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Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

OMG Issy kicks ass. Great chapter I'm glad she didn't need Edward to save the day. Cut how you used the cottage. I wish I knew Italian.



Author's Response:

Some one said I was re-doing the books in DDwtDH fashion and in away I agree with them. The cottage was for Bella but it needed a different feel for it for Izzy! If you want you can check out the thread for the translation or I can PM it to you.

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Man I want to be Izzy when I grow up!  What a wicked ass bitch, I figured she'd just set wherever she was on fire and take the vamps with her when she died or something but hot damn.  HAHAHAHA can't wait to see what the Cullens reaction to this will be, oughta be hilarious.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

OMG, didn't see that coming.  I was pleasently surprised.  Good one.  I love this Bella- so is so brave and kick ass.  Emmett will be so impressed.  I am assuming at some point she will have to be changed - NO vampire will be able to "get down with her".  Watch out Jane! Whew hew.

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

GOOD FOR BELLA! oops I mean Izzy!

Reviewer: Kaiser (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Finally!  Bella was truly the heroine for once!  I hate that they call her that in the book because she plays the part of the poor helpless fragile little human to a T. 

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Shocked....No, not really. Scared....not at all. Turned on.....mmmm yep! I really fucking love Izzy. I am sooo damned happy that she took care of things herself. That's right....the Z girl don't need no damn knight on a white horse! :D

LOVED her pissing off Laurent....the fairy vamp, hehe. Have I mentioned how fuckawesome Izzy is? I am sooo surprised that Vicky didn't just decide to scrap the whole damn revenge plan and keep her. I know I would! :D

I liked that Vicky was holding her in the cottage....I don't know why but it just seemed fitting that the showdown took place there.

The flashback was very nicely done in my opinion. I mean even though I couldn't understand a damn word the weird psychic saleslady was saying, I was able to pick up on the gist of what she was telling Izzy from reading Iz's responses and thoughts to it.

I loved that Izzy was all snuggled up to Vicky pretending to be asleep on her shoulder and then she knifes the bitch! :D

The fight scene was FANTASTIC! Izzy is so full of kickardness that it isn't even funny. That word seriously needs to be added to the dictionary with a picture of Izzy and an explanation right below it. And then she burned the bitch and insulted her fat ass and then laughs. I'm in love! ;D

I can't tell you how nice it is to read a vamp story in which poor little Bella is taken or does something stupid and is crying and waiting patiently for big strong Edward to come to the rescue. This is sooo much better than that! It makes me want to scream "GIRL POWER" and dance around in my underwear listening to Spice Girls, lol.

I'm totally impatient for more of the Z girl! :D



Author's Response:

I know...Victoria thought about it but dang nabbit she wanted her revenge! Lol and the cottage. Yeah was totally fitting...I felt it needed to be put in there. For Bella it was her dream come true as it was for Izzy. I mean Izzy's dream was to kick Vicky's ass and prove herself strong and badass and she did it!

A lot of people liked the flashback suprisingly. I had hoped I gave enough of Izzy's reaction for it to not be translated but meh!

Lol this was exactly why I wrote DDwtDH for everyone to see that Edward doesn't have to be the god damn hero!

Thanks TJ love your reviews as always!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

OMG! Kick ASS!

Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

I loved it! More my dear, please more!

 

~Wolf

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

God, you're freakin' awesome!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!IZZY RULES!!!!!!!!!JUST AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

All i got to say is:
HELLZA FREAKING YEAH! THATS OUR IZZY

(I know, what is wrong with me, this is a simple comment for sdnez. What can I say, I'v been dreaming about human Bella taking on a Vamp now for some time and winning. Your the first that did it with some class... Kudos :)

Thats right....KUDOS!!! It's ok for it to go to your head. Why? Because I said so ;)

Author's Response:

Yep gonna go to my head then to my ego then to my ass. Lol! I have yet to find a badass Bella that keeps her tude all the way though dealing with vampy Edward. Sad huh?

Anyways thanks sweets! 

Reviewer: TheSnowHasMelted (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

THAT WAS AWESOME! IZZY KICKS ASS!!!

cant wait for what happens next.*squeal* :D

Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Funny...I was shocked, scared, and a little turned on. How did you know? =)

 

Love the story. I was wondering when you'd update again, I'm addicted. *sigh*

Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

surprised, but definantly satisfied with how bella killed victoria.  can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

O.M.G. I am so glad this chapter turned out like this! Izzy totally kicks ass! I can't wait to see what the Cullens' reaction will be to this. Too awesome. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

LOL its so funny that you had the scene go down in the cottage.

Freaking awesome chapter by the way --- I am still totally scared of Izzy but I would want her to have my back in a fight any day. Damn!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Best Bella chapter in history!!  I love that she is tough and unyielding.  You totally rock, J!!  ;)

She just kicked Vicky's ass!  Sweet!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Keller (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Loved this chapter!!  I am so glad that Izzy killed her!!!  Go Iz!  That was awesome!! I can't wait for the Cullen's to find out how even more kick ass she is than they thought@

Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

That was awesome.  I like your Bella so much better than whiney clumsy Bella.

Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Coooollllll!!!!I love the fact that Izzy is strong...she was able to kill Victoria single-handedly despite the fact that she is human.  I'd love to read the Cullen's reactions when they found out Victoria died at Izzy's hands.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Way too go Izzy.  That was awesome.  Thanks for the update, Jennifer

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Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Can I be Izzy for, like, a day perhaps? Man, she's just the epitome of awesome!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Great chapter.

Ok, I officially love this story! Izzy kicked ass! She's awesome!!!

I would like to know the translation...but the forums won't let me on for some reason. :( Anyway, awesome chapter!

Please, please update soon?

Reviewer: lacygrace (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

I am so glad that Izzy took care of Victoria herself - that was too cool ! You never cease to surprise in this story. Love it, as always.

Oh, and Izzy's snarky comments to Laurent - ROFLMAO! Edge of your seat suspense and comedy at the same time - impressive.

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Way too go Izzy.  That was awesome.  Thanks for the update, Jennifer

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