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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Cannot remember if I reviewed this chapter or not.  Just wanted to say Holy Hell!! Totally love it and you sure know how to keep us on the edge of our seats. What the hell is Victoria going to do to Bella? OMG!! Is she going to change her?

Reviewer: kjayne (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Wow, the shit hit fan!  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: chan1013 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

I am folling your story and thnk is the best fan Fic ever!!!!  I have registerd 2x's for the forums but have not gotten approval from Edward!  Let me know If you know what I can do I so want to be included!



Author's Response:

Lol! Really??? The best fanfic ever??? Wow I don't know bout that but I'll definetly take it,lol! Anyways bout the forum...I'm not sure, I registered ages ago but was accepted immediatly..all I can suggest is try again...if not PM me and I will email you all the juicy goss!

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

That was awesome. I gotta get off and read the rest later cause my faggish brother wont GO AWAY. Lates.

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

whoop!!! this will get good!

Reviewer: ARenee363 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Oooooo, their in for it now. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

Im gonna cry. I dont know why. I wanted them to scream !!!!! THEY DID!

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Awwwww. I love Jazzy.

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

OMG!! I think y our insane. REALLY!!! CRAZY!!!! AWESOME!!! BOTH! :D

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

wow!!!!!!  What a comraderie!!!!!!  Can't wait to read more!  Update soon!  As you very well know...I hope Edward gets Bella/Izzy back safe and sound...as well as the wolves and other Cullens!  I want them all to be safe!!!!  But  a little angst never hurt anyone!!!!!

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

So she gave her cars away!? I had a vision of that last night. :D IM PSYCHIC!!! Not psychOOOO, psychIC. XD

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Ye Gods... Newborns! Are you crazy, chica?! This is gonna get ugly fast. I'm loving this, Draven

Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Yes!!

Reviewer: coolblue44 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

*gasp!* Oh no, this can't be good. Well, this chapter can...is...whatever! Awesome story, I can;t wait for more.

Reviewer: sarielife (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Ahh....killing me!  Too short of a chapter!  Please keep it coming!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Newborns ... wonder how they are going to fit in this story? are they there to fight for Vic? I guess so she can kill bella infront of edward and then make a run for it ! ? I cant wait to see what happens next .... how this willplay out in the end ... :) please update soon !

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Wow. I bet Victoria is going to have a heck of a time keeping the newborns away from Bella until it's time for her to die

Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Ahh! Glad to have alittle werewolf action :P

Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

WOW, I like how you have made Bella all badass.  I cant wait to see what happens next.  I understand now why Alice hasnt been able to see her, stupid but smart wolves.  I just want Edward to save her and knock some sense into her head already, lol. 

Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

OMG

 

Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

dun dun dun...what a turn this story is taking! And i love the idea that she became strong FOR him, that she turned into bella badass for the emo:)

 

Alice

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks...there are a lot of revelations in the next couple of chapters; one even I didn't see and it changed my whole perspective of New Moon. Fun times ahead.

Cheers!

Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

I demand more! lol.

Ah, excitement, I love it. I'm really glad that Jacob doesn't love Izzy the way Edward does, I can deal with him only thinking of her as a sister. =D

Can't wait until they rip Victoria to shreds, they will rip her to shreds, right?

Alice.x



Author's Response:

Lol! More is coming Alice...a lot more. Next chapter is a doozey. One that will make you go 'Huh? Wait...What??? Holy shit what are you doing?" or something along those lines,lol!

Thanks!

Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Ah ha! Sweet! I love a good battle scene! Way to leave with the suspense built up! ^_^ Can't wait for more!
~Wolf

Reviewer: beate73 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

OMG, this is so intense! With the way the story has been going so far, I'm not sure if Victoria will change Bella/Izzy or not. Gah!!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

I like how you're incorporating some of the old with your new. A fascinating mix of the two and I cannot wait to see what happens next! Awesome chapter. :)

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