Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
lol i love your stuff (the writing)
your awesome
love u
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
awesome chapter! We see now why he was acting so weird at the funneral. I Loved the lemon. Rough sex always good!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
What fun!
She is NOT Bella anymore...that's for sure...
MINE! Yes, a very nice thought indeed...
Kathie
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
nice
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Wow! Edward, whata animal. I like it . I can't wait to see what happens, next.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Love it! Hot hunting nookie, minimal but meaningful convos, shield ponderings, and the segueway into the funeral chapter (which is probably one of my most favorite just cause everyone is so pissed off at Edward and Tanya.)
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Loved the chapter....
Reviewer: Vermouth (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
excellent story!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
You promised a ...sweet citrousy lemon in this chapter and you did not disappoint me. That was sweet and juicy. Vampire sex is best.
"... You can’t go back to being Emo-ward on me.” That was hilarious.
“Tomorrow morning it is. My woman has to at least send me off with a bang.” Edward is horny and corny. Emmett would be so proud. lol.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Hot, angry, possesive Edward-can it get any better?
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Loved this update! The explanation of why Edward shows up with Tanya at the funeral finally makes the situation make sense.
Love too that Bella was able to call Edward on his emo-ness. I'm sure that a bit of vamp sex didn't hurt either...
Eager to read of Bella reuniting with the Cullens.
Reviewer: Samic (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
I thought that Tanya got Edwards venom - she and fred talked about it before he went into her room.??
I;m probably imagining things again or am confused with a different story.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Loved this chapter! Guess we'll be back to witnessing Bells funeral!
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Great chapter. Love the lemons!
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
fun times giving in to their nature!!!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
I loved Izzy's random thoughts throughout the chapter; they made me giggle.
I love Tanya and Freddie as well.
Alice.x
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
can't wait for more
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Thahks for this new chapter, bella calling edward emoward make me lmao.
Love seeing this two rebound!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
What you said about Tanya saying 'gross' EXACTLY what i thought! jeez girl make your mind up!
lovin it as per usual, and just enjoying the riiide! lol im slightly crazy today :P :D
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
As always, this makes wonderful reading, I love newborn feisty Bella
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Emmett would be so proud of that comment Edward made!! (My woman has to at least send me off with a bang.) Hell, I am even proud of him!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Great chapter! I love possesive Edward! He can claim me anytime he wants. can't wait for more!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
Whew! That lemon was HOT, I think I may have even snarled at the sceen. I can't help it, I love it when Edward goes all caveman. I thought he was gonna rip Freddie a new one there for a minute. Hehe. I'm trying to picture Edward fighting him nude.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation
The caribou don't sound like that much fun to hunt. I'm thinking polar bears would be a bit more exciting.
Poor Emmett, though. Can't wait for the Cullen's to come face to face with Z soon.
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