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Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

*sits there blinking slowly*...it...it...why....over.... Welll, as long as you say there is going to be a sequel, I'm ok with that



Author's Response:

Lol...sorry! I explained everything in chapter 37's A/N. And there is definitley a sequel!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Did you have Edward actually SLAP Bella? Even in "fun"? 

Sorry. But that killed it for me. 



Author's Response:

No...I had him slap Izzy. You have to remember Izzy is not Bella. She enjoys fighting...and I made sure that he didn't do it hard. It's just the same as if he were to smack her ass!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

I seriously love how your mind works too!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

wow

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

yes yes jealous yes jealous!!!  Bella is the luckiest bitch on the face of the planet!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

Oooo let the games begin!  fun fun

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

Nice gifts!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

hilarious and fun!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 10: And so the games begin...

Great chapter - oh the wisdom of Emmett!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 9: Dying Again

I can't help it.  I feel sorry for Edward. 

Reviewer: southerndaisy (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

Though I am sad to see this one end....I completely understand.  Congrats on the new little one, and enjoy your family.  I look forward to the sequel, but take your time....we'll be here waiting for ya.  Thank you for this story....Izzy kicks it.

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 8: Poor, Poor Edward Cullen

so awesome!!!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 6:What the hell happened to Bell Swan

yikes

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

this is so incredibly different - its refreshing

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

oh the shits about to hit the fan

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

still awesome and a bit scary!  what happened to our sweet bella?

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Family Reunion

Still trying, still trying but it's difficult.  I did like the exchange with Rose.

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

fucking awesome!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow - not what I expected - better.

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bikes, Cars and Ugly Rugs!

How did Bella know werewolves block Alice's visions?  The shape shifters wouldn't have known that since Alice's gift is unique.  How did Bella get Alice's phone number?  Do I need to suspend more disbelief? 



Author's Response:

No Bella found out about the shapeshifters...and then decided to do some research. She found out more about werewolves as a result and dicovered that they prevent vampires power from working. She had wanted one to keep Alice from accidently seeing anything that Bella did. And Bella never got anyones phone number...the seer had already dialled it and gave the phone to Bella!

 

Does that answer everything???

 

Let me know!

 

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 3: Scariest Place EVER!

I can't imagine how this version of Bella & Edward can ever find their way back to each other.  ? 

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Reckless Abandonment

I'm curious as to why Alice can no longer see Bella.  ?

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

I never read stories where Edward didn't at least decide to go back to Bella.  It's just too painful.  However I'm willing to suspend that hurt for a bit and continue reading since I DO love me some Badass Bella.  That outweighs unrepentent Edward.

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

Sounds like a plan!  Take care of yourself, and we'll await the sequel eagerly! 

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

I will miss you while you are gone! Have fun with the new addition!!!!! Thank goodness they know about izzy!

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