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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Fuckin'A Izzy! Kick that biotch victorias arse!! LOVED the chapter so much!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Fuckin'A Izzy! Kick that biotch victorias arse!! LOVED the chapter so much!!
Reviewer: Kellykp (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I love it that Edward didn't have to come and rescue her! I can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Ok, now that was a welcome surprise! I like this new Bella - I hope she can reconcile both halves of herself thought -- it's not fun and games to have to work so hard to bury parts of yourself.
Of course, now Edward may start to do the whole "I'm not needed" whining bit, but so far, he's been ok about it all. But he does need to man up and apologize for his lying to her and leaving her.
Reviewer: lizzy_koh (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Cool, just hope Vicky is dead and the rain doesn't put the fire out too quickly.
should have known that izzy would handle it herself, and not rely on Eddie.
HMM wonder if Laurent will keep up the vendetta for vicky?
Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Okay, first off, I'm glad that Edward didn't come to save the day so browine points for that. However, Izzy killing Victoria seemed slightly unrealistic. I know the blade was entirely fictional so you basically have writers licence to create whatever you want, but I thought it had too much power. And wouldn't Laurent and the newborns hear the fight? Shouldn't Bella have gotten away with more than a broken wrist? It would have been cool to talk about the blade earlier in the story as a side note or something, a nice forshadowing or whatnot.... Or I could be thinking about this waaay too much haha. Still, I thought the fight scene was pretty wicked and the visit to the old lady interesting and unique. Overally, awesome ideas. I can't wait to see the look on the Cullen's faces when Izzy comes back haha.
Author's Response: *giggle* I know it was a little unrealistic but thats what I wanted to portray! I mean we're dealing with vampires and werewovles and shapeshifters so I think I'm allowed a little inrealistic :P
The blade has heaps of power but if you knew how I created the werewolf and what powers I gave it, it would make a lil more sense. I put this info up over and the thread and while a lot of people don't really care for a back story a few (like you) do so I'l send it to you! As for Laurent and the newborns well they have their hands full with the Cullen and the wolves which will be coming up soon!
*evil chuckle* My fic is full of hidden lil nuggets. Way back when Izzy met the Cullens again and she told Alice she gave the pelt away she also thought about the other thing she was hiding ie the switchblade. I know I didn't out it completely but I felt that would have ruined the suprise. I love that your over thinking this, it shows me how much your enjoying the fic!
Thanks!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Awesome chapter. Of course she saved herself, she's kick ass, and might I say its about time.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I reviewed last chapter and said I wasn't overly excited that this story has taken a dark turn BUT I guess it wouldn't be a good story unless it had a little suspense in it, huh? I think this story is a piece of art and I'm thoroughly(?) impressed with the whole story itself and can't wait for it to continue. Keep 'em coming. He-He (maybe one of the chapters, huh?) Take care.
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
You are so made of win! That was kickass. I am so glad you had Izzy take care of that shit. She pwned Vicky. LOL. OH and I totally babel fished that Italian. LOL Niiiice. *stands up and does a victory dance a la Rocky Balbloa style*
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor
Yeah, you did it. I was hoping this was going to stay light hearted. I don't like the dark stories. I take them too harshly and close to heart. I haven't read the next chapter, yet. On my way.
Reviewer: caylab12 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Izzy is SOOOOOOO BADASS!! Damn I wish I was as cool as her!
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
That was awesome! I kept waiting for Edward but no, Izzy kicks ass!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Great chapter!!! Pretty cool how she took down the bitch herself!!
Reviewer: bluelori87 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
that was awesome!!!! i loved that, how Izzy saved herself, it was great. I can't wait to read the rest. Post More. Thanks
Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Izzy is the Shizzy!
Izzy is the Shizzy!
I thought they were gonna do some crazy shite and bond over lousy boyfriends...or perhaps get Vicky some action so she wasnt such a raging beotch...but off with her head works just as well : )
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
That was great! Izzy kicked ass!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
I am intrigued by the story, that's for sure....I have always wished Bella would buck up and grow some balls....but I don't (at this point) like this Bella much. Yes, she got balls, but she also because a violent, abusive bitch...beating so many people up? What the hell is that?? She's become a thug - well beyond someone who sticks up for herself. I could see her learning self defense to prevent some skanky bar dude from groping her, but breaking bones and teeth? too much. Old Bella didn't strike me as someone who would be deliberately, enjoyably violent. And Charlie should arrest her ass for assault & battery!
That being said - I am TOTALLY psyched to read about her giving Eddie blueballs of vampiric proportion. :) Let the cockblocking begin!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you for your honesty! Yes Izzy is a bitch and I made her that way for a reason. Izzy wanted to bury Bella for good and how do we get rid of something that we don't like about ourselves:we polar opposite it! Having said that you can't keep things that unresolved buried for to long and soon she is going to have to deal with it. And by the way Izzy has been arrested...a few times!
So don't fret she won't be an abusive violent bitch all through out the fic. (How boring would that be...I like my characters to grow and learn) She'll come into her own. Thank you for writing this review...it was very welcoming :)
Reviewer: shead (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I wasn't expecting that one! You got me! I thought for sure that the others would be comming to save her and got a little worried when they weren't showing up! lol! I can't wait to see what Edward has to say about this!
Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
c an i just say awesomeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...that was amazing...great chapter for izzy...but i wonder will she get to the cullens in time before the go for the newborn army..??...update soon...kick ass chapter...
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
loved it
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I am amazed. I love it. Of course she'd sort it out herself! And there I was, thinking it would be another Edward saves the poor little human.
Could you please send me the translation? Thankyou!
Much love and bad-ass pants,
E
Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
well, edward still has a chance to somewhat recover his manhood. laurent and the newborn vamps are still out there (wow, that's a killer band name BA DUM CHINGG) badass izzy strikes again! i love it! bella set back feminism 100 years, but izzy's yanking it back to the present day by its balls XD
Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
omg i am so confused what the hell just happened lol love it cant wait for more
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Oh My God!!! Izzy is the freakin COOLEST! I absolutly love the fact that she kicked ass and killed Victoria no less!!! I bow down to your magnificent mind...*Still dancing around like an idiot over the news*.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
That was the absolute most awesome-est chapter EVER! Your rock all kinds of goddess points for that one! :)
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