit, sigh*

So chapter:

I laughed until I cried over Edward and Izzy's conversation about what would have happened with the rest of their lives and their reactions to BD and the rest of the bullcrap about her just up and taking him back during NM.

When Edward said "no wolf would be humping my daughter," I about died.

Great last line too! I love that you started this whole thing with Emmett and ended it with him, because there's so little of Emmett- even in the fandom, and he needs way more love than he gets :D

Esme was hilarious, I'm really glad you gave her so much love in this because she is the female that's always ignored.

I could go on and on, but bottom line: GREAT GREAT STUFF.

I love ya woman! More than Rob in tights, or Jackson in know for both of us is some fucktosome loving since either of those is like...GUH.

PS. After the little wee one is born and things calm down...Rob in tights.... ;)


Author's Response:

Lol...I thought you'd love it!

So yeah I understand you are crazy busy...I mean your a vali beta for Robs!

I was always going to end with Emmett. It seemed so unfair to me that he didn't have as much go time as he should have in this fic. I originally wanted him to but it just didn't work out that way. So he had to have the last word!

Anyway Rob in tights is on the way now...half way written and while immensely drool worthy it's incredibly funny...if I do say so myself! :)

Ciao mi amigo!

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