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Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

i loved every min of it


Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I can't believe it's over but I'm definately looking forward to the sequel. Enjoy your new baby. Lots of love to you!!!!

Reviewer: pasha (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Will Bella and edward ever have a baby?

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

That was a great funny, touching, hilarious chapter!

Thanks, ever so much, for sharing your talent with us.


Author's Response:

Aw shucks...thanks soo much for being with me along this journey!


Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Loved the ending --- this story came in with a bang and went out with a hearty laugh and its fantastic. Can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

Absolute fun!  Love it!

Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

It was great to finally read about sex between the two of them that wasn't following the canon exactly.  I liked the rawness of it.  This really isn't Bella at all - she is 100% Izzy.  And Edward is definitely not the same either - it's a little hard to believe that he could be changed so much.  I like your explanation though - the soulmate link between them makes him change for her and her change for him.

I hate that Bella wants to remain human.  Where's her sense of adventure?  I thought she'd been to hell and back and would always throw caution to the wind. It's almost as if life couldn't get worse - why not become a vampire?

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I laughed so hard when I read the "Breaking Dawn" part of this chapter.  How ridiculous the characters think it would be.  Your story was awesome, bb, and I loved every minute of reading it.  Thanks for the shout-out too!  


xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: ContemptuousCullen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I enjoyed the ending.  I'm sorry to see this story end but I am looking forward to the sequel.  I like the personality that you gave the characters especially "Izzy", she rocks.  Until next time.............

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

VERY cute ending!!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow...probably one of my most FAVOURITE authors just offered to pm me...which hardly anyone does...i feel so honoured..and i dont mean to sound sarcastic i fi do! :D:D:D thanks!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I'm sorry to see this end but I am looking forward to the sequel.  However,  get the baby born first and enjoy for a while. 

I loved the fantasy, especailly about Bella getting pregnant.  Pretty farfetched if you ask me.  lol. 

Thanks for a great story. 



Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight


Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

great chapter! i love the way you ended it!

Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

OH my god! I can't believe the end is finally here. And I loved the last line. Hilarious. I fucking love your emmett.

I can't wait for the sequel too. I just can't get enough of Izzy!!

Reviewer: duchess_of_malta (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

You're awesome. :) thanks for entertaining us this long -I thinkyou're going to end at a good spot.

Reviewer: Great Chemistry (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

The whole what-if section had me completely rolling in laughter! I couldn't even begin to explain it to my friends who were in the room with me. This is my first review for you, but I've been a faithful lurker for a while now. I think I saw it listed through PTB... I am so glad I found this story, and I will definitely be on the lookout for the sequel. Best wishes for your growing family!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Great chapter!

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

excellent story loved it and I am looking forward to the sequel!

Reviewer: Swangirl666 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

I loved this story so much! Hope all goes well with the bambino - I am 7 months pregnant too! Can't wait for the sequel. xxxx

Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

This was awesome....I want to know what will happen with Izzy and Edward later...Congrats on the baby and good luck....

Why did Edward kiss Tanya again?

Reviewer: pink_photographer (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Wow! I like breaking dawn but I do have a sense of humor too and I can totally laugh at it. So it was funny what you did...:P

Anyways- Awesome story!


What is the sequel going to be about? Any major drama or just these new vamp cullens with comedy and fun?


Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

Yay!  I loved it.  Good luck with the new little one.  I ahve three also, and honesty the third was the easiest to adjust too!

Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

this was an awesome story,great job :D

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 38:Twilight

i smiled the whole time and laughed the whole time reading this

loved emmett omg and izzy so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! perfect

cheers *smiling*

it was Amazing, it ended how it should have, I can’t wait for the sequel

I’m so sad it end it was an amazing story

And I will always remember

I just loved it, it was amazingly perfect I love this story it had the perfect ending, perfect everything *babbling sorry*

you are an amazing author and this a very long chapter but totally worth it you did everything I wanted it was perfect

If I could I would give you an award or something to show you how amazing this story was from the writing to the feeling to the detail all in all amazing

I don't know what more to say it was amazing I’m so glad I read this story

Well until next time mbellaandedwardm good luck with your next story I’m positive it will be a success

 i wil be reading your sequel thanks for the opportunity

bye until next time

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