Way to go Eddie! So needed his POV! Can't wait for Izzy vs the World. Reminds me of Chuck episode names...

Thanks for the update! It rocked ! ~~ meg

You gotta love all the reverse pyschology going on here.I think its hilarious. I'm looking forward to the next update.

wonderful !!!

more please!!!!

Whoa!  Eddie sure is playing Izzy - and it's hot!  I can't wait to read what happens next - is Izzy *really* as tough as she acts?? Somehow I don't think so....   Please update again soon!

Ooooohhhh, I just love Naughtiward.  I'm a little embarassed to say I fell for his act in the last chapter.  So happy to see he's in control.  Bring it on Izzy.

I've got to say, I love Izzy. Finally, "Bella" has a backbone and the courage to stand up for herself. However, as of this chapter, I cannot stand this Edward. He's a manipulative jerk. If anyone was justified in getting revenge, it was Bella/Izzy. Edward doesn't seem to have a care in the world about who he uses in his quest to get his prize. You even stated Izzy is lashing out, which is completely understandable. Edward seems to be throwing a temper tantrum. He appears to have forgotten why she was upset in the first place. Sure, she became stronger both physcially and emotionally after he left, but at what price? I think Edward needs to go through some of the emotional hell she went through before he can even think about redeeming himself or even playing this little revenge game with her. It will be interesting to see where you take this. I hope this Edward gets his act together.

Ok your a good writer but you turned Edward into horny guy and not some one who loved and miss his women. You turned him into some one who really doesn't care about his sister and is using her. I don't know how i feel but i think I'm not into this story as far as Twilight. I loved the way it was going but now he is too much of an asshole for me.

Author's Response:

Okay I'll let you in on something. Edward left Bella in New Moon. There relationship was completely one sided. Edward held all the power. When Izzy returned Izzy held all the power and now...now they are getting to even ground. They still have a lot of growing up to do because they are still wrapped in their own pain. Edward still loves his family and Izzy but he's not angsty anymore. *sigh* I'm sorry if you don't like the way it has turned out...I do have big plans for both of them. The sad thing is I can't please everyone and for that I'm sorry!

can you update sooner PLEASE. I will give you ANYTHING you want. Name it. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How about a naked Eddie with a cherry and whip cream, chocolate, and carmeal. PLEASE!!!!!!

Speaking of Discipline..... great song by Nine Inch Nails that makes me want to strip tease and dance dirty.  Izzy should dance to it and torture poor Emoward

Damn, that was hot from his perspective. I love plotting, naughty Edward... cannot wait for the next chapter!

Naughtiward is freakin HOT.  Love his new attitude.  LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT... love the story

I have to say I do like this Edward, i was skeptical at first. However I do hope to see them get down and dirty and forgive/forget here soon.