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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

I just love that Bella goes to Charlie to make sure he's okay and to regroup. He's a good guy.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

YAY IZZY ROCKS This chapter, even on, what my 3rd, reread is oh so awesome! :)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

I miss Izzy. Pout. But a great way to introduce Jake to the story and you were perfectly internally consistent here. Can't have been easy, but you did great!

Reviewer: luckycharms0210 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I'm guessing the epiphany is Edward finally realising the depth of Izzy's feelings for him... in a nutshell.  UPDATE!!! 

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

The pack would have to be all kinds of crafty to keep such close tabs on Izzy. I'm impressed. Great though, that Victoria returns and finds Izzy so much more prepared!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

Sneaky scheming sexy vampire. I so love your Edward!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

And he breaks. A guy can only take so much. She's pushed for weeks, months? He's only, well, not human, but a man after all! :)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Jealous like you wouldn't believe. Sucks she didn't get the blond. That would've been fun! :) I love that Edward's playing with her now - she just can't seem to get in the jabs she'd like to anymore. 

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

Tanya was great and it's so nice to read an Edward who's up to the challenge and not all pitifully angsty. Great that he acknowledged the stalker-ish behavior of the past too. And, damn that girl is fuckin mean. I cannot believe she did that to his room!! Damn.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

Poor Em doesn't get a car. Pout. I do like that she just gives so many of them away. Throws everybody off a bit. :)

Edward calls her Bella... Just noticed that.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Hmmm, not sure if I got the epiphany or not. I'm wondering if it was when Tanya made Idiotward realize that Bella/Izzy's feelings for him were/are just as deep as his feelings for her.

I also totally get the beginning a/n about Tanya. Normally, I'm not a huge Tanya fan either and most stories don't help that, but your Tanya definitely rocked here. I think she should stay with the Cullens for about a week. Maybe all the other guys and Esme go on a hunting trip and leave Edward with just Tanya, Alice, Rose, and Izzy. Do you think he would survive? *insert evil smirk here*

Eleazar was also great here!

And I'm actually really happy that Izzy and Edward both realize that they were both at fault for things not working before. It takes two....that seems to be a revelation that they don't often grasp in stories. Wait! Was that the epiphany? Well *huffs* now I'm confused. ;D

Looking forward to answers and part 2! Another amazing one here!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

God, the rape discussion was so funny (never thought I'd say that).  Love this to pieces so far.  God, it's 232, and I sooo need sleep, but I can't stop reading.

Reviewer: Mango Cascade (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Finally, they got their shit together.

I'm both suprised and like the fact that Tanya was the one who smacked some sense into Edward. Too many fics potray her and simply a blonde whore.

It's nice to see that Edward and Izzy realize that they aren't the same people any more, so they shouldn't dive right back into things. Watching Edward let go of that monster image in his head is absolutely refreshing.

But will this be the end of trouble for our favourite couple? I don't think so.

I am eagerly looking forward to Alice The Mini Typhoon.

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

Okay, I know she was just fucking with him, but that was fuckhot!  Please tell me you're gonna be writing smut for this!  hehe

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Okay, so what is this brill idea that Bella had to get back at Eddie?  And why's Alice so distraut?  hehe I feel like I'm narrating the end of a 70s soap.  hehe

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

Okay, what does she do?  So she hasn't spoken to Charlie in 6 years?  Not even to let him know she's alive?  Poor Charlie.

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Okay, so what the hell happened to Bella to make her like this?  It can't just have been Edward leaving, could it?

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

Damn, here I was thinking she killed Jake or something.  Thank god she didn't.  hehe 

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

She likes it rough, huh?  Leave it to my mind to head straight for the gutter.  hehe  Oh, though, poor Em's gonna be a dead man when he gets home.  D-E-D.  hehe

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

*squee*  Bad ass Bella, not something you see often.  Very nice.

Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yes! Finally the reconciliation *doing happy dance* Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.  Now I'm wondering what the hell happened to Bella to turn her into bad ass biker chick.  hehe

Reviewer: Jane Doe (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

they never treated each other as equals??

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

ah, this was, in my opinion. the best chapter so far. the other also also kick-ass awesome, but this one is the best one(wonder why... lol) update soon, please

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yeah finally. can we get on with the show now. I can't wait for the next update.

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