Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
Speaking of condoms, are Edward and Izzy practicing safe sex? I didn't see any mention of that so far. Hmmm.....
I'm really hooked to the story so I really hope the weeks pass by soon so we get another update.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Well, I think it was very sweet that he was concerned that she was more "experienced" than he was. That whole part was really cute. I didn't read anything about how Edward got naked though. Just the part about Izzy. Not sure about that.
I do hope that Izzy changes her mind about becoming a vampire though. Rock hard, beautiful, forever 17 Edward just seems creepy to be having lemons with a wrinkly, old lady. I don't know what anyone else thinks about that, but it's just kind of oogie and gross to me. I'm hoping he can convince her otherwise or that she'll at least decide it on her own. Don't get me wrong, I love her strength and independence as a human and that she isn't always the damsel in distress, but I don't want to see her get old and die. That would be sad and such a waste!
Love this story though.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows
Ha! Love the chapter end notes! Clever... and I can't wait for the lemony goodness that's about to come!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Loved Bella's arguement for Alice, damn right, you go Bella!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Loved Bella's arguement for Alice, damn right, you go Bella!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Love kick-ass Iz. Is Jacob offended by the pelt?
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
I lover this from EMpov! A great start to this story.
Reviewer: AmethystAndWisteria (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm joining this story a little late in the game.
An intriguing start and very well written. I'm wondering what happened to Bella to make knocking teeth out such a casual event. It normally takes witnessing a lot of violence to change a personality that much. I'm sure you'll tell us though. :)
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
i love your fic. can't wait for your return <3
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well it seems she can finally stick up for herself... and the best part is she's still human! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
i loved it.
another amazing chapter.
the bear getting kicked in his ass, and then esme and carlise coming across it, freaking priceless. :) one of my favorite parts, I really couldnt stop laughing.
Reviewer: Angie_Kay (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
really good.
and i understand what you're saying, there wasnt any pain my first time either, ahaha, its good to be very open about it.
I REALLY LIKED THIS. :)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
*wipes a tear away * has it been a month? thoroughly hope your enjoying your vaca but know that your creativity is missed!!!
Reviewer: Char (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss
This really retarded squeaking sound comes through my lips every time I press the 'Next' button...
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
*wipes a tear away * has it been a month? thoroughly hope your enjoying your vaca but know that your creativity is missed!!!
Reviewer: nurselisa (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
I love mean Bella. A totally unexpected change from everything else I have read.
Reviewer: nurselisa (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just read the first chapter! Love it and can't wait to go on... I really like how it starts out with Emmet's perspective.
Reviewer: cathprice (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow love it!!!!
Reviewer: ineke (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
really loved this story .Thanks for writing it.How is the pragnancy coming along.
greetings ineke.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Lemony goodness!!! Great chapter, and count me in with the people who really didn't have much pain the first time either. Loved the shower/bathroom scene too! The sweetness during their first time was not expected and I loved it! So glad Izzy waited for Edward.
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed
Go Izzy! Throwing it back at Edward and making him feel what she felt!!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play
Bella is definitely one badass bitch! I love that she killed Victoria herself!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
Can't believe Carl was a werewolf! Craziness!! Loved the WIlly Wonka reference. Can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood
Wow! Great chapter! Loving this story!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
Loving the new Edward!!!
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