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Reviewer: slight (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
This story was super good for the longest time!
Now its just characters with the same names.. sans one.
boo
Author's Response: I'm sorry...what do you mean by that? It doesn't exactly explain what you thought went wrong and I would really like to know! Sadly I can't please everyone but if you could leave a more descriptive review it would help point out any flaws.
Author's Response: I'm sorry...what do you mean by that? It doesn't exactly explain what you thought went wrong and I would really like to know! Sadly I can't please everyone but if you could leave a more descriptive review it would help point out any flaws.
Reviewer: Starglow31 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Totally unexpected but can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Red_9415 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Oh my gosh I love this story so much! You are an amazing author and.... wow i really couldnt have picked a better story to read! Amazing. You have to keep writing! Awesome job!
~A~
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
I was hopeing that Victoria wouldnt show up at least not just yet but with the way the realationship between Edward and Bella has changed i understand that its needed in order to keep the plot (whatever it is) moving.
I kinda thought earlier in the story when she said that Jake was a Werewolf that it was funny that he didn't track her down to find out how she was . . . but makes sence that he knew all along.
Am going to ask again -
When are we gonna hear about Alice + Rose's plan to make Edward suffer??
Or has that been thrown out and forgotten due to victoria or the last day or two in the Cullen house??
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
oh wow i didnt expect victoria!! update soon! this just got sooooo much more interesting!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
:D
I'm Team Swizerland with you! I was pissed at Edward at first, but now, eh. Whatever.
Reviewer: midnightsun_twilight (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Okay, first yes, totally out of the blue.
Second, it wants to make me cry because of all the possibilities that may happen now that Victoria has Izzy.
Third, love this story and can't wait for the update.
Fourth, *cries whilst screaming* EDWARD SAVE IZZY!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Ahhhh! Not Victoria! This is not good, oh so not good! Rescue her Edward, do it!
Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Its completely out of the blue. Loved Carl being a werewolf, its a pity he died. Victoria is still a bitch as ever, I can so see her and Izzy getting along, trading insults and fighting techniques.
Oh God not the helpless damsel in distress, I think I might puke. Not a knight in shining Volvo please, and defiantly not slobbering wolf boy. Please no 'I've decided to be Bella again oh Edward save me' stuff.
I'm defiantly team Izzy, Edward might deserve her back if her can appease her.
Reviewer: caylab12 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Woah didn't see that one coming! But I liked it!! Can't wait to see what happens!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
WTF! Yesss, I'd have to say that that was the last thing I was expecting! Where's the calvary? I mean, Izzy's bad, but not beat a vampire ass bad!
Reviewer: EricCullen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Another great chapter!!!
and btw gratz, keep this up and soon you will be on the top ten most reviewed list!!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Awesome story. She is so fucktastic. Gotta love kick ass Izzy. Love potty-mouth, potty-thinking Edward. Way HOT.
Reviewer: kmc345 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
I just read chapters 1 thru 17 in one sitting and am AMAZED! Finally a strong Bella, and the flow of the story is wonderful. Keep those chapters coming, I can't wait till the next one.
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Wow, I'd never have imagined that Victoria would make an appearance. Somehow I thought that Carl was helping Victoria during this chapter.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
oouch poor izzy and that carl thing was so unexpected so cool :D
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
“Silly Izzy,” he murmured softly into my hair. “Bella didn’t belong with us. Yes, she was a part of our family, but she stuck out like a sore thumb. You however fit in perfectly.”
Uh... WTF? Bella didn't belong with us? Wow, you sure gave a nice imitation of a guy in love with BELLA, Assward!
Uh... how dark is this going to be? I don't know if I can take 20 chapters of Bella being tortured.
Edward's still a pansy. Go after her, jerk. Stop acting as if you have ANY moral superiority in the situation.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Whoa! Unexpected twist! I like it! MOAR!
Reviewer: LadyKai220 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED?!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Oh god, how did this fit in???
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Interesting chapter. Certainly didn't expect Izzy to be surrounded by wolves. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
OMG! I didn't expect that at all.
Just now caught up with the story after real life shit took me away from it for a bit. Thank God my drama is over but I like yours so much better anyway.
Reviewer: LovingTheCullens (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
OMG
I love this chapter! The whole victoria kidnapping Izzy was genius! I didn't see the wolves either! Please update as soon as you are able!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
You have definitely caught me off guard. I loved it!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
OME! i can't believe this! i was not expecting this twist, but i love it :]
please update! :]
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