Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
hehe I could just imagine Alice strutting back and forth, gesticulating wildly in her tirade about Izzy and Edward's behaviour! :)
Oh and OH SO GOOD to see them FINALLY get some lovin' at the end there.
Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Oh my gosh. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASEEEE tell me she doesnt really hate him!! My heart will break!
Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
I like the new bella (or should i say Iz) but i just hope she isnt a slut. that would totally ruin it.
Reviewer: cha0s (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
ah your stories are fucking amazing if i say so myself. i love how much of a badass you made bella. i love it, that one the one thing i hated in twilight was how much of a whiney person bella was. i would totally trade in your izzy for the book bella anyday. just think maybe jake would have ended up with leah instead of the demon baby. sorry tangent. have fun on your vacation, and thanks for the good smut. ps my theory is that her hyman broke in either when she was sparring or in a fight. you did well for your first smut keep up the good work
Author's Response: LOL I get what you mean about the demon baby! But I always thought that he would imprint on someone and May was perfect. She's human and I figured that maybe if I kept a lil of the devil spawn without the uterus chewing shit it would be okay!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
cuz you are dirty and I love you for it?
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEE you for it.
yup.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
DAMN!!! UPDATE!!! I NEED MORE IZZY AND EDWARD SEX!! Like, YESTERDAY!!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
It wouldn't be you if you if you didn't write like yourself and we all LOVE you for it! This was a freaking kick ass chapter and may I say it was about fuckin time Edward got on the sexin wagon...
Reviewer: ARenee363 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...
Aw, that was nice.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
it was GENIUS!! I LOVED IT. THIS EDWARD IS SOOOO DIFFERENT FROM THE OTHER. MUCH MORE ALIVE AND SPONTANEOUS. AWESOME. THEY MAKE A HECK OF A COUPLE.
SO BELLA DOESN'T WANT TO GET VAMPED OUT? WOW. WONDER HOW THAT'S GONNA GO OVER
Reviewer: ARenee363 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!
Yay for Jake not trying to get Bella back. haha.
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Wow that was some lemoney goodness!
I totally loved reading about Edward's struggle to keep it together. Was hoping for a little pillow biting but hey... it was just their first time... maybe next time will be a little rougher... like the whole shower bit... Pervward!!!
Seriously though, I am totally diggin' the dirty talkin', likes it rough, sex god Edward. Can't wait to read more about him!
You had said that this was your first time writing some smutty goodness, you did a good job!
Totally lovin' your story keep it up! Any word on some more Vamp ass kickin'?
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I didn't have pain either, but he was literally a "two pump chump". LOL. I think you did a great job with the smut. It's not always easy, and I know I felt a little self-conscious when I wrote my first lemon. But I love how you wrote it--the new Edward that has more confidence in himself and Izzy, but still a touch of the old Edward. And I really liked how he shrugged off the bruises instead of freaking out. I wanted to kick him in the butt with that crap in BD (even though I liked the book).
Reviewer: sagoins (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I love this story so much!! I love the person Izzy has become as a result of the Cullens leaving her...you are a genius!!
Keep up the great work!!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
LOL! Great chapter - I need to go take a cold shower now, though!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
ha ha ha i love this chapter.
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
loved the chapter cant wait for the next one! ,, i love this new edward!
Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Wow i think my panties are wet from that chapter i loved it
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Wow, what a chapter.
Love that Jasper is helping to orchestrate things! He's such a great friend/brother.
Good to see Edward's got a kinky side on him, it makes things more fun!
Thanks!
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Great chapter! Have fun on your vacation! :)
Reviewer: Irrevocably_Yours (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
HAHAHA YOU SO LOVED WRITING DIRTY THAT WHY ALICES TANTRUM WAS SO SHORT HAHAHAHAAH OK SO GOOD STUFFYS THE SECOND LEMONEY FRESH SCENE COULDA BEEN LONGER *DUCKS* BUT JUSY CUZ I LIKE DIRY EDWARD *WIGGLES EYEBROWS* X'S AND O'S
Reviewer: Robs_Muse (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Oh very nicely written! I LOVED the fact he took what he wanted, how he wanted and Izzy freakin loved it! *fanning myself*
Keep it coming sister! Umm pun intended. Well, see, your in good campany when it comes to sounding dirty. *wink*
Thank you!
*bouncing and clapping wildly like a certain pixie we know*
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I'm not buying that she would want to grow old. If she loves him and saved herself for him, she would want to spend forever with him.
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I don't know...maybe cause you're thinking naughty thoughts, or it could just be that your mind is in the gutter :P I like this Edward :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
I'm so proud of Spankward (sniff), he's come such a long way! I guess the next hurtle is immortality? Is Edward selfish enough now to take her anyway?
Reviewer: epwatts_85 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
no pain my first time either
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