Reviewer: jenn9394 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Man...this is great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Why can't Alice see Bella? I think they are heading to a bar with wolves. That would be why Alice's vision started to go fuzzy trying to see Emmett.
Off to read the next chapter now. Until then...
Jennifer
Reviewer: jenn9394 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG...I am so loving this Bella. I can't wait to see what brought all this on. I'm actually surprised I'm reviewing. The first chapter has got me hooked, and I really can't wait to read the next chapter. When I'm excited, I usually skip the review part.
I can see Emmett is going to have a blast with Bella. I can't wait until the rest of the Cullen's find out about Bella. I wonder if Alice has seen this in a vision? Again, can't wait to find out.
Off to read the next chapter. Until then...
Jennifer
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
My second time reading this and I still get a huge kick out of Emmett and his reactions to Iz/Bella. Love it.
Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
u r amazing! i couldn't tear myself from this story- i read almost the entire night regardless of the fact i had to wake up early for work!- this is something to say about it!!!
i loved how u developed ur characters! yes, they r yours entirely!! u own them! thanx , that was an incredible night!
i'm looking forward to the sequel!
i wish u an easly delivery! have fun and joy and happiness in ur children, husband,friends and work!
Author's Response: *Bows* I try...lol!
Thank you...I really wanted to make them my own and I tried my darnest to keep them away from the holes other authors place them in so I'm happy that people notice that! :)
Sequel due so very soon!
Thank you so much...
Cheers!
Reviewer: browneyes214 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
Yeah, I like Izzy, she is so cool. Go girl. Great picture too just wish it was bigger. I have a hard time seeing things but what I can see of the pic I love. Great work.
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
awsome....i have no other words, just fucking awesome! can't wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: Lol...I'll take those words happily! Sequel is just around the corner...
Cheers!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
Thank you so much for these amazing characters and this awesome tale! I can't wait to read your other works but for now I've been reading almost non-stop and it's way past my bedtime! You're just too good!!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 32:Explanations
Loved it. Trust was never misplaced. You're a genius! *mwah*
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night
Oh I trust you but dear god you went from zero to 160 on the angst meter in no time flat! Yeargh!!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Wow this was a complete shocker. You've had me eating out of your grubby little paw all the way up to here but right now I'm torn. Who the hell doesn't want eternity with a love and a family like that?? A world where a human Bella and vamp Edward live out their days just does not jive for me. How can she do that to all of them? She's telling every vamp in the family that she's not willing to be there for them forever, that being human is better, and she's not willing to become what they are. If I were Alice or Emmett I'd be crushed. Sure they'll understand eventually, but what happens to the family when she dies and Edward follows??
I'm sticking with you cause I have faith you'll make this make sense, cause it just doesn't to me now. :(
Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow interesting start Love it! cant wait to read on!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Izzy saves the day! She is *so* hotter than Buffy. Rather like Faith actually. Always my fav!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Oh noes indeed. Totally unexpected, hats off to you my dear!!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
"Now I just had to sit back and wait for Izzy to come to me."
pfft. Yeah right.
BTW, seriously? How can Edward change so much that Bella's not even his singer anymore? IDK that's a stretch for me.
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Cool pirates!
This makes me unjustifiably happy, but I'm not complaining!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Can I just say how incredibly awesome Emmett is in this? I can? Oh good! Awesomeness!!
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
I love this story but the niggly little typos are driving me batty..."make you[r] life a living hell" and "should [have]" instead of "should of". Please!
BTW, payback's a bitch for Edward. A bitch named Izzy. Yow! :D
Reviewer: NutsAndBerries (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
I'm already in love with this Bella. You got me all teared up when she broke down at the library. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: eniny (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
“No! I’m still being held by a cold dead man” Loved that one! :D
And I like this "new" Edward. Difference is always good.
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever
omgee! mean! but...but...she didnt want to be changed!! oh no! is she gonna be pissed?! or maybe she'll be oky with it, i mean it's either that or death right??
Reviewer: bismarckfairy (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
When Emmett said "How hard is it?" I thought he was making a joke about Edward's pants problem. LOL.
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's
jealous?! who me?! never...*coughs and dies of jealousy*
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
thank fuck! angst ward is sexy and all...but really?! just a tad much?! i do like this new one though...yum!
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
uhoh, someones in trooooouuuuuuublllleee! **laughs, squeals and claps excitedly, alice style**
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
WOO! GO BELLA! I MEAN IZZY! sorry emmett! unfortunate he didn't get raped though, worried for his virginity?! damn i'm so pissed at him, and if it wasn't edward i would probably hate him right now!
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