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Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

this is a great chapter!

Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

loved Tanya...she was awesomeeee!! and the bit with Eleazar made me giggle...=) great job as always...

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

FINALLY!!! A breakthrough!! Thank you this chapter was Awesome. I cant wait until the next one!!

Reviewer: bysm1114 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

aww i lud this chapter it had me bot teary eyed n awwing all together gr8 job btw

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

God that took long enough!  I'm glad they're finally together now.  Maybe...we could have a little more info on Bella's past?  please?

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

oh my goodness, best story ever!!!!!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

HOLY HALE!! Another incredible chapter and WOW what a breakthrough!! Can't wait to see how they deal with Alice! LOL. Alice won't be so bad...she'll be happy for them...maybe....LOL.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I'm feeling like an idiot because I didn't get it. what was the epiphany???

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

WOW what an amazing chapter, ALthough I never did like Tanya I love her in this story she is so wise. From what I interpreted the ephiphany was about how Bella was still fighting for him under all her tough exterior. She changed because Bella died, she needed to become Izzy to survive and even then she was always heading towards his direction. Sorry for my little rambling, again great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Uh... Edward? Where the hell is your big-ass apology for BREAKING her HEART and basically ruining her life?! What the hell is up with those people?

And how DARE he tell her she's to blame because she BELIEVED him? He pulled that in canon, too - and it was ridiculous! She couldn't have stopped him from leaving her! He would have taken another excuse to walk out on her like the martyr he is.

Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

Whoa! Way to go Bella! Rip him a new one!

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Good Goddess... I loved this. Finally he sees where he fucked up. At last their on equal ground. The courtship should be interesting. To say the least. Fine work, Draven

Reviewer: Christine Rose (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Epiphany - he admitted that she hurt him by not fighting for him.  Am I right???

Great chapter, as always. :-)

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

CRYING!  SOBS!  Gawd that was awesome!  PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yeah self realization usually does suck.... because that is when you realize how bad you have fucked up!  Nice chapter!  Girl you rock!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I cried. Yep, I did. Both cause I was mad & hurt because Edward was in pain. I always feel Edward's emotions. It's really odd. I don't like Izzy. I want Bella back! Bring her back! How can Edward love her when he was in love with Bella? He doesn't know Izzy too well yet & she's totally different fromm Bella, whom once again was the one Edward fell in love with.

~ B

Reviewer: shelbymay (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I love it! =) And I got it...I think

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I agree w/ your friend... I liked Tanya in this chapter. I NEVER like Tanya, so yay you. lol
As far as epiphanies... I think there was more than one. The biggest one I think is that E no longer sees himself as monster. There was also him realizing that his emotions were not the strongest/truest. That Bella hurt as much - if not more than he did. "Bella" died. Ungh Great chapter. Looking forward to the next. ALthough I gotta say - not sure how either of those epiphanies suck so I probably totally missed the one you were going for. LOL

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

OK OK ok the epiphany is that he realized he hurt as much as she did --- and that both were at fault? Maybe, maybe not.

Great chapter as always --- love this Tanya... I like that she's busting his balls instead of well --- trying to mess with him. ; )

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Not Izzy's fault.  He would have left any way.  This is my favorite favorite.  Do we get lemons soon?

Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Loved it! As always the chapter was perfection!  I like this Tanya too.

Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

yeah!!!!!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Edward's epiphany - realizing that he was a damaged as she was - thinking she didn't fight for them...  Is that it?

 

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Great chapter!

I got it! (I think. I'm pretty sure I did.)

They're going on a date! Yay!!! I'm glad Tanya forced him back.

I can't wait to see them go on a date!!!

Please, please update soon?

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Don't know if I got THE epiphany, but I thought it tremendously brave of Edward to admit that he expected a fight from her, way back when.  That her mute acceptance (well, nearly mute) could be as crushing to him as his leaving was to her had to be devastating.

GREAT chapter.  Dig Tanya.  Shocking, but true. 

 

I do hope Izzy's got that knife somewhere...safe.

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