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Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
Great story I LOVED it
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen
I think the Denali clan took her
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
wtg good job hot izzy
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
great start
Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just started reading fanfic again and im loving your story! hook, line, and sinker!
Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just started reading fanfic again and im loving your story! hook, line, and sinker!
Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just started reading fanfic again and im loving your story! hook, line, and sinker!
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's
Uh hu Naughtyward.....totally jealous.
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
But I like this Edward.....ha ha ha.
Reviewer: isa2346 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts
Ah I don't like that Izzy bad ass behavior. But lets see where you are heading.
Reviewer: asherss (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
this is a great chapter
Reviewer: Nathyette (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
I really enjoyed this story. You've transformed Bella into a strong, intriguing character, which makes her very much more likeable. In the original series, she was portrayed as more of a victim than a heroine, and I admired this more substantial version of Bella. Your characterization in general was very warm and effective, which made for quite a captivating story.
Funnily enough, I didn't mind the short-cut continuation, as you managed to evoke a sweet sense of closure in the final chapter, which was somewhat remarkable considering that you leaped from pretty intense climactic plot to a sentimental "happy ending". The ending, however, wasn't clichéd or impetuous, so it was satisfying to see how Edward and Bella's existence is ultimately contentful. :)
Btw, I adored your sense of humour, especially as far as Emmett is concerned. He really is an endearing character. xD
Overall, congrats for your well-written work. And good luck with your kids. :D
Reviewer: Sweet_Alchemie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow loved how quickly you got into the story...can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
I loved the waterhole sex. I also like how Edward is rough with her and that it turns bad girl izzy on. Edward and iz should fuck on her ducatti....mmmm
Reviewer: MRS TWILIGHT (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
This made me cry laugh and it pissed me off lol i love it
Reviewer: rachiegrl6 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World
I kinda really like badass bella... oops I mean Izzy. :D
Reviewer: Snuze (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
loving the fic - great pace and it is good to read something with no angst for a change!
Your chapters are much better written now. I like your style.
One itty bitty point. There is a difference between your and you're. Everything is so well done, seeing an error like that kind of spoils it. just a little.
looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: Snuze (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
bad ass Bella - I like it!
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight
Hi
I have just read this from chaper one to chapter 38 - I really loved it.
I am so pleased that everything worked out for Bella and Edward.
I was pleased that Bella gave Edward a hard time - I like the way they got back to gether in the film but still felt Edward got of lightly.
Am now going to add you as a Favourite Author and check out any other stories you have published.
Reviewer: cuddly vampire teddybear (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found
Oh Alice. What a fun vision. And I have enjoyed a sassier Esme. She's fun!
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)
As much as I don't like Edward calling Bella a bitch they are cute in a very weird way.
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Should be interesting once the Cullens know what's going on. alice will be pissed that's for sure.
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 34:New Life
This is crazy. Naked in the snow luvin'. I never woulda' thunk it...
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