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Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
Emmett, again, takes the cake.
Author's Response: Holy Crap...I only just realized who you actually were. My god now I'm really blushing because I really love your fic. I think you have just boosted my ego up a couple of notches, hehe!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
OMFG Go Bella! Edward was like a child being led to candy. But, honestly, so far Emmett is stealing the show!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
Ut effing oh!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
Uh oh! Good backstory.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Cool reunion.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Bad Ass Bella indeed! Edward is in so much trouble.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Loved the ST in this chapter but also Emmett's protectiveness
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Awesome!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh, love this premise! And LOVED Emmett in this chap!
Reviewer: theirishone (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Damnit! I ran outta chapters...translated, I really love this bad-ass Izzy you've created. Can't wait to read more (falls on my knees and begs like a crazy woman) P-L-E-A-S-S-S-E-E-E! :)
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
love it! can't wait to see what the girls have in mind. :)
Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Now I was just as bitchy as she was, able to hold my own against her. She no longer scared me, and I no longer annoyed her. We were on equal footing. - That's got to be one of my favorite things about this fic: Iz and Rose get a chance to be pals, or at least stand up to each other. I friggin' love their dynamic (she says for the 100th time... xD). Also: love Iz's nickname for her. (Iz, Ro, and Al - sounds like a Mad Gab mashup. xD)
“For coming back. For fighting for us when we didn‘t fight for you.” I smiled when he pulled back and kissed my forehead. - D'aaaawww. I love that. Jazz and Bell, when done properly, is my second fav (next to Em/Bell//Em/Iz, 'cause they're just made of awesome and win); you're Jazz/Iz is perfect here - love their whole scene.
...aside from that little run in with Lauren Mallory... - WAIT WHAT?! I take back what I said about wanting to see the Mike/Iz interaction - THAT'S the one you should missing scene!fic/flashback! Oh my damn...that would be brilliant. That would be abosolutely brilliant! xD
I doubt she even realized what she was holding, until I raised my eyebrows at her. She gasped and chucked them away from her like they were covered in acid. She looked utterly disgusted with herself. - *SNERK* Oh, Alice. You are made of pure awesome. <333
“I can but it’s Mike who will call first. He still thinks he has a chance ‘cause your still single.” - *SNERK* Ok, so much better than actually having him run into her. xD I want to feel bad for Jessica 'n Mike, I really do, but...yeah. I just don't. xD
“Yeah and I do love him Iz,” she sighed and picked some lint off her dress, “but he put us through some fucked up shit, and it’s time for some payback.” - *bouncing up and down* Alice, Alice, Alice. Her awesome rivals Mason's. <333
I love these three together; they are so deliciously evil - can't wait to see what they come up with to torture Wardo. xD Love this chapter - one of my favorites! <333
Reviewer: wahine (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
I loved the bonding time with the three girls. Now it's time to get home and torture Edward by trying on some of the newly-bought lingerie in front of him. :D
Reviewer: LadyKai220 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
update soon
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
I was laughing sooo hard reading it. Great job!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
I cant wait to see him get tourtured more. lol.
Reviewer: ash_golden (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Awesome! I love it! Keep it coming.
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Funny! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: hptwilightlover (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
AwsomeMORE More please update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Torture pure torture! Am going to go insane waiting for next chapter!! .
Izzy should happen to run into Jessica again but this time Mike be there and Izzy with some insanely hot guy lol. Ohhh the girls could also replay Mike in a private moment with Izzy – that would be funny as to wether it be a she breaks her nose moment or a Izzy teasing Mike with her closeness to his body lol.
i think the reason that Izzy didn't think about teaming up with Alice & Rose is she was too busy settling in and having fun play by play. how long has she been living in the house now? i know Alice and Rose want to up the ante but if the little things are still getting to him shouldn't she continue till they are becoming just bearable to him then up the ante - How do Carlisle and Esme feel about Izzy torturing him?
Reviewer: rt04 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
I can so totally see all of them sitting together and playing something like "I never" or "truth or dare" (totally alice's idea of course) and having bella shock the shit out of edward at how.... "changed" Izzy is after hearing her answers. love this story.. and the chapter was awesome.
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Emmett is a bad influence, but a fun one.
Lol, good chapter, you always make me giggle.
Alice.x
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
ok i love izzy but i kind of feel bad for edward ... will there be any sexual tension btw the 2? i mean can they really gofrom being in so much love to nothing ... *sigh* i dont know ... i guess i want some hot stomach turning breath stopping ... core heating ... sexual tension btw our fav couple eddie and izzy) ... cant wait to hear the plans
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
ok i don't know if i can take esme "will you shut up? edward's about to be raped." lovely
eddie's a VIRGIN na na
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
OK seriously. Alice slaps Emmet, who slaps Jasper, who makes Emmet cry. WOW i almost wet my pants.
"Jedi roll" you really need to be published.
Emmett squealing. Life is good.
Author's Response: Hehe! Are you new to the story??? I noticed you reviewed on a few chappies before this one. Yes my world is a constant internal struggle not to giggle at the crazy shit I come up with. Ah to be published...it is a dream!
Thanks izziey (cool name by the way *wink*)
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