very well thought out. i was wondering how bella turned into izzy. by the way, love the name

whew never thought about how mad bella would/should be at alice. nice

I loved this chapter! I didn't see it coming!

Accomplises!!! Sweet-dam-tastic!

I have to say this has been the most original fan fic I've read in awhile. Thanks for making me start a new story.

Btw, the chapter was awesome.

Author's Response:

Wow...thank you so much. It means a lot to me that people actually review but when you go and write something like that well it just blows me away.

Cheers!

Still Cool, keep it coming...

I know that you have touched on how Bella changed to Izzy, but have you thought about giving more details? eg.. how she got the job at the bar in the first place, and how she transformed from klutzy Bella to graceful Izzy,  and the stories involved in winning the bikes and the full story of how she got the dream car ... maybe as another story altogether or as inserts to this one, it is something that I would be interested in reading and probably many of your other readers.

Hope I haven't gone to far but I love this story, I check everyday for updates.

Thanks heaps

Lizzy

 

 

Author's Response:

Hehe! Well you'll be happy to know that I have created a series of one shots about missing moments in Izzy's life. The are being validated right now so favourite me as an author and you'll get the update!

 

Another fun chapter.   Really enjoying the characterizations you've presented, and can't wait to continue on and see where you're leading us.  Izzy is a lot of fun, her sense of independence is very refreshing, but at the same time I can't help but feel that she's just using the tough exterior as a protective shield against her emotions.  We know she was hurt in the past, and I'm sure she wants to prevent that from happening again, at any cost.  To me it seems like it's the same reason she's so willing to make Edward suffer, a protective measure because she doesn't want to let him go, but at the same time she doesn't want him to get too close because that would allow for the possibility of her getting hurt again.  A very interesting concept.  Can't wait to see where you take us next!

Another great chapter... Loved the 'girl time'. I'm looking forward to more torturing Edward, though...

I so love you!!! I really enjoyed the girl time in this chapter.  I love those badass women!

I love this story, but i do hope in the end Izzy and Edward can be togther.

cant wait for the next chapters.

qreat chapter update soon

I know exactly how Eddie feels. This past weekend some middle schoolers made a fan club for me soon to be bf. how dare they!