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Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

i keep getting surprised and amazed each chapter on what bella could do! haha.. =)

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Hmm....epiphany huh?  That he is a wanker?  Is that it?

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

omg! what exactly is it that bella do? hehe.. sounds illegal or something but now i'm really curious how that could have happened when her dad is a cop. haha =)

Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Arhhh, by Jove, I think he's got it! Great chapter,can't wait to see the other side of the story through BPOV. Thanks to you and the Beta for quick updates.

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

WOOOOOOOO!! THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME MAN!!!! AND IM TOO EXCITED TO DAMNPEN THE MOOD BY CUSSING!!!! CAN WE STOP YELLING NOW!?!?!?! Ok. :D UPDATE SOONN!!!!!!

 

(   Aaaand were back to the yelling. ;)   )

Reviewer: nowayjose (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

i dont know if i have commented before, but i just LOVE this fic. make sure izzy is still a badass though even though she went all smooshy with feelings!

 

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Love that Izzy is going to stay Izzy.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

i can't believe HOW bad-ass bella got!! i mean breaking the leg of the club owner? W-O-W!! i'm wondering what happened to her. for a moment there i thought that mayhe she's a vamp now but then i'm sure emmett would have recognized that.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

*Thinking to self* -- Thank frickin' uhmmm (not god) Alice...No, Carlisle (yeah Carlisle)*

Thank frickin' Carlisle!!! Its about time... I know I know this HAD to happen BUT still its about time WOOT WOOT!

 I cant wait for the next chpater :)

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

is alice not really keeping tabs on bella or is bella fraternizing with werewolves that's why alice can't see her?? and god! i knew it! bella would have a motorcycle and would be freaking hot riding it. i really can't wait til edward sees her. LOL =)

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yay! Yay! Yay! I so did not see this coming. Tanya isn't so...bad here...I guess. I really liked it when she said that she couldn't believe that she ever liked him. Classic!. I didn't get the epiphany...but I don't care b/c Edward and Izzy (not Bella) are together. yay!

Reviewer: julnsmokey (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I don't comment alot on this site but I had to tell you I really loved this chapter! :)

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Didn't really get the epiphany.  Maybe I'm just dense.  Sorry.  Still a great chapter, as always.

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

whoah!!! i love bad ass bella!!! i can't wait to see what would happen next.. wait til edward gets a read on emmett's mind. LOL =)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

"I was afraid. I was afraid she didn’t love me because she didn’t fight for me. For us. It was altogether too easy, and it hurt me more than I care to admit." Wow!!!!!!! I just never thought about it that way!!

"I nodded and smiled. “I need you to know Izzy. I’ve let all of it go. I no longer think of myself as a monster. Only the wanker who can’t seem to make things right. I can’t hate myself for what I had done Izzy because if I hadn’t I wouldn’t be here with you on equal footing. Which is what we never had before. Equality.” YES!!!



Author's Response:

*palms head* Thank god someone got the same epiphany as I got. I was all angry at Edward for leaving but in truth it was both their faults. I've often wondered if she would have fought for him he probably would have stayed...after all he always said he was selfish!!! 

Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank You for finally makin g them see reason. I do so love Bella as Izzy but I am so glad they are finally going to work on there issues you just do not know. Love the chapter! Can't wait for Izzy's POV

Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yes! An update! And the next one is coming in...five minutes...right? Right? Damn. Well, it was worth a try.

I love when Tanya's all, "You did WHAT?!" Because I can totally picture her going all bat-shit crazy and Edward cowering in fear under her scorching gaze. Hilarious. And Tanya's other best line was, “You fucking twat.” Just too cute :]

Usually people make Tanya see like some uber bitch. But I like that you actually made her cool. She's all insightful and what not. I want to call her Buddha. I'll mix the two. Maybe Tandha. Or Bunya. Eh.

Can't wait for more darlin!

Reviewer: Nuttyginger (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

thank goodnes for that, not that it wasn't great watching their little game but its all so much better now!

Lovinfg it, loving it, loving it

Nutty

Reviewer: suchgreatheights (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

This is awesome! but i kinda don't get the epiphany, but that could be because i am reading to much into it. It would be awesome if you could clarify it! Thank you! amazing work!

Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

What is the epiphany?   I love this chapter!!!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Loved this chappie! Cannot believe it, but I almost liked Tanya too!  Oh, it's a mad, mad world when I like Tanya.  Welcome to madness...

Ready for more of this intriguing story.

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

this is a great chapter!

Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

loved Tanya...she was awesomeeee!! and the bit with Eleazar made me giggle...=) great job as always...

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

FINALLY!!! A breakthrough!! Thank you this chapter was Awesome. I cant wait until the next one!!

Reviewer: bysm1114 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

aww i lud this chapter it had me bot teary eyed n awwing all together gr8 job btw

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