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Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

i thought it was very good but i want more torture from bella/izzy , edward deserves it

this one of stories

revenge is sweeter (than you ever were) by the veronicas

Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

the shins - turn on me

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Now, don't get me wrong - Izzy/Bella was a complete doormat/pushover in Twilight.

But, damnit. I always feel sorry for Edward (smacks head in frustration).

 

Reviewer: Marn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Love this and as for a song All i can think of is buck cherry Crazy Bitch.

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Somehow, I don't think so.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Best chapter yet, hilarious! I can't wait for more!

About the song, I listen to country and I am not sure there is a song out there in that genre that would express Izzy, she is one of a kind :)

Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great chapter. Song for Izzy...well,it's got to be Bitch by Meredith Brook! x

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I already gave a review,but had to think about the song......How about........."BACK IN BLACK" by AC/DC.........."glad to be back" "nine lives".......she certainly came back differently!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

LOl another hilarious chapter!  Loved Izzy's taunting of Edward.

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

And...Tom Kaulitz  "I want to do bad things with you"

:)

 

 

Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

love your story

Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Luv it luvit ducking luv it.... Oh the sexual tension is going to build like. Volcano ready to erupt....but even better is the emotional pull these two have on eachother...bella may be iZzy now but she still loves him, I like the song. "Back to You" by John Mayer for these little lovers...

Back to you
It always comes around
Back to you
I tried to forget you
I tried it's too late

Over you
I'm never over you
Over you
Something about you
It's just the way you move
The way you move me

Yeah, I'm so good at forgetting
And I quit every game I play
But forgive me, love
I can't turn and walk away

And on and on...
I know it's a little tame.. But give it a listen .the first part reminds me of Izzy, the second "Back to me" part reminds me of Edward.

Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Luv it luvit ducking luv it.... Oh the sexual tension is going to build like. Volcano ready to erupt....but even better is the emotional pull these two have on eachother...bella may be iZzy now but she still loves him, I like the song. "Back to You" by John Mayer for these little lovers...

Back to you
It always comes around
Back to you
I tried to forget you
I tried it's too late

Over you
I'm never over you
Over you
Something about you
It's just the way you move
The way you move me

Yeah, I'm so good at forgetting
And I quit every game I play
But forgive me, love
I can't turn and walk away

And on and on...
I know it's a little tame.. But give it a listen .the first part reminds me of Izzy, the second "Back to me" part reminds me of Edward.

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

i love the new izzy....seriously.....but i still feel sorry for edward.  i love the emmett/rosalie/izzy banter.  that is just plain awesome....

can't wait for more

Reviewer: jessjohnston10 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

That was one of the best stories ever!! I loved original versions but this was waaay better--I can barely contain myself to wait for more!!! Pleeeeaaase let there be a lot more :)

Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Loved the new chapter!

but wouldnt it be werid for bella, being 24 or so, dating edward who is 17? she got freaked out about that in the books so idk :) oh and I cant wait for her to start dating her neighbour, at least I hope that she is going to do that hehe , great work!!

Lisa

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

That was a cool chapter poor edward.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

I cant wait to see how this paly out :)

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cerenity (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Can't tell you how much I love this story.  Love, Love, Love it.   So glad to see something other then a immature, weak and/or broken/injured bella.  Love strong, angry Izzy.   Also love Emmet.   What a riot.  Thanks so much for all the hard work on this.  Great story line. 

One question:  Wouldn't Jasper know immediately how Izzy is really feeling in all of this and wouldn't Edward then know as well by reading his thoughts?  Just thinking that maybe some clarification on that would be good. 

thanks again for the awesome story. 

Reviewer: yuriinsane (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

ah song not sure so many but it was amzing poor poor Edward lol love your story ahh keep it coming

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

This was a great chapter.. i laughed so hard with the Bella/Rose/Emmett bedroom scene!

Reviewer: seethesky (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Really fun story.  I love bad ass Bella - I'd like to read what Eddie thought of the tattoo.

 

Song - I go with "Bad Girlfriend" by Theory of a Deadman.

Reviewer: InnocentSinnr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Evil Angel by Breaking Benjamin

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

JayJay This was so damn fast!!!! You rock! Thank you for pulling an all nighter Yah know I love ya for it!

I know how I said that he deserved everything he got....ok but it's Edward and I already melted....awww he still deserves it but I feel so damn sorry for him. I can't wait to see where things go from here.  I love Emmett though! Man he is crackin me up! I absolutely think Rose and Bella as friends rocks on a whole new level! I am excited about this whole shopping trip thing.

So as far as songs go....short notice for now cause I'm totally gonna go search some more out. But first pops in mind Who's Cryin Now by Saving Jane,then I hate you so much right now bu Kelis (however the latter I haven't heard in such a long time all I remember is anger and screaming LOL see ya on the thread!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

I havent read this chapter yet but i know its gonna be a killer!!

and i will sing you your praises when i have read it - just tell me what to sing after i sing my own praises to you.

:)

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