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Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

More! MOre! Please More!!!

Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Whew - amazing what hate can do to a person, and Bella's been doing it for six whole years!  I'm glad she's getting straight with herself on her feelings for Edward. (but I'm also glad she laid it all into him in the previous chapter - he deserved it!)  Good talk between Bella and Jake. I'm glad Jake found his mate and he doesn't hate Edward. Alright, bring on Emoward - I'll be waiting (sort of) patiently!

Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Soo good!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!! I am in love with this story!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

wonderful chapter, I love how Emmett and Izzy interact with each other, the banter is very entertaining, but I also just lopve reading about the emotional sibling bond they share. It's very touching, how Emmett is able to comfort Izzy.

I also loved how Bella and Jacob delt with each other, reveling in their past and coming to an understanding of their realtionship and actions. I am oh so glad that Jacob gets his happy ending.

I love how Izzy admits to still and always loving Edward, and that she won't be leaving the Cullens. I can't wait to read more from Edwards point of view on the whole situation. But, I also can't wait to see what the future holds for the two of them, I think it's now time for them to move on, the past is settled, and it's tiome to look to the future with each other.

I can't wait to read Edwards point of view, especially his reactions to Izzy being all over Emmett and more importantly Jacob. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

hahahaah It's hard to imagine Bella going around picking fights with people, but I do love the concept!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I like the wild Bella, but I'm a bit weary, b/c there is something I love about the innocent Bella. Hopefully she's in there somewhere. I'm not sure Edward can handle this Bella! LOL

Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

I've never really liked Jacob, well, that is a bit of an understatement, but I'm glad he's not still pining over Izzy in your story. It's makes him more bearable. Haha.

Alice.x

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

This sounds like a great start. I'm very excited to see this side of Emmett!

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

More, please! I love it! Emmett has got to be my favorite character in this story!

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW - IS ALL I CAN SAY - THIS BETTER NOT BE A BELLA - EMMETT HOOK UP

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Another great update. Thanks for being so quick.

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Oh, that was lovely!

Again, so much happening here...filling in blanks...

And wringing emotion from me too!

Ah, Jacob...Emmett...such good brothers for Bel...I mean IZZY!

Kathie

Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Shit. I've got tears running down my face, trying to hide it from my daughter who's looking at me like I've lost my mind! I'm so glad Jake is happy. And if you're saying the next chapter's emotional, than I'll have my Kleenex ready.



Author's Response:

OMG a few reviewers have said it brought on the waterworks...and here I was thinking it wasn't emotional enough! I must be a better writer than I thought, LOL! Thanks!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

We can deal with emotional, bring on emoward. Oh and I LOVED your Jacob!

Reviewer: lacygrace (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Wow - a birthday, finding out your pregnant, then making the Top Ten (I knew it was only a matter of time) !!!

I really loved this chapter - this story has been anything but predictable and it's been so much fun to watch it unfold.  Can't wait for the next one - which reminds me, I'm loving the quick updates!



Author's Response:

Yeah my life is a crazy roller coaster at the moment! Predictable pfft how boring I like to keep y'all guessing...it's more fun that way. BTW you can thank texbelle for the quick update...she rocks!

Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Yay, I love emotional, angsty chapters! :D It's nice that Izzy and Jake made their peace. Still, can't wait to see Edward get what he deserves. I love how you had Izzy repeat his words back to him, he really did need to know how badly he hurt her. Updat ASAP!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

i love how fast this is coming now...so how mad is edward going to be when he realizes Izzy actually can be emotional?

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

nice

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

nice

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Good chapter. Okay, I'm bracing myself for Emoward's POV.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Glad she made peace with Jacob. He was a bit of a tool and everything, but you've made him so much more stable. Any particular significance to "May"? Great chapter! You are awesome!! :)

Can't wait for more with Edward - I'm sure he's wallowing in self-pity with the best of them right about now. ;-)



Author's Response:

I write strange canon...ie the newborns, killing Victoria and the different name (Izzy) I just take it and warp it until it fits lol! Pronounce Renesmee out and you get REN-NES-MAY andd that is where May comes from. Cool huh?

Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

who cares where eddie is, jake was just there! i love jake! yey:)

Reviewer: beate73 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Oh man!! Way to make your readers cry!! LOL

Loved seeing Bella and Jacob being so good together. This story is just getting better and better.

Reviewer: amyvt98 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

I love this story!  The reunion in New Moon was so unsatisfying because I kept thinking "Why doesn't Bella make him suffer.. just a little bit?"  Well.... here we go.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

I can only imagine the internal emotional beating Edward is giving himself!

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