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Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Go Bella...tease and torture Edward. Oh and Emmett, I love ya!....thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Yes!...you go girl!.. Emmett you are hilarious!..and Edward if I were you I would be happy. Torture can be good, even the painful kind. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

OMG!..that was HoT!...poor Edward. Let the torture begin *giggles*. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Oh...oh..Edward you better be ready because its on. Bella is piss off. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

Nah....Edward deserves what's coming. Sorry Edward, but its true. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Bella is right about Alice. Alice was her friend and like a sister. I also love how Bella stood up to Rose. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

We all wish we had that much $..*le sigh*. So Bella is not to happy with Edward. He deserves it. Now he will have to beg *giggles*. I can't wait. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I love bad ass Bella. And Emmett is freaking hilarious. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I love bad ass Bella. And Emmett is freaking hilarious. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I finally caught up with my reading!!  Yay!

Love this chapter.  Izzy and Edward as equals.  Lemons coming???  Oh, my!  lol



Author's Response:

LOL well that makes one of us...my reading is...how you say...out of freakin control!!!.

Thanks honey glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I love the bike, and the tattoo. Edward is going to flip when he sees Bella. I think he won't stay away anymore. I love it all. Thanks!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is so cool. Bella is a bad ass. I can't wait to read what Edward will say. And I love how Emmett stood up to Rosalie. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: katiepattz (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

ahhh! i love your story so far. just started reading. :]

Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was wondering if you had anyother chapters completed? If so, please let me know. I LOVE this story and cannot wait to see the outcome!! swarfield@amh.org. Happy Writing!!

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

booyah! lol

Reviewer: worth_it (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I laughed, I cried, I loved.

AMAZING!!!

XXjXX

Reviewer: Pink Lemonade (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Thanks so much for sharing your story!  I have been meaning to read this and just caught up with the story!  I will be sure to review each subsequent chapter - I am really late to the party and just wanted to catch up!  There is so much chatter about your story and the hype is deserved!  I love bad ass Bella...I mean Izzy!  Thanks again for letting me enjoy your writing.  You are so amazingly talented!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

chuckles all round.

thats a sweet chapter.

 

so will the girls get to have ANY fun playing the guys?

please say yes.

Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Why did I wait so long to read this?

I love you characters, your plot, every little joke and sassy comment. I can't wait for an update with a citrus smell... :D

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Good stuff...  i hope there are a few more chapters of it coming!!! :-)

Reviewer: Jael (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

did not see it coming at all

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Wow... just... wow... good turn... Go IZZY!

Reviewer: sparkleNbite (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I absolutely love your story.  It is very different from anything else I have read and I find it amazingly refreshing.  Thank you for the way you wrote Edward's journey.  I have always felt that he got off too easy for the way he treated Bella and I love that in your story he gets some of his own medicine.  My favorite of your characters is Emmett.  and I wish he had bet against Alice :) Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I have to admit that the beginning of the chapter was completely gut-wrenching! Thank heavens for Jasper(& Emmett), but Izzy had to do it...feel it all & let it all go so she could get to the heart of it all...and she did.

Both Edward & Izzy are broken, but I truly think the will heal each other & find happiness again.

Awesome! Hugz & smooches!

Reviewer: Jael (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

I really, really like that Izzy is strong and independent. It was what was missing for me in SM's novels.

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