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Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Happy BDay!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Happy BDay!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
happy b-day.
i'm glad she's good...and that she reunited with her dad.
i am curious to see what her ultimate revenge is. can't wait for more
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Enjoy your day you deserve a treat after giving us this AMAZING story. Although this chapter was short I really loved it. I like Bella and Charlie interacting as father and daughter. It makes my eyes all watery because i think he is a good dad. lol I also like it cause we learn what's been going on while she was gone lol can't wait for the next chapter. Did i mention i love Izzy lol
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Happy birthday!!
Short but good!!
Cant wait to see their reactions when they hear Izzy took on a vampire single handed.....update soon please!!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Hope you had a great birthday! :)
I'm glad Bella went home. Very unmessy reunion with her dad. Nice!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Happy Birthday!!!
Ah, sweet reunion with Charlie! And so much happening in her parents' lives...
Alice!
Okay...revenge? Uh oh...
Kathie
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie
Perfection! Made me teary eyed for Charlie's sake.
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Girlfriend -- this chapter kicks butt! Completely unexpected and awesome. This ought to win an award. I cannot wait to find out what happens next but I assume that she is going to need some help in dealing with Laurent and the newborns. Emmett is going to completely freaking DIE again when he finds out she killed a vampire!
She might even get a fistbump from Edward! :) Wonder how Edward will react when her REALLY realizes she is able to take care of herself?!
Reviewer: cherrytree (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
hey i love this story. BUT YOU NEED TO FUCKING UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!!.
can you send me the translations please :)
jemxx
Author's Response: I update as soon as the next chapter is up...but there is a validation process which I can't do anything about! Sorry but thats the way things roll here :)
Translation is coming!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
above and beyond my wildest toughts of what was going to happen!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
WOOO!! TAKE THAT BITCH!!!! Sry for the language. I can't wait till the Cullens find her. She should show up at the house and then they're like '*Gasp* YOUR ALIVE!!!!'
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
nice.... hurray for finding a way for izzy to stand up for herself... i'm of two minds on edward's reaction... not sure which road you are going to take on that one...
Reviewer: queenlicous (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
i totally love this story
i love that bell is a badass instead of weak and pathetic like in new moon
can't wait for everyone to find out she killed victoria what a shocker that would be for them
update as soon as possible =]
Reviewer: coolblue44 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
YEAH! GO IZZY! Boy, she kicks ass! That was awesome! lol
Reviewer: Yelly Belly (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
You should put a date on the page of when you put it up, so that way i know how long ago it was put up and can estemate when you'll put up a new chapter. Please?
Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
That was kick ass. Not what I expected. Go Izzy. Can't wait to see everyone's reaction to that.
Reviewer: aliceinforks (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
wickeeeeeeeeed!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
I loved it! It's so fitting that Izzy would kick Vicky's ass!
Reviewer: Raven Sterling (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
how could you do this, i love the fact that izzy's taking control but why a cliffe.(sob) anyways keep on writing
Reviewer: Yelly Belly (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
You are Flippin' Fantastic. Seriously great at this.
Reviewer: Yelly Belly (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
You are Flippin' Fantastic. Seriously great at this.
Reviewer: MAGalovic (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Loved this chapter, who knew Izzy could take down Victoria, AWSOME!
Reviewer: hekate22 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Dear JayJayHale,
Wow. I really enjoyed that chapter. It was totally great. Although I am totally on Izzy s side here. I want Edward to suffer. That is the only thing I don't like the lack of Edward suffering. Now don't get me wrong your story rocks. And I love it I just prefer Edward miserable.
Could you send me the translation of the Italian bits? To diana301185@yahoo.de ?
I had spanish for a couple years and that helped get me the jist of it but I'd like to know exactly what she said.
Thank you.
And I hope you update soon.
Best regards
Hekate
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
awesome
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