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Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

K...I'm trading teams. I have a feeling Edward is going to win. Well if you think about it, they both will win. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I love it. ugh, i just ate toons of chocolate and had a candy overdose.  so hurry up and brng tha lemon so i can feel better ;)

Reviewer: Pretty_Face (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

The Bugatti Veyron is my all time favorite car!!! I actually say that if i ever saw up close I would probably cream my panties right then and there. Although you probably didnt need to know that!! but fuck thats just how good that car is!

 

Im loving this story btw, Bella is a bad ass!! :D

 



Author's Response:

ARH! Right there next to you sister, the creaming and all included. lol! That car is better than a man...well most men but still thats how sweet that car is. *sigh*

Thanks hon!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

I'm sure Edward will enjoy. Ah...Bella I wanted the lamb * le sigh* . Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

Dame this is all too much fun....and Mike.. Ew.!.. Okay girls let's make prude Edward squirm *giggles*. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Go Bella...tease and torture Edward. Oh and Emmett, I love ya!....thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Yes!...you go girl!.. Emmett you are hilarious!..and Edward if I were you I would be happy. Torture can be good, even the painful kind. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

OMG!..that was HoT!...poor Edward. Let the torture begin *giggles*. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Oh...oh..Edward you better be ready because its on. Bella is piss off. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

Nah....Edward deserves what's coming. Sorry Edward, but its true. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Bella is right about Alice. Alice was her friend and like a sister. I also love how Bella stood up to Rose. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

We all wish we had that much $..*le sigh*. So Bella is not to happy with Edward. He deserves it. Now he will have to beg *giggles*. I can't wait. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I love bad ass Bella. And Emmett is freaking hilarious. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I love bad ass Bella. And Emmett is freaking hilarious. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I finally caught up with my reading!!  Yay!

Love this chapter.  Izzy and Edward as equals.  Lemons coming???  Oh, my!  lol



Author's Response:

LOL well that makes one of us...my reading is...how you say...out of freakin control!!!.

Thanks honey glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I love the bike, and the tattoo. Edward is going to flip when he sees Bella. I think he won't stay away anymore. I love it all. Thanks!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is so cool. Bella is a bad ass. I can't wait to read what Edward will say. And I love how Emmett stood up to Rosalie. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: katiepattz (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

ahhh! i love your story so far. just started reading. :]

Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was wondering if you had anyother chapters completed? If so, please let me know. I LOVE this story and cannot wait to see the outcome!! swarfield@amh.org. Happy Writing!!

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

booyah! lol

Reviewer: worth_it (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I laughed, I cried, I loved.

AMAZING!!!

XXjXX

Reviewer: Pink Lemonade (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Thanks so much for sharing your story!  I have been meaning to read this and just caught up with the story!  I will be sure to review each subsequent chapter - I am really late to the party and just wanted to catch up!  There is so much chatter about your story and the hype is deserved!  I love bad ass Bella...I mean Izzy!  Thanks again for letting me enjoy your writing.  You are so amazingly talented!

Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

chuckles all round.

thats a sweet chapter.

 

so will the girls get to have ANY fun playing the guys?

please say yes.

Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Why did I wait so long to read this?

I love you characters, your plot, every little joke and sassy comment. I can't wait for an update with a citrus smell... :D

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Good stuff...  i hope there are a few more chapters of it coming!!! :-)

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