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Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Bella/Izzy kicked a little ass, and now they need to gather to take on the newborns! Nice use of the cottage!
Kate
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
izzy rocks! eddie better watch out and stay on her good side!
love it! keep writing!
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
loved it! soo much!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: cullens_pet (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Go Bella. I like your Bella much better than Stephanie's Bella. Lovin' this story!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
omfg hahahahaha Vicky got Bell-owned!!!!!
I'm loving how this encounter has been going so far and can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
that was so amazing. Izzy, a weak, helpless human kicked vampire ass and the fact that she could be as snarky as ever made it so much better. I love this fic so much I hope there's lots more to come. I went to freetranslation.com and got the gist of the Italian.
Reviewer: ladyeterea (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Hi there, I'm an Italian girl who's following your story week by week... may I ask you, did you use an online translator to write the italian sentences? Because, I'm sorry but... they really make no sense at all... ^_^
If you will I can help you with the right translations, let me know.
Eleonora
Author's Response: Just sent you a message...any help would be awesome. Boy am I glad I have some Italian fans out there! Thank you so much for reading and coming to my aid :)
Cheers!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Oh hellz yes! Izzy kicks it again! Totally awesome!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
Still loving it.
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Oh you are too good girl! LOVE IT! Are we ever gonna get to see Izzy and Eddie boy get all nekkid? lol
I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Holy crap she kick ass all the way!!!!!!! Loved it
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
dayuuummm that chap was awesome. i seriously mean it. like wowza . youve made bella into an awesome Izzy
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Great! I love that Izzy is strong but hopefully she will let her guard down some and she and edward can make up.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Oooh, I like!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
lol love this story:) Glad Izzy took out the vampire instead of Edward. She can take care of herself and he needs to realize that.
Reviewer: lucytyrer (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
i love this twist!!! every bella should be like izzy!!!! xxx
Reviewer: wishful19 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Way cool! :)
Reviewer: beate73 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I loved it!! I love how badass Bella/Izzy is - girls rule! But dang, must you leave us with such a cliffy?? ;)
I'll eagerly be waiting for next chapter. :)
Reviewer: italiansky (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
hi i have read all the ff so far and it is fantastic i love this new izzy and the way edward react .
PS : as my name say i'm italian so after having read this chapter i have write the correct italian :
- Siamo impazienti no?
- Una pelliccia di licantropo
- Chiama la tua amica
- La veggente
- Si si certo mia cara. Lei prevede il futuro e per questo ne hai bisogno per fermarla.
- Squilla la tua amica mia cara
- Certo che si mia cara
- Aspetta potresti aver bisogno di questo
- Dovresti saperlo
- the first part isn't understandable in italian. than li paralizza. La saliva di licantropo è potente sui freddi (for cold one) . Devi essere prudente nonostante il veleno sia veloce.
- perchè i giochi rossi di vincere = don't have meaning sorry
- Solo portalo con te mia cara e tienilo per tutte le necessità
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I expected the End of Victoria to take longer, honestly. lol I'm such a sadist.
Glad that IzzyBella has her self-preservation instincts up. AND I LOVE that she'd been watched over by some of the Pack sans her direct knowledge (apparently). Or at least some in the know, anyway.
She's still Isabella Swan.
Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint! Lol, I figured since she's still human she should take every chance to kill Vicky instead of drawing it out. Lol I'm a sadist too so thats why I wrote another eight chapter after the supposed ending to satosfy my thirst, llol!
As for everything else everthing will be revealed in time!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
Bee-yew-ti-ful!
Reviewer: DeeDubbs (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Go Izzy, Go Izzy! I'm always surprised at what she has up her sleeve. Cant wait for for the next chapter.
Reviewer: sc4536 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I'm so lovin Izzy!!! She literally kicks ass!
I can't wait to see what the reactions are of everyone else... It should be so good!!
Please post soon!
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Amazing ! bella deserves to save the day
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