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Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

I love this story so! Please keep it comin'!!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

Oh God!  I'm officially in love with you!  You are the most awesome, creative, amazing writer!  I can't stop reading this story, even if I tried.  I want the translation and I don't message board.  Can you send it please?  I'll beg on my knees!

Reviewer: artzyme1122 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Ok Ok I think jasper and Emmett are in it.....O man i don't know, But i love love love the twists....

I'm so confused please please update soon : )

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

It's too sad! You'll have me sobbing for another week!

OK, so someone is building an army of newborns? They figured out how long after death it takes before the transformation process doesn't work anymore? Or they administered drugs to make them all look dead before they change them?

You're making me desperate! I need Bella! (not to overreact about it, lol!)

Great twist! Your whole story is full of great twists! Thank you!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

hang on i get the feeling izzs not dead or is that wishful thinking???

wtm

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

It's too sad! You'll have me sobbing for a week!

OK, so someone is building an army of newborns? They figured out how long after death it takes before the transformation process doesn't work anymore, or they administered drugs to make them look dead...

You're making me desperate! We need Bella! (not to overreact about it, lol) Great twist! Your whole story is full of great twists! Thank you!

 

 

Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

It's too sad! You'll have me sobbing for a week!

OK, so someone is building an army of newborns? They figured out how long after death it takes before the transformation process doesn't work anymore, or they administered drugs to make them look dead...

You're making me desperate! We need Bella! (not to overreact about it, lol) Great twist! Your whole story is full of great twists! Thank you!

 

 

Reviewer: passionmama (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

I'm still confused as to why a vegetarian and a normal vampire would abduct Izzy.  Hopefully, next chapter.....

Reviewer: wendilili (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

this is awesome Ilove it please continue writing :)

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

great part

Reviewer: Miho (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

some crazzzyyyy, fishhyyyy shit happening.....

Edward's acting weird, I think he knows what's up with Izzy.

 

hurry up and post some more :]

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Maybe Jane or Alec?  Loving were this is going!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Really going to need an explanation on this one.  Kept feeling like I had read it backwards or something...confused...

Hope you enlighted me soon...

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Bella is going to be a zombie! Awesome. Grrrr. Arggg.

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Wow, I am more confused than ever...leave it to you to keep us all in suspense.  And yet, it's so much fun to come back for more!  Love the twists and turns this story is taking!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

I am so glad you will explain soon cuz with everthing going on I'm a little confused. Will the Cullen's find Bella? Will she still be human?

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

I think Edward stole Izzy (or got someone to steal her for him) as well as the other 5 bodies to make it less obvious.  Alice sees him going to Denali for several days...enough time for Izzy to be changed.

Just my prediction:)

Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

:)

Jasper and Emmett are up to something....

Good chapter dear, as usual!

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Hmmm...black market, or did those vamps give her something to slow her heart rate down to make her appear dead so they could change her?  Interesting twist.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

wow that is just a wow moment i didnt know how whoever it was would get the body out but wow stealing other bodies to help it look less suspicous i thought it was one of the denalis and laurent or somebody like that but who knows except you the wonderful brilliant author and hopefully soon us haha love the chapter and as always love the story :D

Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

SOOOO CONFUSING!!! But cool all the same :)

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

ooooooooo! I can't wait to see who it is. I love this story.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

i love this story.

Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

I think Edward knows or at least suspects what is going on. He was entirely to calm to think otherwise. The Edward we know would have gone all Emoward and been distraught, mopey,and suicidal. This Edward's first thought was to comfort Alice and reassure Esme. SSomething fishy going on here! Update soon, I can't wait to see what's REALLY going on.

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen

Ok I'm waiting to reserve judgement to see what's going on - cuz my mind is gone and I have no clue!!

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