Good! There are 184,583 fics of "Victoria kidnaps Bella and tortures her for months while Edward wrings his hands and cries right before Bella grovels at his feet for coming back to her". Good for her!

Oh thank God! I so love you now! I was worried about the turn this story was taking, but I'm so glad I stuck with it!

Haha! Bella kicked ass! She's so Buffy! Thank you for not making her weak after all!

Gah, Izzy is hot. lol  I think I have a little bit of a girl crush on her.  Ok... maybe more then a little.

Cool twist to the story.  I love that Edward didn't rush in to save her.  Can't wait to find out what will happen next!

Aww Luv you too babe.  Way to pimp WttS!

 

Anyway, I love that Izzy kills Victoria herself.  I was so worried that Edward was going to have to show up and save her.  I don't know why I was worried, since Izzy appears to be able to kick just about anybody's ass that she wants (even a biker comma nazi, lol). 

Finally some bad guy stuff!  Oh- I love the inner workings of the minds in your story. 

SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS ALL I HAV BEEN TALKIN 2 MY FREND, ND I KEEP TELLIN HER WATS JUST HAPPEND (AFTER I SAY SHIT!!!) AND THEN TELLIN HER TO SHUDDUP SO I CUD READ! THIS STORY IS THAT FUCKIN AMAZING!!!!!!

 

btw if u r still lookin 4 a song for this story, check out 'Because of you' by Kelly Clarkson, for the hidden, sensitive side of bella, and 'Im gonna live forever' from the fame musical. i can send you some links on youtube if you want, just email me

 

KK

 

ps, now my frend is mad coz her account keeps stuffin up so she cant read the story, nd she wants to know why one second i was in love with Edward, nd the next i want to murder the manipulative bastard lol.

 

pps, this is fuckin amazing!!!!

 

Author's Response:

BAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Your poor friend. I hope her account starts workin again so she see the reasons with the whole love hate thing you've got going with Edward. I have one of those too...sometimes I want to sick Jazz and Em on him for being a wanker and other times I want to sick Izzy on him...not sure which is worse *winks*

Lol thanks for the review!

Ah, a Bella and Carlisle talk, knew it was coming and am very appreciative that Carlisle is once again the voice of reason; defending Edward's actions and calling Bella out when she becomes the one to run.  It's an interesting turn of events, one we've seem from other writers, and yet, you've managed to keep me hooked.

And the twists at the end of the chapter.  Oh my goodness, I don't even know what to say!  I'll admit, it caught me a little off guard (not completely out of the blue, but I didn't expect it to be at that very instant).  Might have to throw my ideas for where this story is headed right out the window about now.

I just had to read this chapter again. I love when she jumps on Emmett's back and threatens the girl. XD

o0o how exciting. i can't wait to see what's going to happen i'm going to have to try YET AGAIN to get a forum account they just don't send me the validation email EVER not even in my junk mail does it appear. anyway thanks for writing Jayjay. <3

Author's Response:

Urh! Sorry bout that! Anyway I'll personally send you anything that you want to know or any important information that I put on the forum okay!

Thanks sweets!

This was so completly out of the blue... I am floored...Oh I can't wait to see what happens next!

The girls in on making Edward pay...Sweet...again genius!

Ohh Edward sure has a surprise coming...you know him not coming back earns him a good thrashin

Ohhh what has that moron Edward done!