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Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

hah love this chap. bella i mean.. izzy should've torture ed more, lol

Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

lol everybody wants to be raped by strange  but in a funny way! xD

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

oh man I just love the Cullens, I can't wait to see the comments they make about Izzys plan for Edward, I am sure it's it's gonna be all so sweet amuzing and very entertaining. Well written, and really teriffic. But sad that the next chapter is the last update, I don't know how good I will be at waiting for updates and not just reading the chapters one after the other.


Reviewer: tashyalyn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I came across this story a few days ago and fell in love with it.  Bella taking on the angst driven ex-girlfriend is great and to top it off she has become the complete opposite of what Edward kept so hard to keep.  No longer the little lamb but more like the Lion.   As for song choices so hard to determine.  Been listening to a lot of variety of music.  Personally I think there is so many songs for different chapters.  One song that sort of fits is Bitch by Meredith Brooks, another is a song called Cry for You by Sepetember, The Bird and the Worm by The Used, and I think Famous Last Words by My Chemical Romance fits too.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

love Esme and a happy, Love toddler Emmett even more, and revenge is a dish best served cold, Badass Izzy moving in with the Cullens, ooh this is gonna be so good. Edwards not gonna know what hit him. bring on the next chapter.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Izzy's back, Izzy's back, Izzy's back. Sweet heads are gonna roll. bring on the next chapter.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

I don't know weather to feel sad or happy for Bella. I am sad that she is so angry, but gad that she has become stronger and more in control of her life, than the original character. But it is time for Edward to be dealt with, can't wait.

Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

...oh, wow.  No sooner did I submit the review for Ch9 than the alert for this one came through.  xD  Talk about a timing treat!  (P.s.: Barney is everyone's idol - and if he isn't, he should be.  <3)

I'm absolutely adoring the relationship you're building between Izzy and Rose; they compliment each other so well now, and reading their banter is a total kick.  Also have to comment on how much I love that this chapter went from all that badassy, Wardo-torturing awesomeness to that fantastic brotherly bonding moment at the end.  I'm always impressed when authors can take the feel of a fic and totally 180 it in the span of a moment; it takes skill to do that, and authors that can just shine - and you, m'dear, are brilliant.  Absoultely fantastic chapter.

As for your song question...hmmm.  Ok, I'm blaming the fact that I've had my Supernatural playlist on loop for a few days now on this, but the song that immediately came to mind was AC/DC's "Highway To Hell".  xD  Now, just for this chapter (more like just for Edward), The Fray's "Cable Car (Over My Head)" seems a bit appropriate, too - and Fleetwood Mac's "Rhiannon" (for 'Bella'-Izzy, from Wardo's POV - though, granted, that one might be a bit of a stretch).  (*snerk*  Though, given the end of this chapter, now I'm wondering how appropriate Brad Paisley's "Flowers" is gonna be for him.  xD  (Best take-me-back song ever - "Tell me how many flowers have to die before you give our love another try?" xD))

General-wise, I could also see AC/DC's "Back In Black" or CCR's "Bad Moon Rising" (*snerk*  I should say "Proud Mary", just for kicks ;P) - I dunno, I just really see Izzy with all that good ol' rock.  Venturing away from that, maybe:
+ Delta Goodrem's "Nobody Listened" (It's the only angry song I've heard from her, as normally she does love-ish songs, but it's actually pretty good.)
+ Charlotte Sometimes's "How I Could Just Kill A Man" (*snerk* I just had to.  =D)
+ Flogging Molly's "Within A Mile Of Home" ("'Don't turn your back on me / Don't ever let me down'/ She said, 'I picked you up each time / Before you hit the ground / Your selfish face is now erased / When someone mentions you / And the darkness that you left is all that's left inside'"),
+ Missy Higgins's "Dusty Road"
+ CCRW's "This Time Around"
+ Jo Dee Messina's "My Give A Damn's Busted" ("Well, you filled up my head with so many lies / Twisted my heart 'til something snapped inside / I'd like to give it one more try / But my give a damn's busted" - And that's just the opening stanza!)
+ Jo Dee's "Who's Crying Now?" ("Who's crying now? / Finally figured out it could've been forever / Who's crying now? / Knowing it's too late to get us back together / I'm finally free, back on my feet / It sure ain't me who's crying now")
+ Miranda Lambert's "Kerosene"
+ SHEDaisy's "Lucky 4 You, Tonight I'm Just Me" (I'll admit, this is more a joke suggestion; I can just see this song running through Eddie's head, though.  xD  "Number Five just cries a river a minute / Seven wants to tie you up and drown you in it, yeah / Fourteen just wants to say 'So long, bygones' / Thirty-two wants to do things to you that'll make you blush / Ten'll key the silver Volvo El Camino that you love so much / And there ain't nobody wants to mess with Twenty-three" - I'm seeing Izzy as 7, 10, and 23.  xD) it obvious I'm a total music whore?  xD  (I know, I know - you said a song, and I gave you like...fifteen...but hey, options!  xD;; )

Reviewer: Lunar Eclipse (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

You are so awesome writer this last couple of chapters were fu-tastic I can't wait to read more. As for songs I like Paramore Decoy and CrushCrushCrush also The Toadies Possum Kingdom and Evanscence My Immortal

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

oh man, oh man, that went well, can't wait to see what happens next, it's just getting so exciting, interesting and oh so very entertaining.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Oh man, bring on more Emmett and Bella action, sorrythat she "Hates" edward, but I am sure Emmett, Alice and Jasper will have a plan to work on changing that "small" fact. Can't wait to see what happens next, or what made Bella so Badass.

Reviewer: bookwyrm (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great story...I love Emmett!

As to songs: Bitch, Meredith Brooks;

So What, Pink;

and since you mentioned Milie Cyrus, and my little sister just made me play the cd in my car: 7 Things;

and Danger Zone. :OP

Thanks for an awesome story!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I don't know what is better, Badass Bella dancing and pciking fights, or Emmett pondering what Rosalie and Edward are going to do to him when they find out what he got up to with Bella. And may I just say poor little Emmett, hes so neglected and un loved at the moment.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

oh I just love badass bella, you just gotta. I especialy love Emmetts point of view on her, I can't wait to see what they get up to now, and what happened to her. next chapter here i come.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just found this story and I can't believe how great it is, I love stories where Bella and Emmett get to bond as big brother and little sister. Badass Bella is great, I can't wait to see what her and Emmett get up to together before the Cullens find out about her, and what they get up to with the rest of the Cullens when they do. I have to go and read the next chapter now. Can't wait.

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

"Legs" by ZZ Top.  :)

Reviewer: editrix (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great story so far - I'm loving bad ass Izzy.

Song suggestion per yr request: Kiss With A Fist - Florence and the Machine.  I'm pretty sure it's on youtube.

Reviewer: MRSBellaCullenBlack (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

What I think of this chapter...Hmmm?


I loved how Edward is now that his Bella is long gone...

I love how the whole family is getting a long now...

Oh and I couldn't stop laughing when Edward tried to "decode" what Emmett was hiding from him [That cracked me up]...This chapter was excellent like all the others!

...About a song? well I'll have to look it up and choose [there are so may that I think would fit perfectly]...As soon as I find the tittles of the songs I'll added to the thread =]

Can't wait for more!!! so try to update soon...



Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...




Reviewer: oceanluvr3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

That was fun... is Edward going to embrace the naughtiness he longs for or continue to be an uptight victorian b*tch of a male??? hee hee hee. Sooo funny.

Edward need to control Bella is crazy... he wanted to destroy her bike. The boy is going down isn't he... I mean that in the not pervy way... but it would be nice for Bella if he would do it in that way too. Edward is going to have to become a man pretty quick or Bella is not going to have time for him. She does not need the moody immortal boy.

This story is so friggin good!!!!

Jonesen for  more already.

Reviewer: carms89 (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

So Hott by kid rock

Crazy Bitch by Buckcherry

This chapter rockkkkkkkkkkkkked! hhahha edward is such a geek

Reviewer: yasnaka (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

How much did I love this chapter?  Let me count the ways:

1.  I loved the fact that all of the Cullen family members felt a need to check on Bella while she was sleeping.  Bella may have become badass, but the Cullens still feel very protective of her.

2.  I love the interaction between Rose and Izzy.  Where Bella was always rather afraid of Rose before, now they are on more equal footing and I believe their friendship can blossom.

3.  I love that Edward is slowly realizing that Bella is gone, and Izzy is here to stay.  He is working on accepting her as she is.  His ideal Bella is gone, but she has been replaced by a woman who is stronger. (I always thought Bella was a little too codependent for my taste.) 

4.  Lastly, I love Emmett.  "Edward, quick, go get some jelly."  Priceless.  I loved that for all his goofiness, Emmett actually offered some really good advice to Edward.

Thanks for updating so quickly.  I love this story to pieces!

Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great fic! Can't wait to read more. I love bad ass Bella--I'm picturing her as Eliza Dushku in my head. As for songs, Sex on Fire always makes me think of Edward...and Rob! :)

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

you really do have too feel sorry for Edward a little bit.

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

This was an awesome chapter, I love the fact that Bella just doesn't care that she walked in on Rose and Em, and that she doesn't get Rose get up in her face anymore. :D

Song: If you want blood, you've got it by AC/DC :D

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