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Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

This was a great chapter.. i laughed so hard with the Bella/Rose/Emmett bedroom scene!

Reviewer: seethesky (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Really fun story.  I love bad ass Bella - I'd like to read what Eddie thought of the tattoo.

 

Song - I go with "Bad Girlfriend" by Theory of a Deadman.

Reviewer: InnocentSinnr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Evil Angel by Breaking Benjamin

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

JayJay This was so damn fast!!!! You rock! Thank you for pulling an all nighter Yah know I love ya for it!

I know how I said that he deserved everything he got....ok but it's Edward and I already melted....awww he still deserves it but I feel so damn sorry for him. I can't wait to see where things go from here.  I love Emmett though! Man he is crackin me up! I absolutely think Rose and Bella as friends rocks on a whole new level! I am excited about this whole shopping trip thing.

So as far as songs go....short notice for now cause I'm totally gonna go search some more out. But first pops in mind Who's Cryin Now by Saving Jane,then I hate you so much right now bu Kelis (however the latter I haven't heard in such a long time all I remember is anger and screaming LOL see ya on the thread!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I havent read this chapter yet but i know its gonna be a killer!!

and i will sing you your praises when i have read it - just tell me what to sing after i sing my own praises to you.

:)

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Wow this is going to be intense!!!


 


Come on Emmett will Izzy rape you and Jasper?


I think that you and jasper would be ripped to pieces first!


And she would most likely hook up with Alice and Rose before you guys if ever - so dont hold you breath (pardon the pun) LOL.


 


Esme is def on Izzy's side even after hearing how she is going to make Edwards life hell. Maybe she thinks if Iz stays long enough she will love Edward again - - As if –I think that’s a keep dreaming thing…


 


Will we have any more of this chapter but from the others POV – maybe as a tie in like in lost and found there is an extended chapter with Rose & Emmett (called A Match Made In The Bathroom) even though the story is a Bella POV story.


Please! it would be really interesting to be in the room with the others…


 


Every one had to know that Izzy would never rape Edward… She cant stand him touching her so why would she? Cant believe that Esme said that about Edwrd needing to got laid (it was her wasn’t it?)LOL.


Once again sorry it’s a long and pointless post.


But keep up the excellent work I cant wait for the next chapter. (I didnt ever get out half of what i wanted to post)

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

HAHAHAHAHAHA

Reviewer: darkling (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

LOve it!  And got to be - Billy Idol, Rebel Yell

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Emmett is DEEP...and right...

And Edward is LOST, so SUNK...LOL!

Kathie

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

ha ha ha ha well when Izzy was attacking Edward and being all up on him, the only song that kept coming in my head was Sex Shooter, by Appollonia, I know its an older one, but that song just kept coming back!!!!  for the whole story, I am not sure let me think.  this chapter is perfect in every sense of the word Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I liked this chapter.  What I really want to hear is Izzy telling Ed about all the dangerous things she has done over the years.  That would blow his mind!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Another great chapter!!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

OH EDWARD!!BWAHAHA!!! I AM LAUGHING AT THE POOR GUYS REACTION TO BELLA!! HOLY HELL! HE IS IN DEEP TROUBLE!!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!! EMMETT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD!! ALL OF THEM WERE HILARIOUS ABOUT BELLA POSSIBLY RAPING EDWARD!!

Reviewer: 2footprints (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

My coworker and I are absolutely addicted to this website and we both adore this story, please continue updating ASAP or else we may actually have to start working!

Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

God I love Bella getting under Edward's skin. His mini-meltdowns are hilarious! But turn around is fair play, and I look forward to him causing the same effect in her. Eventually.

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

OH and another song... it's a little older, but Marcy Playground - Sex and Candy.

Hangin' round downtown by myself
And I had so much time
To sit and think
about myself
And then there she was
Like double cherry pie
Yeah there she was
Like disco superfly
I smell sex and
candy here
Who's that lounging
in my chair
Who's that casting
devious stares
In my direction
Mama this surely
is a dream Hangin' 'round downtown by myself
And I had too
much caffeine
And I was thinkin'
'bout myself
And then there she was
In platform double suede
Yeah there she was
Like disco lemonade
I smell sex and
candy here
Who's that lounging
in my chair
Who's that casting
devious stares
In my direction
Mama this surely
is a dream
Mama this surely
is a dream
Yeah mama this must
be my dream

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Too friggin' hilarious. I think I love Rose and Izzy getting along! And I'm cracking up that Alice still can't really see Bella's future yet so the announcement to go shopping threw her. Too good! Edward needs to step up his game. Perhaps a trip to a club where instead of Bella making E jealous- perhaps E gets a little dirty dancing in himself. HA HA HA.

OK... a song? Hmmm? How about Kings of Leon - Sex is on Fire
Lay where you're laying, don't make a sound
I know they're watching, they're watching
All the commotion, the kiddie like play
Has people talking, talking

You, your sex is on fire

The dark of the alley, the breaking of day
The head while I'm driving, I'm driving
Soft lips are open, knuckles are pale
Feels like you're dying, you're dying

You, your sex is on fire
Consumed with what's to transpire

Hot as a fever, rattling bones
I could just taste it, taste it
If it's not forever, if it's just tonight
Oh, it's still the greatest, the greatest, the greatest

You, your sex is on fire
And you, your sex is on fire
Consumed with what's to transpire

And you, your sex is on fire
Consumed with what's to transpire

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I like how she is getting to Edward so easyly. Maybe he should put some fire under her ass too. the song I think fits is "Bad Girlfriend" by Theory of the dead man.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I love it.

Izzy and Rose best friends who would have thought.

Boy does Edward get it. Well he got himself in this let's see if he's strong enough to get out of it and in Izzy's good grace.

Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Another great chapter

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

OH! Bella is going to torture him isn't she? But with advise form Emmett I think he'll make if through. And it looks like now that Edward had insight he can slowly start breaking sown her walls. I can't wait for the nest update.

Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Loved the chapter - have no songs.

Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Emmett is awesome of course. But what made Rosalie decide not to be so jealous??? The notion of getting back at Edward??

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Oh, if you have a strip tease in the near future, 'Feelin' Love' by Paula Cole ("You make me feel like a candy apple, Red and Horny...")!  Drives my husband nuts when I sing and dance to this...maybe Iz can do a little singin' too!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great chapter!

All I can come up with for songs is 'Brickhouse' :)

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