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Reviewer: katieam1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Love this story!  I have no idea what Izzy's Ultimate Revenge will be I just hope that Her and Edward end up together!  Maybe Alice will get a vision of Edward dying and they rush there to prevent it and Izzy saves him?  That would be great!! 

Reviewer: littlelegs (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

happy birthday!  great story!

Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy birthday and great chapter

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy belated birthday :) You are the same age as me.

Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!  Now for the story, I have to say that I love this Izzy.  She is so different from Bella and it rocks.  Don't get me wrong.  i like Bella.  But i love how Izzy isn't afraid to fight or tell it like it is.  Post again soon!

Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

More! More!

Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Omg could you have made it any shorter!!! Ahhhh !!!!!!!!!!!( am I making my point clear yet?) !!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Thankyou for gifting us with such a wonderful chapter on your birthday, Happy Birthday, and many happy returns.

I just love this chapter, I am so glad to see that Charlie will make an appearance in this story, I always find him very entertaining, and I can't wait to see what you do to him, and how he reacts to the return of the Cullens, as well as the return of Bella, or the new and improved Izzy.

I can't wait to see how this all comes out in the wash, what alices reaction to the knife will be, how Edward will react toIzzy taking care of her self and the broken wrist, and how Izzy and Jacob will resolve their issues.

Please don't keep us all waiting too long for the next update, but take the time to enjoy your birthday.

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

HAAPPPY BIRRRTHHDDAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Love it, so sweet.

Happy birhtday for two days ago! Hope you had an amzing day

x

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

lol happy bday 4 2 days ago. its my violin exam 2moz, and my bday in 16 days.



Author's Response:

Good luck sweetpea and happy bday in 16 day *giggle*!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

awesome chapter and HAPPY BIRTDAY!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: NikkiGee (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

This story is brilliant and i absolutly love what you've done to bella, she needed to grow some balls =) keep writing your amazing at it x

Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy Birthday youngin! I remember 24... Girl, live that shit up while you can! Next year is gonna hurt like a bitch.. and 30 might damn near kill yer ass if y ou have regrets. Live every day as if it's your last and never let yourself have regrets.

OKAY old lady speech over now.

Milk and cookies with Charlie is absolutely precious!

I have no clue what her final revenge will be.. maybe raping the fuck out of Edward? LOL Shouldn't laugh about rape but with this Bella, shit, could be ANYTHING! Bitch fought off a fucking vampire.. as a human! Doesn't get badder than that! I will NEVER get over it!

Love you.. Happy 24th again!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

great chapter! im glad that bella got to see charlie! and that he isnt mad! i wonder if alice knows about what happened with victoria! update soon!

Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy birthday!!!!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

short but sweet. Happy 24th:)

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

short but sweet. Happy 24th:)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

woohoo!! Charlie's ok - for now, at least!

But PLEASE let Izzy get some ice or something on that hand before she goes kicking any more vamp-ass :)

As for Izzy's ultimate revenge, I'm thinking SHE saves Edward, and I can't wait!!

Oh and Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy Belated Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I really don't know what her ultimate revenge would be. I don't think she would physically hurt any of the Cullens......Well, Edward left her because he wanted her to stay human, so could her revenge be to have Carlisle change her into a vampire against Edward's wishes?  I mean, her family members have moved on with their lives............

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Wow last year of your first quarter century! Congrats and happy B-day. Nice reunion, thanks for making it a happy one.

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to see the Cullen's reaction when they found out that Bella killed Victoria, oh and Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Happy Birthday! Well's its a bit late now, but still from the heart! :D 24....the exact same age as I am, though my b-day was back in April.

So, this chapter....was awesome as usual! :0)

I love that even a badass chick like Izzy can still break down and cry in her Daddy's arms. It was a really nice moment there. I also loved the rest of their reunion though. Charlie and Bella's relationship has always kinda fascinated me with the way they both care so much but yet are so withdrawn with each other. You really captured that perfectly, but still had their reunion feel very emotional and heartfelt. I also like that Charlie didn't throw a fit about Edward...not that it would matter, especially to Izzy!

And Izzy has a little brother. That's a pretty cool addition to the usual stuff as well.

I loved, loved, loved Alice and Jasper showing up all worried about Izzy and she nonchalantly opens the door. I can just see the smirk on her face now. :D

Can't wait to see how Edward and the others dealt with the newborns as well as why it wasn't Edward rushing to Charlie's door instead of Alice! Awesome chapter and Happy Birthday again! :D

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Hehe...nice. ;D Please update again very soon, great chapter!!

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