Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's
Bella needs to be careful and not let Edward know he's affecting her if she wants to continue torturing him.
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
That was crazy. I wasn't expecting her to do that.
And then Jasper talking about breaking ALice in half. Hilarious!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.
That was crazy. I wasn't expecting her to do that.
And then Jasper talking about breaking ALice in half. Hilarious!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts
That was awesome. I love how the girls are all getting along.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 31: Ashes to Ashes
I'm very curious about that three day blank period...and where Izzy's body is...and where the other bodies are and why they were taken...and who the Red Eyes were...so many questions!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!
Love it! I hope Alice and Rose help Iz.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 30:Stolen
I hope this doesn't tear the Cullen family apart like when Edward left Izzy the first time...I don't think poor Esme could take it! I'm very interested to find out about the other bodies, though...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...
Love Esme's comment in this chapter...“Emmett, why are you naked?”.
That cracked my shit up.
Also, I just love Emmett.
Your writing is incredible and this story is sad but hilarious.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night
Hmm...my mind is going a mile a minute. So much going on there...the Volturi, perhaps? I did feel really bad for Renee, though.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 28:Limbo
I hope she's being changed...that must have been heartbreaking for Bella to be stuck like that and unable to respond.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again
The Cullens cracked me up in that chapter. God I love them. Can't wait to see what Izzy does to Edward while living there. Hopefully she's make him suffer with some nakedness he can't have.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever
Uh oh! My guess is that they'll have to get Izzy out of the hospital somehow, and take her away to change. I'll just have to keep reading to find out!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen
OMG, what Bella did to Edward was fucking awesome!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex
I loved Emmett and the bear! Too funny :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 7:Welcome Home Bella, oops I mean Izzy!
I love happy endings but I can't wait for Bella to let Edward have it!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan
Good for Bella! Can't wait for Edward's reaction.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling
Yea! That was very, very hot. I'm so glad that Edward and Izzy had the house to themselves...that vampire family is a bunch of cockblockers for immortal creatures who can hear everything...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion
Interesting reunion. Good for Bella for telling Alice exactly how she felt.
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
OMG, wasn't expecting the werewolf skin. That's an awesome twist to the story. Can't wait to find out what Edward's reaction is going to be.
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!
I feel sorry for Bella knowing the pain that caused her to become like this but I love badass Bella!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment
Awesome! God I just love this Bella!!!!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
This story has been on my to do list for awhile. Awesome first chapter. Bella is a badass. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: vivi4567 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night
WHat? What? What?
Reviewer: vivi4567 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 27:Izzy is Lost Forever
don't let her die !!!!!!!! i am going to continue reading but if she dies and doesnt get changed NO NO NO
Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!
Yeah! Love bad ass Bella!!! :-D
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