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Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

I'm very jealous. lol.

Brilliant Chapter.

Alice.x



Author's Response:

*sigh* I always love it when one of my favourite authors submits a review. I know you've done it heaps before but still I can't stop the stupid lil squeal that escapes my mouth when I read you've reviewed.

Thanks Alice.

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

sexy time w/Naughtyward, hmmm... yes, definitely.

Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Aww, it just keeps getting better and better! More please, oh talented one ;)

Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Hahahah niiice. Ha! I love how cool Edward's acting... ah! He's driving me crazy!! Vondaful!

Reviewer: DeeDubbs (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

I LOVE THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IZZY AND HOW EDWARD'S MOOD HAS CHANGED. ITS GREAT. LOVIN IT!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

ohh both Izzy and Ed are playing Russian roulette now... wonder who'll be the one to snap and 'fess the feelings first? hehehehe

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

very, very jealous, how can one girl have so much fun in such a short space of time. But I am glad to see more of brother bear, and the continuing budding relationship with her more mature southern brother. But I really loved the new bad ass version of Edward, he's so hot and naughty. I think he might actually deserve Izzy, and I get the feeling she is starting to think the same way.

I am glad you updated so soon, but I can't wait to see what happens next, so please please please don't keep us waiting for too long for the next one.

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Wow! When do we get the next chapter?

Reviewer: aliceinforks (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

i love this shit, :D

 

i can't wait till tomorrow comes so i can finish it!

Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

God! I just L-O-V-E tough Izzy. I wish I had that kick ass attitude. Hurry up and update I want to see her kick more ass!

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Awesome once again girlie!  I love how often you update it helps keep me interested!  Love the dancing with Emmett and you doesn't love a Naughtyward!  I can't wait to see how Edward turns Izzy's game around on her! 
MORE!  MORE!  MORE!  :D

Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

best part of all three. that bitch.

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

mmmmm Edward fucking Cullen. I will take Naughtyward any day! Great chapter --- cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Yes!!!!!! That. Was a great chapter.....I'm really hoping them two hook up soon!!!lol

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

mmmm mmmm mmmm mmmm mmmm.

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

Come on Edward you dumb ass LEARN!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

Revenge is soooo sweet!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Bella is bad ass but I hope it's not too late too. I am a dork who loves a happy ending! = )

Reviewer: samanthag (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Two words.....   F-ING HOT!!! ugh please please please tell me you are updating the next chapter very soon, i can hardly take the anticipation!! hehe lovin the bad boy Edward has become ;)

Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Totes Jealous!! lol

All so awesome I'm not sure which to comment on.  

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... love it!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

OH YA! A little dirty dancing with Edward mmmmmmmmm! can't wait til the next update.

Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

lol! Love it!

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

So Edward is playing coy and Izzy is struggling to keep her cool?  Awesome!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

OMG Emmett cracks me the hell up. AND FANTASTIC CHAPTER!

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