Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
That was an awesome story!! I loved your new and improved Bella. Oh! Sorry Emmy I know, I know it's Izzy!! LOL!! She was great! And i also loved your new a improved Edward. The plot was very interesting and always keep me on my toes wandering what would happen next. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading the sequel and any other work u write! Thank you for sharing this great story with all of us.
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
I really understand your reasons for cutting it short and i can't wait for the sequel!!! I love the Z girl!!!
Reviewer: Avacullen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
I really enjoyed your story. Izzy kicks ass! I loved her. My fav part was when carlise told esme to pay up on their bet. That whole scene was absolutely hilarious. Can't wait to read the sequel.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Great dynamic with Rose, Emmett and Bella
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
Poor Edward. She is the predator now...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
She is MEAN to him. Doesn't she understand that he has sacrificed his happiness for her to have a life? He needs to talk to her and explain everything. She is just cruel to him.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
Edward didn't make her choices for her. She is bitter. She can't blame Edward for not loving her. She CAN blame him for loving her all along and lying to her about it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
SHe has put up a mighty tough protective shield around her heart!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Bella is full of anger... I don't blame her. They all abandoned her yet expect her to treat them the same way she did before they left.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
They have a fun banter together!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Was Bella seriously flirting with Emmett? How does she not have 1000 questions for him? I love that this story is already complete so I can stroll through it all!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Well, Bella has changed! I like it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like it!
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 32:Explanations
I love that plot twist!! That was so awesome!!! great job!!
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes
I think Tanya changed Izzy!! But I'm not sure who was the red-eyed vamp with her. I hope i'm right!!
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo
Wow!! I loved all those speeches!! I love the Cullens!! That was a greart chapter!!!
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I love how Edward told Izzy to go easy!! That was rich, a vampire telling a human to go easy!! LOL!!! I loved the smut, hope there is more!!
Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
aww i <3 emmy!!
Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
I’m a married spud...bahahha loving this fic!
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!
I love My Jacob!!! He is such a sweetie!! I'm so happy he has his own family!!
Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
I loved this... and the ending ah it made me laugh... Okay the entire thing made me laugh. I can't believe I fell so far behind in reading that I just know got around to finishing it. GAH! Terrible I know, but I loved this! I think you are a fantastic writer.
~Jessi
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed
I love how Bella told Edward all the things he told her!! I always thought that he was so wrong to tell her those things. If he wanted to leave her he could have done it another way or told her the truth. I am loving your story!!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
Just found this story yesterday! Love it love it love it! One of my all time favorites! Thank you so much! I had thought it had all been done and you proved me wrong! You are made of awesomeness!!!
Reviewer: Darlene Williams (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
Wow, this is by far the best fanfic I have read so far, and I have read almost all of them that are posted. I love you're writing style and wish I could write with all that passion. Keep up the good work. I don't know exactly when this was posted but good like with your new baby and the rest of your family.
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
I thought that whole Edward is gonna get raped part was really funny!! Great chapter!!!
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