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Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

Totally panting.

I love that she thinks she's getting away with something.

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

Wow.  Risky, in lots of ways.  Did she think could control how that stunt would end?  Just, wow.

Oh, yeah.  Thought of another song for your playlist.  Kinda old school (again).  'Mama Said Knock You Out'  The best line EVER, 'Don't call it a comeback!'

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

Insanely jealous.

Edward is all in her head now.  Too fun!!

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

Suh-blime.  I can't wait to see where this goes....

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

Of course he'll enjoy.  Heck, we'll enjoy it.

No way will he be a good student.  He will need a little extra discipline.  (Oh please, please, please let him need some extra discipline!)

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

Garrr. Grrreat fun, getting the ladies to gang up on Edward. Shiver me timbers.

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Okay, songs.  Hmmm.

You could go all old school like, 'Long Cool Woman in a Black Dress' or 'Hate Myself for Loving You'.

The Spill Canvas has a song that's pretty apropros called 'Break a Leg'.  It ends with them singing the line, 'Not even hell could be hotter than you right now' over and over about a girl who's driving him crazy.

I'll continue to ponder....

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

Top notch chapter.  I love seeing the Cullens get their groove back, bickering, teasing, laughing.  Edward better start his penance now because it's gonna be a long way back to good for him!!

 

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

Great revenge.  Diabolical idea executed like a pro.  Well, except for that momentary hitch.  You know, when she almost didn't stop.  That's a good sign....

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

Be careful what you wish for because you just might get it!  I wonder if Edward has any clue what he will get along with the girl of his fantasies?  I'm guessing not a single clue.

Moving on....  ;)

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

gahhh, i'm wondering where you're heading with this.. so she's not going to become a vampire?...

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

my first wasn't painful.. it's scientifically possible. we were lucky and we were born with a hymen... thus no breaking needed.. thus no pain.

Reviewer: HinderGoddess (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Love it!!

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

I love this chapter.  LOVE it.  Lemon+hilarity+a bear getting its ass kicked.  Definite win.  Have an awesome vacation!

Reviewer: dark_shadow (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Wow... that was simply amazing. After spending a few weeks away from Twilighted... wow that was fantastic to come back and read....

Hehehe oh yes Edwardo is in trouble... but not bad trouble for sure...

 

I like your writing style Jay Jay Hale, very... very... much... ;)

 

Haha can't wait till you get back from your vacation!

Reviewer: -brunettemommy- (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

i know i'm not very far into the story yet, just finished chapter eight, but i don't like this bella. :( i get he hurt her, and for that she has the right to be mean and angry, but she is just a down right bitch!!! ugh..

 

you write amazingly though! :) can't wait to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

dissapointed you used the C word but i'll get over it......and im pretty sure people say more than "oh edward" its not passionate enough!!! but hey it's not my story.

 

great stuff tho, i giggle alot with this story!

Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

naughtyward may just be the hottest out there atm. srsly

Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!

i seriously love badass bella

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

ok, ill trust you. but you have to update soon!!i love it, btw.

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

Ok, I admit it. Emmett squealing makes me laugh out loud.

 

I just started reading this story this morning and I can't get enough.

 

 

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

LOVE IT So Far!!!

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

love this story! it is great! I love your bad ass Bella!! awsome!!! (how is that for exclamation marks?) thanks for the story again...

Reviewer: xlozalinx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

bloody brill

Reviewer: arlene86 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

Finally!!!!!!!! Love, love, LOVED it! Great chapter! 

I'm a little sad about Bella not wanting to spend eternity with Edward though. I can see her views about it, but come on! It's immortality. Having hot hot sexy time with hot sexy hot Edward. 

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