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Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

As always good chapter.  Looking forward ot more.

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

Good chapter.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Thanks for Bella's POV. Its always good to hear both sides. Now I'm very excited and kind of jittery *giggles*. I also can smell the yummy citrus. I'm looking forward to their date. I do hope Bella gets to use all the stuff they bought with Alice. They can tears Edward in a good kind of way..LOL!!. Love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

I think it is that they are both equals and that Edward needs to love himself. Thanks for this really incredible story. I guess in this story I kind of like Tanya. She did help Edward find himself. Edward and Bella do need to take it slow. Oh and I'm sure Alice will forgive them both. I love it all!

Reviewer: sagoins (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

I know that this was posted a while ago but I'm a new reader and there is something that I have to say...You are one sick puppy!!! and I LOVE IT!!  I've had a huge smile on my face ever since I started reading this story!

Reviewer: sagoins (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I just started reading this story and I'm addicted!!  I LOVE the "bad-ass" Bella (Iz) so much that its silly!  You are awesome!! :D

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

Yep. We do miss our emo Edward. Thanks for a little Jacob. I love him, not as much as Edward though. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: lilmama27 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

That was great!!!!!!!! You Rock!!!!!!!!!!! I have never laughed so much!!! You are doing an awesome job please finish I am on the edge of my seat!!!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Haha, I don't know what was better the chapter or that ending AN, lol. Now, I'm all excited for lemons coming up! As well as mini-typhoons!

It was a very good idea in my opinion to have this chapter in both POVs. It really helped to understand the situation and the thoughts/feelings behind the actions of both of them.

I loved Jazz helping Iz out in the first part of it. Often my favorite parts of the story end up being not the Edward/Bella romantic moments, but the little family moments for Iz and the other Cullens, especially with my two favorite boys! But it was really good that he encouraged her to just feel. It makes you realize just how long that Iz has been shutting out her emotions or just focusing on one emotion, and how good it was for her well-being to just let go and feel.

I loved that Rose came to check on her and that we got to see another little side of Esme. And that Emmett laughs when he doesn't even know the joke. It was soo very Em, walking into the room full of laughing people and just joining in and THEN asking what was so funny.

Iz's dream was also awesome and really foreshadowing that conversation with Edward. Izzy really does hold his heart in her hands. And the conversation/reunion was just as great from her POV as it was from his.

Really pleased with myself that I was on track with there being more than one epiphany from all this. *pats self on back* ;D Absolutely still loving and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I liked reading it from Izzy's POV.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Zyla Nyx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Absolutely fantastic!!! I fell in love with Edward and Izzy all over again.  This was wonderfully written and incredibly witty.  I can't wait for the next update!  Thank you for helping me get lost in the world of Twilight once more<3

 

~Z

Reviewer: alicewhite3 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

i like it i think.

i'm just worried it's going to be emmett/bella, and i am not one for that pairing... so i'm nervous haha

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

Dame...this one hurt. And not for Edward. Bella did the right thing here. She showed him the pain. This was good in my eyes. And Alice also has a right to be piss. Thanks, I love it all, even if it made me sad *le sigh* .

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 20:Charlie

Aw...Charlie is awesome. Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Shocked, Yes!....but very happy that Bella was her own hero. I admit it, I was waiting for Edward, but this was SO MUCH BETTER!* jumps up and down *.. I LOVE IT. Thanks!!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

This is all good. I do wonder if Edward remembers Jacob from the prom. Thanks, I love it all!.... Now let's go beat down some newborns.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

Dame. I totally didn't see this coming. Thanks, I love it!...specially the kiss Edward gave Bella.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

Hmmm..* taps chin *...Now I'm confused … WTF! Edward... I don't think I agree with him. I feel that he will end up hurting Bella in this game. But any ways. I love it all, even their naughty little games. Thanks!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

Wow. This was intense. Dame Bella I think Edward has a right to be piss. Thanks, I love it all, even the angts.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

An Amazing chapter!. You gave us drama, bella the bad ass, whimpering Bella and all this in one chapter. Thanks!... I love me some Edward and Bella torture.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

K...I'm trading teams. I have a feeling Edward is going to win. Well if you think about it, they both will win. Thanks, I love it all.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

I love it. ugh, i just ate toons of chocolate and had a candy overdose.  so hurry up and brng tha lemon so i can feel better ;)

Reviewer: Pretty_Face (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

The Bugatti Veyron is my all time favorite car!!! I actually say that if i ever saw up close I would probably cream my panties right then and there. Although you probably didnt need to know that!! but fuck thats just how good that car is!

 

Im loving this story btw, Bella is a bad ass!! :D

 



Author's Response:

ARH! Right there next to you sister, the creaming and all included. lol! That car is better than a man...well most men but still thats how sweet that car is. *sigh*

Thanks hon!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

I'm sure Edward will enjoy. Ah...Bella I wanted the lamb * le sigh* . Thanks, I love it all!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

Dame this is all too much fun....and Mike.. Ew.!.. Okay girls let's make prude Edward squirm *giggles*. Thanks, I love it all!

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