Awesome, wonderful, brilliant chapter. Not only is Victoria on the loose with Bella, but the Wolves and Jacob have made it into the story, and so have the newborns. Althought Edward and Jacob getting along this well so easily is a bit of a worry, I do love the tension between the vampires and werewolves, you write it so well, and it is going to do wonders for the story.

The conversation Edward had with his family before the wolves showed up, was excellent very revealing about the entire Edward/Izzy realtionship. He know she loves him, but isn't sure where her hate stops. Wonderful that Emmett was the one to point out she never hated him, just what he did. And she has changed not because of him, but for him, so that she can be strong enough to be with him. And we all know that Edward has also changed for Izzy. Who knew Emmett could be so mature and smart.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.

Author's Response:

Yes revelations are abound it this fic. Even I had a massive one in one of the forth coming chapters and I was like "You can't be serious"

In some ways Emmett is more perceptive than the other Cullen's. He sees things at their rawest and interperets them accordingly. And yes Izzy's change was very much for both of them, Edward to see she is strong enough and Izzy to see she is worthy of his love.

Oh please update like now. I need to know what happens to Izzy. Does she turn.

Ooohhhhh you did do it!!!! Great chapter!!!!

nice

You know- I love that this is deep, without being obviously deep about it- if you get my weird logic. :D

Good work Captain! Salutes*

Author's Response:

Lol! I know exactly what you mean...that was my target. I really have trouble writing angst so humor has to be laced with it to keep it light in the dark times...did that sound too Lord of the Rings to you?

Over and out Lieutenant!

Sweet!  Very intense chapter.  As always, I'm anxious for more. :)

All right a Jacob that is finally over Bella.  I like that.  Getem' boys.  I'd like a few more details of ripping and Jacob and the Cullen boys kicking but.  Eclipse didn't give that many details.  Also, I must admit I don't think I handle the death of any Cullens or Quilette boys.  I read on story that had Jacob killed by Jane and Felix and I was a mess.  I actually cried.  I can't handle...Please.  Okay other than that this is good I totally didn't see Victoria coming.  Please post soon.  Everyday would be good for me. 

Author's Response:

Okay no one dies...yet! I'm telling you just so you can mentally prepare for it. I'm not going to tell who but I hated writing the chapters but it needs to be done. What I would like you to do is trust me as an author. You may cry but I will make it better...later. I'm known for my plot twists and I would hate to lose a reader because they don't trust me to take the story where it needs to go! For now lets get over this Victoria shit first kay?

Great work as always! The wait for the next chapter is going to kill me and I really hope Izzy gets to kick some Victoria butt.

Hell yeah! Looking forward to the fight!

Whose side is Alice on.  Come on.  Izzy put your wall back up girl.  I was respecting the badass thing.  You know you're a good writer when I'm yelling at your characters.

Author's Response:

LMAO yeah yell away! Just not at me*giggle*. Don't wrroy I had a few choice words for Izzy and Edward in the coming chapters...they were being brats and not going where I wanted them to go. Needless to say I won!

Hell yeah! That's what I was talking about.  I like you attention to detail.  I googled Izzy's boots, they were hot.  I also google Iz's prized car.  I had never heard of it.  It is beautiful. 

This is SUCH a good Story!!!

OMG - that was fabulous. I love how well you tied in the pack, the newborn army, the Bella/Izzy connection she has to all of them.... just everything. I also loved how you had Victoria go back to the house in Forks for the showdown. It's perfect really for a high nooon standoff and although I doubt Victoria thinks this - I would believe that the Cullens and the pack would have the advantage there. Well, at least a slight edge. ;)

I wasn't confused at all about the introduction of the wolves into the story - just surprised as I hadn't expected it. I also like how Edward didn't know Jacob as a grown man; I mean he shouldn't. Also it's nice that Jacob looks to Bella as a sister instead of a potential mate. We just don't need another triangle. hahaha

Great chapter. You've got me hooked now lady. =)

~Lisa

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm also suprised how well everything has turned out. When I first started writing this fic I didn't expect so many twists and turns and I didn't think it would all make sense but it does so I'm immensely happy. As for Jacob...I don't like the whole love triangle thing it bugs me to know end when I read it in a fic. I believe after six years you kind of grow up and move on. I think thats what I like about this fic...there are so many familar factors (wolves,Victoria,newborns) but they are portrayed in a completely different way!

Thanks for the great review Lisa!