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Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I can so picture shaking her shit to Danzig - She Rides..

Well, well, well... Absolutely LUUUUV the Izzy/Rose dynamic - perfection! And bonus points for a naked Emmett.

Edward. Ah - Edward. He's like a blank canvas. I am so eager to follow and witness when the leather starts coming out. (I really need a different hobby..) I can't really say I feel bad for him at this point - I mean, c'mon.. Iz is Smokin, scantily clad and only a wall will be separating them... he so needs to look at the whole silver lining here... he gets daily doses of the only Eye Candy made especially for him. (yeah, ok.. it totally blows that he can only look, but since it makes for great reading - I'm all for his pain)

Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I love you,LOL. I can't say for sure what is my favorite chapter yet -- probly all.

I can't wait for Izzy to get mad and let Edward REALLY have it.

Keep it up and please hurry.

As far as songs go, there are so many that I can't think.


Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

This is great who would have known.  I love the bad ass Bella bring on the games!  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: semluna (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Good story, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: mellymel (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

LOL good thing i work by myself because i burst out laughing alot in this chapter!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

what is bella thinking? this is soo awesome!

Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

okay for the actual DD part ... i would haves to say either - lil johns 'from the windows to the walls' or 'swing' by savage this is what i envisaged iz dancing to in the club :)

umm okay for angry iz say maybe 'i hate everything about you' by three days grace - its kind of like - i fucking hate you - but i still love you - similar to your bell/iz person ! okay for edward - i was thinking (very cornily) 'baby when youre gone' by bryan adams and mel c hmm  i am loving this atm ...

deffo a new fave add here :) if anyone in twi world wants to ask me about ome music ideas or just for a chat hit me up on - thats right i come from aussie land :)    bee tee dubs ..... emmett rocks :)



Author's Response:

Woohoo another Aussie chick...awesome!!! Three days grace...coolness!

Cheers honey!

Reviewer: vegan_vampire (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

BUGATTI VEYRON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i want one so bad - nice tase. Loving the badass bella *sorry, Iz* let's hope she doesn't wrap the Bugatti around a pole like two people have already done.

Reviewer: twiloverr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

omg ur a genius seriously u know that right that ur a genius ok good im gunna keep reading now

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

OH!  Songs - I know it's been done, and did done again in a few fics...but I truly love the song "Closer" by Nine Inch Nails when I think of Edward and his want for Bella.


Colin James has a great tune "Keep on a Lovin' me Baby".  I totally see Bella doing a strip tease (HEAVY ON THE TEASE) for Eddie boy to that song.


Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

love this chapter. Kate Perry Hot & cold

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Awesome chapter.  Having Eddie take a page from the book of Emmett is classic.  It totally makes sense. As you so astutely pointed out..Emmett has done his share of poking the bear and waiting for its growls to peter out.


Reviewer: twiloverr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

omg im excited shes off to deal with him again i praise u im loving this story

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

i love emmett, he makes me crack up. well written

Reviewer: twiloverr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

wow at her anger at alice im loving IZ

Reviewer: twiloverr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

omg this is soo different and im loving it!!!! heaps original too xx

Reviewer: samanthag (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...


Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Wow. Where do I start? I guess by first saying that even getting to own Edward's sexual frustration is not too bad of a thing, lol. After all Edward/RPatz is the source of much sexual frustration for me, so it's only fair that Edward gets some of that back, lol.  

Now the first few paragraphs were (dare I say it?) kinda sweet. And even though I love that this story is not all sugar and roses, the sweet was kinda nice and all the Cullens being happy again and all. Besides Izzy's torture tactics wouldn't work nearly as well if Edward didn't still love her so much.

It was really, really, really sweet of Em to stop Edward from destroying Iz's bike too cause if he does something to that bike, I have a feeling that Iz may discover some way to rip him to pieces herself or just set his ass on fire, lol.

I really loved Iz striding confidently into Em and Rose's room, interrupting their fellacio and not backing down from Rose one bit. I love Rose's newfound love for little sister Iz and it was especially nice because Edward was so sure she'd be all blushing and stammering embarassed. And Emmett's perverted, shameless self just made it all that much better. Definitely my favorite scene. And I think it would be awesome if Rose and Iz teamed up to torture Edward and Emmett. You know...hint at a little girl on girl action and not let them see or know anything for sure. Or giving Edward the impression that Emmett's little threesome fantasy mgiht have a chance of becoming reality...that'd really kill him, lol. Yep, it's official your story gives me wicked, perverted ideas in my head, lol.

But no matter how wicked I become I don't think I'll be able to top the evil genius that is Izzy. Changing clothes with her lacy black panties in from of Edward, Em, and Rose was definitely a stroke of genius.

Emmett's thoughts will trying to hide stuff from Edward were hilarious. If Edward's not careful he's going to spontaneously combust from jealously and lust, lol.

Speaking of lust, between all the lust in the air and Alice getting horny about Izzy wanting to go shopping, I'd imagine Jasper is pretty damn happy to have Iz back, lol.

I have to say that I am a little surprised that Em is so willing to help Edward out cause I thought he'd be all in for some Edward torture, but then again there is as you pointed out his hope for a happy ending and you really can't deny his logic.....Edward and Bella or The Ed Man and The Z Girl...they do belong together. Poor Em is just as much of a hopeless romantic as the rest of us poor schmucks.  But that doesn't mean we can't all enjoy the torture before a HEA! :D

About the songs...the first one that popped in my head was She's a Rebel by GreenDay. I think it really suits Iz.  A few others that I had to search a bit for.... Big Gun by Ice-T, Bitch by Merideth Brooks (overplayed a bit, but the heaven and hell line really works here), and just to explore all spectrums of music choices....Gunpowder and Lead by Miranda Lambert-country and not totally specific to this situation but has the right sentiment. Can't wait to see the final playlist...I bet it will definitely kick ass!

Totally loved the story as always. Can't wait for more! You're so in my top three favorite stories right now!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

i loove it. im putting this one in my favs. its just perfect. i tink that "ill make the moves, by scenes and sirens fits the story to its every comma. update soon please

Reviewer: Swangirl666 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Right, first I fucking love love this chapter. It's awesome. For a song choice I would have to say maybe Dead Memories by Slipknot. Kind of reminds me of Bella, sorry Izzy (hehe) and what she feels and stuff. xxx

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I loved this chapter!  Again I feel Edward deserves to suffer.  How long will that be?  I love how confident Izzy/Bella is.  Is this her true self or her way of hiding?

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Yay! You updated so quickly, you star!


Loved this chapter. Rose and Emmett were so funny!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Oh how I love Em!  And most of them are legal in my state... heehee.  Thank you for the awwwwesomely fast post.   I love getting a quickie in the morning.

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Izzy is going to torment the hell out of him... LOL If only because he can't stand her new personality.

I love the fact that she walked in on Rose and Em and didn't even blink.  If anything she just drove Rose up the wall, causing their friendship to start... finally.

Alice is going to have so much fun with Izzy.  She actually likes shopping for once.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Darn, I just reached the end of the story, no more chapters, and I have to wait for the next update, I am not a patient person, so please don't keep me waiting too long for the next update, especially if it is as entertaining and well written as this one. I love the whole Emmett and Izzy interaction and Rose just adds more to the mix. A Possessive and jelouse Edward is always great to read but even better was the conversation between Edward and Emmett at the end of the chapter.

I can't wait to see how Izzy torments Edward next, and what he starts doing to prove that he loves her and to negate her hate of him. Like I said before please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. Tossing up between Meradith brooks BITCH and Queens WE WILL ROCK you as the theme song for this story.

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