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Reviewer: jessicai67 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Got my song for ya.
Gives You Hell - All American Rejects lol
Reviewer: abba (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I love your story. I find Izzy fascinating and Emmett is absolutely hilarious. I hope that Izzy and Edward end up together in the end, it would be heart wrenching if they didn't work things out after she found him. It would be nice to hear even more of her backstory and some of his and of course I am looking forward to all of the exploits between them while she is punishing him and he is trying to win her over. I look forward your updates. Thank you for writing this for us, we appreciate you gift.
Reviewer: bluemaybits (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
awesome! i love bad ass bella! please keep updating!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Oh I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hilarious!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jessicai67 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
OMG! This is like great. Please make the torture last. I absolutely love it. Iz is awesome, I can't wait to see what she does to Edward from now on.
Reviewer: BonjourLorna (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Amazing!!!!!!!! woaah your good (: can't wait for the next.
Hmm...
Breaking Benjamin - dance with the devil :P
Nickelback - This is how you remind me
Reviewer: Jj Em Gothical (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yes! Yes!
I've been gone and Edward is shocked!
mmm.... He should be fighting back.
The Wars begin!
Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! SO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT TAKE ON EVERYTHING, LOVING IT ,MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE.MORE PLEASE.
OH BEFORE I FORGET DID I MENTIONED IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
BWAHAHA!! POOR EDWARD! BELLA IS PUTTING HIM THROUGH HELL AND BUT GOOD!!!LOVED HOW BELLA JUST WALKED IN ON EMMETT AND ROSE!! HILARIOUS!!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!
Reviewer: furious kitten (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I just started reading your story and I wanted to say that it amuses me, which is nice because I've been reading a lot of angsty fics recently. Emmett is so child-like but it makes me giggle. Song for this chapter: "One Way or Another" by Blondie.
One thing I would have liked to have seen in this chapter though: you mention something about Edward knowing what Emmett heard Bella say in her sleep (when she says she hates him), but we don't actually see when that happens and his immediate reaction. I would have liked to have seen that!
Reviewer: InHisDreams (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Just the way you made Bella change into this rough woman one word! WOW! can't wait for the next chapter ^^
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Loved it. Edward should be tortured a lot more in future chapters!
Reviewer: zorradesombra (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I like this chapter if for no other reason than it made me laugh often and hard. Ummm, I dunno about a song though. I guess I will leave that for others.
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
“I don’t care what you merely think, Cullen.”
I love that line. Izzy isn't impressed by that "earlier era cadence" like Bella was - and I love her for it. I can't wait for more torment.
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
songs - when i think about this story if think of the following songs -
AC/DC - Soul Stripper & Ballbreaker
Billy Talent - The Ex & Sympathy (not sure bout that one)
Grinspoon - More Than You Are
some of the somgs are only like one or two versus that fit with the story.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. please
Reviewer: jana (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Well, this fic's dirty, funny, sad, crazy,...GREAT. I loved it.
Music: You had Me (Joss Stone),
I cried my last tear last night (Lisa Stanfield)
Do tou remember? (Phil Collins)
I could die for you (Red Hot Chili Peppers)
P.S.: I hope you like then. The first is the better for DDwtDH. :)
Reviewer: lizzy_koh (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
AWESOME!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next installment, please don't make Emmett such a baby though, he was sooooo coool in the first chapter.
Your Bella reminds me of Faith from Buffy, and she was cool. Shook Me All Night Long by AC/DC and Hurts so Good by John Mellencamp, I can really see Bella getting into these songs while she dances. OH and I know that I am steeling it from, someone elses story but Closer by Nine Inch Nails.
looking forward to the next one, keep up the good work
Liz
Reviewer: Jinxed_Angel (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Sorry, sorry, sorry!!! I haven't reviewed in two chapter's, and I promised myself I'd do it every chapter. Sorry.
Anyway, I believe that Eddy should have been raped by Izzy because he really is a prude. lol. So glad that Izzy isn't making this easy for him. But I have a few questions...
What about her job at the bar? Will all of her cars and bike's be moved to the Cullen's garage? Will Eddy get a big, and I mean big, sack off of Izzy? And do the La Push gnag comt into it at all?
An Avid Reader
Jinxed
Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I love it!
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
i love this story!!! keep up the great plot!
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
YAY!!! I LOVE this story!!!!
U + YOUR HAND?
Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
LOVE GAME LOL BY LADY GAGA I DONT KNOW WHY BUT IT'S FUNNY! AND OUR DOING A GREAT JOB PUTING EDWARDS BALLS IN IZZYS HANDS!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I love that Rose and Izzy are getting along. When she walked in on Rose and Emmett it made me laugh and Emmett, as always, was brilliant in this chapter.
Loved it.
As for a song, the only one I can think of at the moment would be Strutter by Kiss. It kinda fits with the new Bella/Izzy.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
I already gave you a song back in like chapter 5 - was the only way to express how i was feeling
song - Like wow - wipeout
here is a link for the lrics - http://www.lyricsfreak.com/h/hoodoo+gurus/like+wow+wipeout_20236524.html
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