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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Totally Bad ass. I can't wait until she lights into Edward. That will be soooo good.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Woohoo! Jake's here. I'm glad they're going to fight together and that Jake's not in love with Bella any longer; and Emmet's all grown up. That's so cute.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
HA!!!!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
love it love it!!!!!and i glad jacob isnt in love with bella/izzy!!!
update soon...im dieing for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
I just LOVE Emmett's obsessiveness with her name. Hehehee...
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
I wondered where she got the cash. Poker player was clear. Whatelse? Is she a body guard or hitwoman? Either way I like it. The rug was a cleaver way to block Alice. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story.
Reviewer: hellojasi123 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
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Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
this story just keeps getting better and better! HELL YEAH!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
ahhh! what is going to happen I totally didn't expect this, is jacob going to show up? what happens next!!! tell me tell me tell me!!!! I want the next chapter please please please!!!!
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Great plot twist -- I love it.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
Heheheheh....
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
thank you for the update! everything is getting good!!!
Reviewer: 5rockstars (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
thank you for the update! everything is getting good!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
YAAY!!!!!!! I CANT WAITTT!!!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Working together! Hoo Rah!!!!
Wow...that was intense...I loved that Rose was one of the first out of the house!
Thanks so much!!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Hehehe...GO BADDASSAA IZY!!!!!!!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Ooooh.NICE ending.
Reviewer: hellojasi123 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
GOD EMMETT SOUNDS FUCKING AMAZING, o srry i 4got dat dis stry is bout BELLA SWAN lol
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
is it terrible I am hoping they resolve this soon and we get back to Edward/Izzy? Great chapter! :)
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Hey, i love you story!!!
when you first sent this story to twilighted for validation, how many chapters had you already written???
I ask because i want to start writing a story and would like to know some stuff to help me get started :P
Author's Response: Hi! When I first wrote DDwtDH I wrote five chapters before submitting it but I had a general plot line written out so I would be halfway through and think 'Shit what do I do now?'. I know a lot of writers that write on a weekly basis without actually knowing where their going but have an end in mind. I cannot write like this,lol!
Having around five written out helped me stay on track so if I was having trouble with the story progressing I always had head start for my readers. If you want any help I'm totally here...just PM me and we'll take it from there :)
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Hehehe. AWESOME!!! He should take her to Edwards...>:)
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Alright, here we go!!!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Oh, damn. Please, not TOO much Izzy-torture! Make it all Edward-torture! He deserves it. He deserves all the pain he put her through.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
I'm hoping that they will save Bella and she and Edward will come to their senses or that he has to change her because she will die other wise~ of course she is able to tell him that is what she wants before he can do it. This is very exciting!!
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