Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 32:Explanations
Very interesting. When the two were talking in the trees outstide the hospital, I thought it was part of the volturi or some part of victoria's clan that had survived. I never thought they were actually there to save her. Great job with that.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes
Hmm, I think that Edward and Tanya know what happened to Izzy. They found her somehow and she's changed. Again. That's my theory.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen
Sorry, can't write much, gotta get to the next chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever
Wow, didn't see that coming. Great job
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
lol the bear thing was just too funny! That and i love the fact that Edward grabbed her and jumped off. Too fun! That and pool sex is always a blast...
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I totally love that Edward trusts her to tell him if she's hurting him. That and she was the one to freak out over the bruises. Too funny!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!
Aww, Jacob and Bella time. Do we get to know what Jacob and May name the baby? I always love that part
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Hmm interesting. I like the idea of that knife. Very clever.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
Oooo naughty Edward! So he really has changed! I like this Edward!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood
Yeah! Thats what i wanted! Them to yell at each other and then make up for it. Hmm maybe that will come later!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's
Jealous of Izzy? Pshh, of course I am! She has a great relationship with all 3 guys. Okay 2 out of the 3. We're working on the third. Great Chapter!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
that was my most favorite story EVER!!! I know I have told you that with every chapter, but seriously, SO SO GOOD! It was the perfect ending. I wanted to hear Edward call Izzy Bella one more time and it was perfectly placed. Oh my, Emmett is hilarious! I can't wait for the sequel, you are awesome!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
I love that Edward is letting himself go and being changed by Izzy. I love it! Great job!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts
Okay, so she gave Alice the Lambo, Jasper a bike. What did she give Rose? Another bike? Great chapter
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Great chapter! I loved this one, it was awesome. That talk between Jasper and Izzy was sweet, I enjoyed it. Great job
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Good chapter. I like that Izzy is so ballsy to just barge into someones room without a second thought. Is it bad that I want Edward and Izzy to have a screaming match? Now that would be fun to watch..er.. read.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
LMAO. I loved their conversation about Edward being raped1 Oh my god, too freaking funny!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
Moving in? Really? Hmm this should be interesting. I love the fact that Emmett is always correcting them on her name. Too funny!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
I like that Alice got to pissed at Edward, that was awesome! Now time for the real show!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
I like that she still has the soft side of going to a library. In all this angerness, it's sweet. Good chapter
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Wow, Can't say I'm surprised that they all came to see her. I am surprised however, that Esme and Carlisle weren't there. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
I didn't even know a car like the bugatti veyron even existed until now. I like it. Now it makes sense as to why Alice never saw anything. Great chapter
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Hahaha, I love the Toy Story bit you put in there. I'm a married spud. That was too cute! Took me a minute to realize what that was from. I like this bella. It'll be interesting to see what happens when her and Edward meet face to face.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
I'm surprised that Alice hasn't been keeping tabs on her. I wonder why things are fuzzy. Hmm
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
This sounds really good. Great intro chapter!
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