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Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
I love how she interacted with Rose and Alice!!!!
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
loved the end
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
she's got a lot of anger built up. nice.
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
ha ha, pussy Edward is gonna flip
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love Bella as a total bad ass!
Reviewer: anjli22 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
I. LOVED. THIS. the whole story. loads! :D look forward to reading the rest!!
Reviewer: corrina318 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
so I was going to wait and comment on your wonderful story until I had finished all of it, but after reading your chapter notes for this chapter I could no longer wait. I love your style! I have read tons of these fan fic and yours is in my top ten favs. I love that all of them are themselfs except for Izzy and Tanya and them later Edward. I can't wait to read the rest and then your sequal
Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Wow!!!!!!
Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
The vision of Emmett looking like a teenager at a sleepover is too funny! Thanks for a good laugh : )
Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
HEllo! Really enjoying your story - just found it today. I have to admit though, I am uncomfortable with the casual way the concept of rape is treated. Rape is serious and devestating to the victims - they don't deserve to have it used for comedic effect.
Author's Response: I understand your uncomfortableness in regards to rape. I also understand why. I wasn't making fun of anyone who has been raped at all. Most people have enjoyed this chapter though I think I may put up a link in the A/N to a chapter without it incase anyone else does not agree with it.
Thank you for your review and I hope you continue to read :)
Reviewer: PeepToe (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
so bella can't be a bad-ass if she says things like "geez"and "sheesh"
But I like the premise of the story so far. looking forward to the big edward/bella reveal!
Author's Response: LOL...I beg to differ...my father is in bikie gang and while they swear like freakin pirates they throw those to words in to mix it up a bit lol!
Thanks!
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
I seriously love your Emmett
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
lmao at the little girl screetch. That was priceless
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay! I love Emmett and there are far too few stories that has him in the spot light.
Reviewer: Strauchi86 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
Wow - a great chapter! I like the new Bella .. Izzy *sorry* ;-) It was really hot what she did to Edward, but I feel very sorry for him :-(
So, now I have to continue reading!!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
LOL - Edward getting raped?!!! Izzy is scaring me - She is so not-book-bella!
Reviewer: alys (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
loved how you ended it, can't wait to read the sequels next. love Em
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
What? B is moving in???? now I really feel sorry for Edward. pay up time pretty boy!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
as much as I hated E for leaving in NM, I feel really sorry for him right now... he doesn't know what's coming!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
What a tough cookie!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Good for her.... I am glad she is not falling apart with the sight of a Cullen... She's a different Bella-Iz-Izzy-whatever...
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
six years without Edwared, really did a number on her..... before Edward leaving her favorite thing in the world was her old truck and now look at her... Bugatti Veyron? Jeez... Edward should have left earlier!!!!
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
God... this is so funny. I love this story... Bella is such a badass... and Ememett with his " man problem"? That will teach Rosalie to be nice to Bella... I wonder how Edward would react if he had been in Emmett's place - probably freaked out.
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Oh good lord... this story is so funny... motorcycle? Bella?
"... felt like I’d stepped into the Twilight Zone"... It sure feels like it..
Reviewer: vedette1121 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL - Jeeezzz... see what Edward does with his disappearing acts???? This Bella is, by far, better than the cliff-diving Bella.
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