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Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

oh this is a lot of fun!!

update update!!



Author's Response:

*chuckle* ya certainly know how to spur me on.

Thanks!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

great chapter!

cant wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Hehe! Soon...be patient. LOL

Thanks!

Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Really liking this story and anxiously await more.  I cannot wait until Emmett goes home!  Edward is going to get it.

Not that I'm advocating it, but will we get some back story as to how cute little Bella Swan turned into badass Iz?  I mean, that must have been some road.

Anyway, good story!



Author's Response:

Of course, of course....you'll learn more bout Iz in the next couple of chaps! Should be good...I hope y'all like it!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Hi :)

Ok I just read your story and I am totally hooked :)

LOVED IT!!!



Author's Response:

Bahaha...I'm glad I hooked you!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Hiraedd (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

I need more!!! lmao great story I love the fact that Bella is strong..not the cry baby some write her as.



Author's Response:

Lol more is coming...a hell of a lot more. Just make sure your ready it!:)

Thanks!

Reviewer: donnah77 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

Your new & improved Bella/Izzy is WIN!  Love the change from damsel in distress to badass biker babe.  You are off to a great start here, and I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Yay! Do I get an overly stuffed toy that you'd get from the fair?? It's cool huh?

Thanks!

Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

I loved this chapter...as I have all of them, so that's nothing new. I knew the stench would be wolf-related. I suspected initially that Jake would be rooming with her or in the building at least, but when there was a pelt on the wall...I thought, "Holy Crap! She skinned Jacob!!" She's a tough b**** for sure. I love what you've done with her and look forward to the unfolding of her dirty laundry.



Author's Response:

OMG She skinned Jacob!!! ROFLMAO *Wiping the tears from my eyes* I'm sure Emmett would of known Jake's scent but he's never come across a real werewolf before. :)

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Another wonderful chapter.  Great story keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I hope you like the next one too...and the next one...and the next one. lol.

Cheers!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Another wonderful chapter.  Great story keep it up!



Author's Response:

Cool beans! Will do!

Thanks!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT HURTS!!!



Author's Response:

BANDAIDS!!!! Where are the fucking bandaids??? LOL

Thnks!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Sure!!! <passes $2.0 mil> cos if you are buying that car, you better have some nice duds to wear and smart sunglasses too!!

And hate is a very passionate emotion, almost the same as love is.... so I'm not giving up on a happy Edward and Bella scenario.

Shit!  Just realised I'm all caught up:*( please update soon, I like this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks <takes $2.o mil> will you come shopping with me???

It is...and it makes people do crazy things.

Cheers!

Reviewer: liltennisfreak56 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

when will edward be here?? lol

Author's Response:

Soon, my love, soon! LOL

Cheers!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

Wow, I wanna know what happened to her to change her like this?  And where the strength came from.

I wonder why Emmett doesn't take her to the Cullens.

Still loving it.



Author's Response:

Emmett's giving her time...don't want to spook the wild filly do we??

Thanks!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I like this Bella, not that's not right I LOVE this Bella!!!

Wonder why everyone is fuzzy to Alice around Bella though?  That is weird.  Can't wait, I'm glad I'mbehind everyone else... I'm movin on...



Author's Response:

Lol...keep reading all will be revealed!

Thanks!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOL very interesting beginning.  Totally OOC but I'm loving it.  I have to read on....



Author's Response:

It is isn't it...but by all means read on!

Thanks!

Reviewer: allira_k (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

good stuff. it's nice to have a bella - izzy - that can take care of herself.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah I was getting sick of that whole persona as well.

Cheers!

Reviewer: zorradesombra (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Puh-lease. If I had that kind of money I would not need student loans. Nice chapter though. I especailly like the end.



Author's Response:

Bahaha that's ok...I was kinda hoping you know that Bill Gates was reading and decided to be generous. "Hey Gatesy, help a girl out...oh and pay for zorradesombra's student loans too...you know you want to." And now we sit back and wait.

Cheers!

Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

omg! the whole werewolf pelt thing was GENIUS!!! i'm surprised no one else has thought of that! Bravo bravo!



Author's Response:

Thank you...I'm a massive mythology buff so it was kind of obvious to me but then I'm a bit mental sooo...lol.

Cheers!

Reviewer: Kristy (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! You need to add another chapter as soon as you can. This is an awsome Bella.



Author's Response:

LOL I have just being validated....yeah Bells is pretty surweet!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEESSSSSSSSSOMMMMMMMMEEEEEE



Author's Response:

Haha! Love it!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

awesome

 



Author's Response:

*chuckle* Thanks!

Cheers!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

awesome



Author's Response:

Totally!

Thanks!

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

The Bugatti is probably the most beautiful car ever. Nice choice. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Agreed, agreed, agreed, agreed, agreed! More is on the way!

Thanks!

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

HOT BELLA. I cannot wait to see what Edward makes of her.



Author's Response:

Yep and it won't be as pretty as he is!

Thanks!

Reviewer: luckycharms0210 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I like the new Bella. It's definitely a nice change from the fragile and vulnerable, damsel-in-distress Bella we all know and love. Nice writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah damsels are so yesterday...get with the times peoples! LOL

Thanks!

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