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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...




Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

That was fun... is Edward going to embrace the naughtiness he longs for or continue to be an uptight victorian b*tch of a male??? hee hee hee. Sooo funny.

Edward need to control Bella is crazy... he wanted to destroy her bike. The boy is going down isn't he... I mean that in the not pervy way... but it would be nice for Bella if he would do it in that way too. Edward is going to have to become a man pretty quick or Bella is not going to have time for him. She does not need the moody immortal boy.

This story is so friggin good!!!!

Jonesen for  more already.

Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

So Hott by kid rock

Crazy Bitch by Buckcherry

This chapter rockkkkkkkkkkkkked! hhahha edward is such a geek

Reviewer: yasnaka (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

How much did I love this chapter?  Let me count the ways:

1.  I loved the fact that all of the Cullen family members felt a need to check on Bella while she was sleeping.  Bella may have become badass, but the Cullens still feel very protective of her.

2.  I love the interaction between Rose and Izzy.  Where Bella was always rather afraid of Rose before, now they are on more equal footing and I believe their friendship can blossom.

3.  I love that Edward is slowly realizing that Bella is gone, and Izzy is here to stay.  He is working on accepting her as she is.  His ideal Bella is gone, but she has been replaced by a woman who is stronger. (I always thought Bella was a little too codependent for my taste.) 

4.  Lastly, I love Emmett.  "Edward, quick, go get some jelly."  Priceless.  I loved that for all his goofiness, Emmett actually offered some really good advice to Edward.

Thanks for updating so quickly.  I love this story to pieces!

Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great fic! Can't wait to read more. I love bad ass Bella--I'm picturing her as Eliza Dushku in my head. As for songs, Sex on Fire always makes me think of Edward...and Rob! :)

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

you really do have too feel sorry for Edward a little bit.

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

This was an awesome chapter, I love the fact that Bella just doesn't care that she walked in on Rose and Em, and that she doesn't get Rose get up in her face anymore. :D

Song: If you want blood, you've got it by AC/DC :D

Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Nice scuffle there. Eagerly awaiting your next installment.

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Wait! Smoldering? My Bella did not smolder. She was pure and sweet and innocent.

Hellooooo, wake-up call!  xD  Love that - and I nearly died at the "Holy crap, Edward's going to get raped" conversation.  That just made the chapter, totally - especially with Esme ending it like that.  “Will you guys shut up! Edwards about to be raped.”/“What? If any one needs to get laid, it‘s him.”  That is friggin' TITANIUM GOLD.  xD!  (Seriously, I couldn't continue for like five minutes I was laughing so hard.  xD)

I know I've said it before, but it's so true: this fic just keeps getting better 'n better.  (Have I likened the fic to Barney Stinson levels of Awesome yet?  No?  I really should have - it totally is.  <3)  (And on your AN: Fod, if you went through all this just to give her a Bella transformation, that Awesome would go straight to hell - honestly, I can get behind either conclusion, ending up with Wardo or not, but Izzy has to stay Izzy.  Izzy is just...better.  xD  Very glad to hear she's keeping her Awesome.)

Author's Response:

Bahahaha I'm glad you liked it the way Barney Stinson is my idol. Seriously I absolutely love him and I think my hubby will be floored when he here's when I tell him that (he loves Barney too). Any way the next chap just got accepted so yay!

Reviewer: littleangel531 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Oh yay you updated I'm sooo loving bad ass Bella. Can't wait to see what she puts Edward threw lol

Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

loved it

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

great chapter!

update soon!

Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Dam, I think i'm in love with Izzy.

Reviewer: TheSnowHasMelted (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

wow..... emmett it kinda being um.. different??.

but that is no doubt the funniest chapter!! the conversation of who was going to get raped when was so good..!! lol

Reviewer: zorradesombra (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

I think this might be in the running for my favorite chapter. Izzy should just castrate the poor guy and get it over with. Okay, I might enjoy a longer torture method more, but still he would just stand there like the idiot he can be.

Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

It is great! Although I love it when B/E get together in all of the other stories I have read, this is so fresh and new. I love it. It is hilarious. I want more!!!!

Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

This is a fun read . . . ok, Emmett is kind of coming off as mentally retarded, but its still fun.

Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

NO, definitely did not see that one coming! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: stb551 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Wow, just came across this fic and I am LOVING it!!!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: ARenee363 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Thank the good Lord that Izzy will not become Bella. Bella annoys me in so many ways. =/

Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Edward is in TROUBLE!!!! GO IZZY!!!!! love it so much!!!

Reviewer: paris877 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Loved it, only complaint........ is that I WANT MORE!!!!!!

Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

:) excitedddd.

I love Emmet. :) he makes me smile.

Excellent chapter darling. (: cant wait for the next one.


Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

I realize that Edward deserves Izzy's wrath. I'm glad he now knows that he was wrong to leave before. I still can't help hoping for a reunion in the future, though. Izzy is stronger and independent now, so it will be a better relationship. Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Glad Edward's getting his comeuppance! Please include as much torture as possible in future chapters. I also hope that Bella-- er, Izzy eventually realizes what leaving did to Edward and the rest.

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