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Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

She likes it rough, huh?  Leave it to my mind to head straight for the gutter.  hehe  Oh, though, poor Em's gonna be a dead man when he gets home.  D-E-D.  hehe

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

*squee*  Bad ass Bella, not something you see often.  Very nice.

Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yes! Finally the reconciliation *doing happy dance* Thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start.  Now I'm wondering what the hell happened to Bella to turn her into bad ass biker chick.  hehe

Reviewer: Jane Doe (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

they never treated each other as equals??

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

ah, this was, in my opinion. the best chapter so far. the other also also kick-ass awesome, but this one is the best one(wonder why... lol) update soon, please

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yeah finally. can we get on with the show now. I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Okay, I'm really braindead today, so I'm seeing epiphanies everywhere.  Edward not hating himself, Bella giving up on her revenge, their equality, their forgone conclusion, and Alice realizing that she was played by both of them.  I'll find out though!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Perfect answer! lol

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

equil footing...?

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I love your Tanya!  So much wisdom!  She put everything so perfectly!  I loved it.  I also appreciate how your Edward loves the woman Bella has become rather than wanting her to be the submissive doormat she used to be.  I always hated how she didn't have a lick of personal strength in the books until she became a vamp.  Love yours!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

i know that thisis only pt 1 but please tell me that Izzy is going to play some more games with A;ice's and rose's help Please Please Please Please.

I m i dont know what you have planned for the up coming chapters seeing as Izzy still has the knife - and is keeping Alice in the dark that kinda gets me thnking that she still has some stuff to do.          Hmmmmmmmm i'm rambeling but i think you get the point.

But alas we will have to wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

Oh wow, Izzy really has managed to get herself into a pickle this time, hasn't she?  And to think, all this time when she was out on her own, thinking she was doing things completely her own way, the wolves were in the background making sure she was okay.  Wonder what she's going to do when she finds that out.  Oh wait, before she can rip into Jacob and the rest of the pack, she's got to get out of Victoria's evil clutches.  This could get very interesting!

I just hope Izzy is able to make it out on her own, without the help of the Cullens.  I don't know why, but I think having to rely on the Cullens right now much just destroy everything Izzy worked so hard to build and overcome when they left six years ago.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

was the epipany that they do love each other, but they both screwed up and need to find that common ground again? if not i'm excited to find out!!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...


Edward's epiphany was that he realized that Bella loved him as much as he loved her and that their relationship is now on a more equal footing now?

Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

this was super cute!

Great work!

Reviewer: nola80 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

i love it.......please update soon!! i don't want this story to end!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

super glad that they are apparently going to get back together...and work through things together!  YIPEEEEE!!!!!!

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Awesome chapter!

Is the epiphany that they are finally "equal"???

Reviewer: nola80 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Izzy is such a kick ass gal!!! i love she's not weak little Bella!

Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Haha, finally someone smacked him around the head (so to speak) and told him to sort it out, and I love the fact it was Tanya.

I've always liked Tanya, I figure it's because she liked Edward that most people dislike her, but the moments that she was in Breaking Dawn she seemed nice. I love her in your story, so funny. I could really picture her telling Edward off.

I'm hoping we get to see the mini typhoon that is Alice.

Great chapter.


Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

great chapter, i am glad they are going to try again, and i think the epiphany is her leaving him like he left her??

tell me

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

DO you mean that he thought he was the only that felt as though he had died from inside. Edward felt like he was an empty shell, and there was no way that Bella could feel even 1/3 of what he felt because she was a mere human.( incapable of such strong emotions) Edward acted and thought like fucking prick. Bella died that day and had to reinvent herself for 2 reasons: 1. So that she could continue some sort of semblance of life- albeit perilous, but she anted tht danger so that per chance she might die a physical death not metaphorical    &   2. like you mention in aprevious chapter- it was a reinvention of sorts inoreder to be on equal footing with good ol' Eddie. 

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Good chapter! I'm glad that they are starting to work their shit out.

Reviewer: swhile (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Yea!!!!!! Edward and Bella (Izzy) are back together!  This is a bad ass story and I can't wait to keep reading!

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